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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
it was awesome
n i was🤣 wen i read
Kya tum mere sath party mein chaloghi,see maine tumhare lia yea football bhi laya hai upfronting his hand he showed it to her..
lol piddi..
loved it so much...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 yaar👏
Plz do pm me wehever u continue
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Part Two

( Realization )

[2]

It was almost 2PM..almost everyone left the academy..Panchi waiting, as her Best friend Ranveer asked her to wait as he had told her to wait after school, as usual he may be had forgotten but Panchi always waited for him, so today was no different as she knows nomatter how much late he gets,he'd come, Definitely come..

Hey Panchi..Someone called from behind..Panchi looked back & it was Samar..

Hey nawab shab? Kaise hai app..😊

Hum badiya..waise app itne late kya karrahi hai yehan per.??

Arre,I was waiting for Ranveer..tumne usse dekha hai..?

Ranveer toh ajkal amabass k chand bana huya hai per hogha yehan kahin..

Panchi..yeah..accha yea batao tum yehan kya karrae ho..Ghar nahin jana?😊

Haan jana toh hai per apphi ki tarha hum bhi Ranveer ka hi intezaar karrahe hai..

Oh!..She Paused..'Kyun? Kuch kaam tha usse..?'

Haan.Woh usne sayed Reha k lia kuch mangwa hai..wohi usse dena hai.

Panchi noticed that when Samar came,he had something in his hand but didn't bother to ask & now she knows what it is.

Samar : Yea sab sodiye,yea bataiye Party mein aa rahi hai na app..?

Panchi was thinking so it took her a while to response..

Samar : Panchi..Thik hain?

Panchi : Oh yeah..tum kuch puch rahe the?

Samar : Haan,I was asking if you are coming to the party?

Panchi : No yaa.."ll be busy at home so can't..

Samar : Oh! Aur yehan hum soch rahe the,I'd ask you to come along ?

Samar : Aww,Why me? kisi aur ko le jao na..


By the time both have started walking..

Samar : Arre yaar,It better to be with a known enemy than a unknown friend..😛

Panchi : What,Am I your enemy? Panchi asked cutely.To which Samar laughed..

Samar : Actually was kidding just to define my situation..

Waise bhi apko pata toh hai hum har kisi k sath nahin jattein..Ab hummari friend Ranveer toh busy hai aur kise ladke sath jana in such a party itne happening bhi nahin lagena nahin?

He said it in such a way Panchi couldn't help but laugh..

So should I take it as a yes,That you are coming with me?

Panchi genuinely didn't want to go but Samar being her friend & he asked so cutely she thought why not,Kiya was also saying she can do it for her friends & it might be the last time they all 'd be together so for someone like Reha she shouldn't miss being with friends..

Samar was standing up-fronting his hand,So finally she said yes,giving her hand to her..

Lil' did she know,Ranveer had arrived few mins back.. & was kind of shocked to see Samar asking his best friend out & lil ' did he understand he was getting jealous of seeing these 2 holding hands & saying,Yes's..Just then when it was getting 'enough' to handle for him,He just called Panchi's name out loud..

Oh ! Hi Ranveer..Samar greeted..

Ranveer : Hi- Tu yahan pe kya karraha hai..aur you brought that na what I asked you to get?

Samar : Haan bhai..yea lijiye apki..

He couldn't finish his line,Ranveer took it out of his hand already..

Ranveer : Haan to ab jayiye..

Panchi till now was just standing in the middle of the 2boys & was getting confused of Ranveer's behavior..She had never seen him talking to Samar like this,It was no way looking funny,atleast to her..

But Samar didn't mind coz he didn't get it at all..moreover the royal is too good to be understand Ranveer's mood swings when it comes to Panchi & he knew it so never really bothered..

Samar : Okay brother..Okay ! Panchi..I 'll take your leave as well but Sharp @

7pm,done?

Done',Panchi said with a smile.

It was getting way too much for Ranveer to see them like this..so finally he started..

