I Do-- Thahaan FF Last Part Updated Page 17 - Page 7

@Dplee: Thats a very good idea Dplee... We as readers need to know whats going on in each person's minds. That will really help use decipher their characters well. Please do.. Bihaan for one - Vasu the treacher the other. May be Dhruv's as well😉 What goes on in his mind... His jealousy, his love for Bihaan and Thapki and how he can't let go... Everything would be really wonderful!

Originally posted by: fan.matsh

@Dplee: Thats a very good idea Dplee... We as readers need to know whats going on in each person's minds. That will really help use decipher their characters well. Please do.. Bihaan for one - Vasu the treacher the other. May be Dhruv's as well😉 What goes on in his mind... His jealousy, his love for Bihaan and Thapki and how he can't let go... Everything would be really wonderful!

Bihaan's confusion.. His love for his wife but afraid that he will just ruin her life further if he accepts her (whatever his thoughts - however u would want to show case it)

Please bring out those thoughts... Delve more into Thapkis psychology as well...

😆 So muc I have written... Its my wish list 😉

Originally posted by: Dplee

I was planning for DS anyway but thanks for pointing Vasu. And don't worry about the wish list, it motivates me.

So at last Thapki realized the goodness and importance of Bihan ..good for her I also love how she analyzed the incidence of their marriage it's good that she trust Bihan before even know what really happened.. I hope it will be like this in the show too
you said you are going to torture Thapki and that Bihan will not accept her easily so I'm so curious to see what will happen after he was been awaken by her tears
Superb update like always Dplee ..Thanks

Vry good update deeps.finaly thapki realizd bihaan's value. waiting for next part.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: zarii

Vry good update deeps.finaly thapki realizd bihaan's value. waiting for next part.. 👍🏼

Aww Dplee that was a emotional update... Very touching yaar ... Thapki's realisation... So finally samjh aa hi gyi Thapki ko Ke Bihaan ki kya importance hai uski life mein ... I like that part most yahan Thapki Vasu Ke baare mein analyses karti hai you wrote that part very nicely... Thanks dear ... Now waiting for next part :)

Heyy Dips🤗

What an update dplee!!!! I liked when u make our ice queen starting to melt hope that no one will offer her freezer 😆 😆
Great job dear can't wait 4 the nxt part i hope u r updating today plz say that 's right I want to c more torture for thaps now 😉

Originally posted by: Sweet_Desires

Heyy Dips🤗

This is the first time that I have read a FF on TPK forum. And I must say, it was an excellent read. I had stopped reading FFs on IF because of poor writing, cliche stuff; hence it took alot for me to actually open your FF and read it. But, it paid off well. You do have a eloquent writing style. Keep updating.👍🏼