SahAn FF: Mein Chaalaak Toh Tu Jama Bewkoof|| Pt3...Pg2|Upd 20/2/2023

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Hi everybody,

So I had decided that I will not be writing any FFs or OSs because I am always busy with college and work, but I thought maybe this is the entertainment I needed LOL. So here you go, my first FF on this forum.


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She took over the responsibility of her household at the age of 17 when her father had a heart attack and nothing has been the same for Sahiba Kaur Monga since. She has a heart that hardened over time and a brain as sharp as her tongue. She does not take shit from anyone. She does her best wherever and whenever she can. But she does not bow down to anyone - let it be even her mother.

So what happens when a classist such as Angad Singh Brar crosses her path? Will sparks fly? Or will someone end up getting hurt?

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PART 1: THE TALE OF THE FUNCTION PASSES


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“Subah subah meri dimaag khaana zaroori hai?” Sahiba asked as she put on her sandals after washing her hands and feet.

It was eight in the morning and in two and a half hours, she had made a hundred earthen pots and painted twenty of them which were a different order.

One might think this was a new record of sorts but no, not for Sahiba. She actually thought that budaapa was getting to her and that she had gotten slower. Or maybe lazier, now that she had paid off all the debts that her father had ever accumulated.

A proud smile rested on her face as she waited for her assistant, Kulche’s response. But as always, the daffar didn’t say anything. Or to be more precise, he knew that there was nothing he could say that would change his Sahiba Di’s mind.

That did not stop him from trying at least once.

“Nahi Didi, mein toh bas-”

“Bas!” She stopped him right there and turned to the Kaka who walked over to her with a steel glass of tea. He looked at her grouchily because she had not let him get his way with the price of the matkas but that did not change his mind about how capable Sahiba was.

He sold the earthen pots for five hundred rupees a piece and the painted ones for seven fifty rupees. And Sahiba being Sahiba had asked around and gotten the price right, so she had asked for three-fifty a piece for the unpainted ones and five hundred for painted ones. So after paying off the twenty thousand that her father owned the Kaka, she was taking home eighteen thousand rupees.

“I am not going to go soft on you just because you walk around pouting like that!” She chuckled as she wrapped her dupatta around her hand and took the glass.

“Mujhe nahi hai kya?” Kulcheasked. “I have been here since five in the morning as well.”

Kaka gave him flat look and left them.

Sahiba chuckled as she took a sip of the tea and cringed at the sweetness and passed it to Kulche, patting his arm as she started walking.

“Ek ghanta main mujhe aakepick kar lena. Gurudwara jaana hai aur usse pehle dhukaan kholna hai!”

“Didi, toda toh rest karo!”

“Dimaag mat khaa!”

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“Brar function passes?”Keerat rubbed the back of her neck as she watched her mother and sister walk around in circles in the house as they called whoever they knew to arrange the passes. “Yeh junoon kaha se sawaar hua?”

“Kul-Nimmi.” Keerat echoed Taiji’swords because she knew there was no one else in the world who could rile her mother up like that wretched duo that called themselves Santosh’s best friends. Well, if she was being honest, her mother was not any better.

“Sahiba subah subah kaha chali gayi?” Seerat turned to Keerat, her self-entitled long nose up in the air.

“Manali gayi hai, bike trip pe.” Keerat rolled her eyes.

“Kya?”

“Sindy baby, everyone is not like you that they wake up whenever they please and make reels throughout the day just because they won Miss Ludhiana two years back” Keerat rolled her eyes as she picked up the sack of clay delivered for Sahiba’s pottery. “Some people actually work to earn bread.”

“Keerat ki bacchi, tu-”

“Arrey, what’s with all the noise pollution?” Sahiba walked in, bobbing her head to the music blasting through the radio from the chaiwaala next door.

“Tu kaha thi?” Seerat asked, hands on hips.

“You didn’t know? Dubai prince is visiting. I went to get a selfie with him!” Sahiba smiled sweetly.

Keerat chuckled but her expression changed to one of complete disbelief when Seerat said, “Kya? Without me? You knew it would be good for my Instagram and you still went without me?”

Keerat looked at her Sahiba Di and said, the disbelief still on her face, “I swear, Mommy should really have fed her those almonds instead of using them as face pack!”

“Sahiba puttar!” Santosh grabbed Sahiba’s arms before she could respond. “Puttar, you need to get those passes in some way or the other!”

“Mommy, I was kidding about the Dubai prince.” Sahiba had no freaking idea what was going on.

“Dubai prince nahi. Brarom ke ghar koyi function ho raha hai. Uska passes ke baare mein baath kar rahi hai, Mommy.” Keerat explained it to her.

Sahiba blinked twice at her sister before turning to her mother and giving her a flat look. “Mommy ji, I am eyeballs deep in work and you want me to waste my time on something like this? Ask one of Seerat Di’s…”

“Fifteen.” Keerat made an input.