Ho gaya tum loghoka deal,Done,Can we leave now..

Before any of the two could say anything,Ranveer draged Panchi with him leaving Samar alone..to which Samar just nodded his head & left for home.

* Panchi,Ranveer in common room..*

Wait yaa..Whats wrong? Upset hai kya, Nonu ?'

'Ranveer was looking down & Panchi was watching him almost in a same manner to figure out what happen..

Ranveer asked (Looking down,... still)

Tu Party mein aa rahi hai?'

'Haan,who pahele socha k nahin but now….

Now what? Abhi aa rahi hai?'

He looked up & the tone of his voice was such as if he didn't want her to come..Panchi thought the same so she asked..

Why? You don't want me to come ?'😕

Ranveer didn't know what to answer for a moment..His jealousy of seeing Samar with his best friend was still high so he couldn't even tone down his voice nomatter how much he wanted..

'Who am I to say something to you,He said looking @ the other side..

Panchi felt bad,Ranveer never talked to her this way,nomatter how much tensed or irritated he was..but today he was being different..

May be Ranveer too knew Panchi was confused with his behaviour like he too is,so he finally turned towards Panchi.. & Said..

Anyway,leave it..I had brought something for you..😳

It was the same gift which Samar had told may be it was for Reha so Panchi was kind of awe-struck..

'

Take it na..aise kya dekh rahi hai..!


-No,nothing..actually I thought may be it was for Reha..as valentine day ..toh..

Toh..what… Can't I gift my best friend something?

Panchi smiled & about to take the gift but the very moment Ranveer took it away..

What? Mere lia hai na..to de?

Abhi bilkul dene ka maan nahin karraha..(He gets a reminder of Samar-Panchi's togetherness)

Accha toh rakh,mujhe nahin chahiye..(Panchi said acting sad,facing her back towards Ranveer)

After so much time Ranveer had a smile in corner of his lips.He hugged her from behind ,said-

Accha stop your nautanki & take it..Panchi smiled & was again about it take it but Ranveer asked if he can open it for her? To which she replied in positive..

Ranveer unwraped it being in that same position..& once he showed it to her she was amazed..

Nonu ! yea toh wohi..Tu le aya? Mere lia? Yaad tha tujhe? – now she was standing facing Ranveer.

Haan..sadly..🥱😆

Aww..Thank you..She hugged him..

Hugging eachother was not a big deal for them as it never made this two feel awkward.& noone's else could make them feel more comfortable than each others..& For friends like them.. gifts didn't matter but remembering the small things about them, their likes did matter.


Now Ranveer was fully fine,he hugged her back & tight & forgetting all the chaos which was going on till now in his head.. he was back in his self-

Okay..ab itni awe-struck type behave maat kar moti..It's just a clip !

'I know..but still thanks..:)

Haan tujhe yea itni pasand aa gayyi thi but as usual you were in hurry aur le nahin payi..toh maine le liya..

Thanks Nonu.. but yea bata Reha k lia kya lia? Maine toh socha tha Rehan k lia hai,Infact samar ko bhi..

''Samar kaha se aa gaya beech mein,,Yea main tere lia leker ayah u..woh baas ..mujhtak pauhauchwane ka kaam kar raha tha..

It was unusual of Ranveer that how he couldn't think of any thing else when Panchi just had taken Samar's name..

--Baas !"

'Per main toh..

Kya main toh..Tu Samar ko itni defend kyun karrahi hai aj haan?

Panchi : Defend?😛

Panchi was confused as Samar did nothing so that she needs to defend but she preferred to let go of it..

Accha baba thik hai..but yea toh bata,what you have brought for Reha..? By the time both have started walking out of the common room..

-Rehan k lia?Kuch nahin..Kyun?

-Arre kyu ka kya maatlab..You guys are dating..toh kuch to lana tha na..

Ranveer stopped walking,standing infront of Panchi,keeping his hands on her shoulder, he said.

