FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 2

Originally posted by: mirai07

I agree with NidhaA. She pretty much stated what I wanted to say. So my review is easier to write now 😸😸 Thanks NidhaA.😂😂

I mostly enjoyed her point of view towards the Brar's. 😍😍😍

A very good start. Looking forward to see how you take this story with the tracks in the show. Best of luck for your writing ❤️

I think I am going to deviate from the serial track on two accounts, one - I hate when they just add common tracks after a point to continue the serial; two - fanfiction being a different form allows me the liberty to manipulate the pace of storytelling to suit it.

I do hope that you will like Sahiba's perspective more in upcoming chapters.

Nicely written ☺️☺️

Please tag me if you continue please

Originally posted by: Viana_White

Nicely written ☺️☺️

Please tag me if you continue please

Sure. But I do not know how to tag since I am new to the forum.

I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.

Originally posted by: Joshrocks28

I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.

Oh I do remember the scene, but it was presented much later than I would personally prefer.

Originally posted by: Joshrocks28

I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.

There is a tag users column when you write in the comment box. Type the Id of the person you wish to tag and they will be notified accordingly.😊

Originally posted by: Joshrocks28

I think you didn't saw one of the episode where she talks with her father & they showed a flashback scene that how her father used to design jewellery and one day she along with her father went to a lady's house to give the set and she said how the design were amazing and once they left that lady was shocked that the jewellery was missing from the box but it was her due to her negligence the chain felt down and both the husband & wife called the police and arrested sahibas dad, but later that day she found the jewellery and told the police to release sahiba dad, they didn't even apologize for their wrong behavior since then sahiba had the hatred for the rich that the rich only care about themselves.

No I haven't watched 😊 I will have to recheck again. Thanks for notifying 👍🏼

You’ve captured the essence of Sahiba very well. Nicely depicted the reactions of the eldest Brars and Angad’s jealousy… which I actually I hadn’t clued in until I read and it made sense! Keep going!