Haan toh date hi toh karraha hu..per yea gifts fifts k jamele mujhse nahin hotein hai..samji Moti (touching her nose)

Accha abhi chal bohout late horaha hai..Chalta hu.. tub hi nikal abbhi..

He said running towards his cycle..while leaving he shouted.party mein milta hoon..

On the other hand,Panchi was still standing there having a sound smile on her face ..thinking.it was remembered by his best friend what she liked in a mall few days back & buy it for her but when it comes to buying a gift for his GF not so serious though he acts so childish..

For the world he's a stud but only she knew how he actually is..

She left for home.

*********

The night has arrived,Panchi had informed Kiya & Boby that she's going to the party & Samar 'd be picking her up so he'd be come along with Piddi,so Kiya & Boby can come over so that they all can go together,

Kiya,Boby @ Panchi's home.

'Oh God what to wear & what to not..' –Kiya talked to herself standing infront of mirror having 2red colored dresses in her hand while boby sitting on panchi bed.

'Kuch bhi pahele le waise bhi tu jyada kaha paheti hai..

Kiya shot an angry look at her- Shut up you losser..😡

Yea lo,kya galat kaha maine,tuhi dekh le dono drees ko mila kar zyada se zyada 1m. kapde ho honge,hai na Panchi..

Panchi had already selected the shoes for Kiya which would match any of the two outfit..

Oh shut up you guyz..We don't have much time left..So can we please get ready,said moving her eyes from Boby to Kiya..

& what are you doing Kiya.. Why so much confusion? She picked up one of the costume which would go perfectly with her shoes & accessories & said-

Just go with this..I think it's perfect..what you think?😛

I couldn't think Panchi that's why I was confused na.."

"next moment She said but I guess,actually not..It's just PERFECT"😃

She smiled & hugged Kiya..

Awww..lagh gayye phir se hug shug karne mein,,I was thinking we all were getting late..

Kiya said breaking the hug,Yeah we are but do something indifferent at a time & see what friendship is, apart from passing stupid remarks,She said looking at Panchi from Boby..

Boby : Oh really? Standing up..Toh fatty zara mujh per bhi apna friendship nisawar karle,,& tell me what should I wear..She looked at the bed which is currently filled with clothes..

Arre wah ! The great Boby is giving confuse looks that too for choosing cloths,that too girly?- Kiya laughed..😆

Oyye Kiya..Tu na..-She were almost coming her way to hit her but Panchi stoped & said-

Bobyyy ! wait,I'd help you..

In no time she had selected a dress which 'd suit Boby- well for the 1st time,the girl Boby.. perfectly..

Oh great yaa..Kiya said putting her elbow on Panchi's shoulder..

But don't you guyz think it's wayyy..too..short..-Boby said watching it closely while making faces..

Panchi : Boby,trust me,you goona look ravishing.. 😉

To which Boby replied okay,Just hope I don't look alean in it..

Woh tu waise bhi laghne wali hai..Kiya stated..

Boby : What..yaar yea..😕

Kiya : arre baba..I mean waise bhi you look alean in you tomboyish outfits but today you are goona look yourself—a girl..😉

Leave it guyz..Boby,you are goona look amazing..Trust me na..& go … get change..

You too Kiya..

She almost pushed the two in changing rooms..but Kiya looked back & asked..

How about you but..

Panchi : Don't worry.. I'll be changing into my outfit too..

Being the girl she is..She kept it all simple,She had chosen a Keen length one shoulder chiffon red color dress..along with matching accessories..that content a simple diamond ring & a gold chain with a pendent…A bracelet..

She choose to wear a black footwear in small heal ..& tied up her hair..with the hair clip which has suddenly become her favorite,as it's ovious-It was gifted by Ranveer..

Kiya & Boby already has come out out looking beautiful as they should look but more than anything these friends were stunned by the fact that how amazingly,all of a sudden Panchi was looking more mature than her age..She was not looking like a school going kid anymore..

Boby : Man ! Panchi,What did you do? She said keeping her mouth wide open..

Panchi by the time turned towards them..

-What?-She asked..

Dude ! Kiya..Now I wonder what 'd happen when once she'd be entering the party..

Yeah I can see the effect already as you too for the 1st time talking girl-sh..She said seriously.. but soon enough all 3 burst out laughing & closed themselves in a group hug.

C'on hurry up guys…they'd be coming here anytime..Panchi said white coming down to the staire..

Oh yeah-' followed by Kiya..

Arre ruko toh mere lia..Boby was finding it difficult to come down in those hills..(Paheli baar paheno toh aisa hi hota hai,nahin )

Arre come na.. Kiya dragged her with herself..

--Woh tum ladkiya ..how you guyz handel this thing..'

Jaise tu abhi karrahi hai.*paused* ."better than you " atleast.. observing Boby properly who was still struggling with the heals..

Arre no worries Boby..You'll manage,,said Panchi..

Yeah hope so..Boby said worriedly..😕

Meantime door bell ringed

Wait ! I'm opening it,said an excited Kiya..But sooner her excitement fade away once she found KD with Samar & Piddi..

Samar & Piddi already got in & greeted Panchi & Boby,Piddi was about to faint seeing Boby's new avater while KD was still standing outside looking handsome in red shirt & white pant..

Kiya : Tum? What you are doing here? (She almost shouted,though she herself was not sure,it was due to excitement,in disbelief or..or anger)

"Obviously,not to pick you up..KD replied while making a way to enter the house..

Uff! Just ans the damn question..? Leave it.."said an irritated Kiya..Panchi what he's doing here actually? Kiya asked pointing her finger at KD & looking at Panchi..

Panchi,knew these 2'd never ask eachother out inspite of having feelings for each other..But It's valentine day..who knows what 'd happen tomorrow,then why not make it atleast a lil' special for her friends,KD atleast never come across as a open-friend but he was & she knew..She had called him up after the conversation she had with Kiya in academy.She didn't lie to him for this..She just asked him to come over so that her friends can go out together for the party & she wanted him to come for Kiya…Nomatter how hard KD behaved with others,also with Kiya but he never showed any attitude to Panchi..he never said much but it was visible that he respected Panchi a lot..So he agreed.

"Arre I asked him to come,so that we all can go together..Maine thik kiya na..? Panchi asked sweetly..


Could kiya say no? No..as she knew why she did so..

Yeah whatever..Kiya said it with attitude which was just for KD.

'So what are we waiting for,shall we leave now?..asked Samar..

Yes..Said Piddi while looking at Boby..Who just rolled her eyes.

*Outside Reha's house..*

Ranveer who was waiting outside of her house & it's been almost half hour..It was not at all a bad idea to tell her he'd be coming early afterall..He thought..

Looking at his watch which has leveled as 7-15min..he said ..

God!Yea ladkiyan jaldi taiyaar kyu nahin ho sakti..he stomp his foot just then the main door of Reha's house opened.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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See,I just made it realization part 2😆When I write I just can't seem to keep it all short..so bare with my writing..
I'm not great in writing but I tried to keep the character's & the scenes strong in their own way so the scenes/conversation being long..
Before I would write the actual RP scenes,I wanted other character's story too,their equation with R-P..
So hope it didn't bore you..

Last but not the least..Thanks for the response..means a lot :)Hope to get for this part too

Piya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was wow loved the way that panchi looks after everyone she is a doll and she got Diya together how sweet hope something like that happens in the show and yes ranveer was jealous so good sign
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its just awesome
i loved it
i could really imagine it
very nicely written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww luved reading it...ur jst awesome..waiting for part 3 plzz can u update it today...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^I'll try to:),No promises though .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow wow wow..Loved it to the Core..!

Amazingly Awesome..hehe !

Keep It Long..lol..No Probs cZ I Love This !

Update soon Pleaseee..n thanks fr the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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piya kya update yaar ...! me read it already 2 times ...!

d loved d jealous part 🤣😍
rahi is making all so crazy ..HAYEEE <3333

thanks for d pm
update soon ..

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