“Fifteen bo-” Sahiba stopped herself when her mother and sister gave her the death glare. “-male friends. I don’t have time for this!”

“Par-”

“Taiji, mein naahke aathi hoon. Please make me some kadak chai!” She cut her mother off as she made her way upstairs.

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Edited by ShivaShumbo - 2 years ago
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I loved it!!!! Continue on!

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Originally posted by: averma4583

I loved it!!!! Continue on!


I will be uploading whenever I can. Except I have a history of ditching stories midway because of my schedule. I hope that it does not happen anymore because honestly, I don't work or study anymore.

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PART 2: THE TALE OF THE BROKEN POTTERY



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“Mommy!” Sahiba yelled as she ducked, dodging the sandbag flying her way by a mere inch. “If I did something, let’s talk it out like two civil people! Jeez, we don’t have the money for a funeral right now!”

Keerat chuckled as she clutched her sandbag while Sahiba stood there, her hand on her chest.

“Aapko yeh shabd ka matlab pata hai?-” She asked, changing the topic only to have been cut off by her smartass sister.

“Rest? Nahi.” Sahiba winked at her as she picked up the glass of black tea sitting on the coffee table.

She did not drink milk tea, or to put it more accurately, she had to leave drinking it when she was seventeen because milk was expensive and they could not afford it for everyone. So Taiji, Ajeet, and Sahiba had to quit it. Santosh needed her chai to function, Seerat was not ready to compromise on her beauty regimen and Keerat was an athlete – she needed her proteins and Sahiba was never going to compromise on that.

Sahiba brought the family back to the point where they could afford at least milk for everyone, but she had gotten used to black tea by then.

“Even you know you need rest.” Keerat sat down next to her. “Di, just sleep. I will handle the shop today.”

“And scare away my poor assistant? No thanks.” She put butter on her paratha and rolled it up, taking a huge bite as she made her way to her small working station in the house, where the earthen water dispenser for the gurudwara was ready and waiting. “Mommy aur Seerat di kaha hai?”

“Seerat di apni friend se milne gayi hai aur Mommy-”

“Haan Brar saab! Of course, we will come! Has it ever happened that you called and we didn’t come?” Santosh walked in holding her phone.

Keerat and Sahiba looked at each other.

“She got the passes?” Keerat asked.

“Fifty rupees say she is pretending.” Sahiba snorted as she stuffed the rest of the paratha in.

“Nice bet. Except all the money involved will come from your pocket only.” Keerat winked at her.

Santosh peeked outside and closed the door, throwing her phone onto the couch and turning to Sahiba.

“Sahiba, ab toh tumhein passes le aana hi hoga.”

“Sahiba, ab toh tumhein meri pheli hui raayta sametna hi hoga.” Keerat mimicked.

“Sawaash hai teri jamman waale de!” Santosh glared at Keerat. “Why are you always mocking your own mother?”

“Because all your khands are mock-worthy, meri jaan.”Sahiba pulled her cheek and quickly grabbed the pot and ran out of there.

"Sahiba passes!"

“Dekhti hoon!” She yelled as she left the house, but honestly, she had no plan of running behind it.

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“Ooff!” She dodged the car door, wondering why one or the other thing was trying to take her life today. She got out of it unscratched but her pot was not that lucky.

Her hard work of last night lay on the floor, shattered into a hundred pieces.

“Here, the remuneration for your loss.”

Sahiba looked up at the man, a few inches taller than her, staring at his phone and not even sparing her a glance or an apology as he held out the five-hundred rupees note.

She raised a brow.

The tempo, the pitch, the audacity of this bitch!

She folded her hands in front of her and tilted her head as she waited for him to look at her.

And he did. As soon as he realized that she was not taking the money or saying anything.

He looked at her and asked with a raised brow, “Is it not enough?”

“The clay that was used to make that pot alone caused thousand rupees.” It was a lie. Of course, it was a lie. But who cared?

Clearly, no one here was interested in basic principles, morals, or manners.

“Wow!”

The two turned to the new voice, Veer Singh Brar, who was staring admiringly at the broken pieces of fine pottery. “It’s beautiful!”

“And broken.”

“What’s its price?” Angad Singh Brar asked, his jaw flexing.

Angad was not a bad guy. He was just stressed with the three-hour deadline he had on his hands. He needed a miracle in these three hours to make sure that his grandfather was not disappointed in him.

No, he could not disappoint him. Or anyone.

Nothing was more important to this man than perfection.

He was a perfectionist and for that, he needed to be pure perfection himself.

Exception, this man did not know at this point that the miracle that he was praying for was standing right in front of him, with her hands folded across her chest.

“Five thousand rupees.”

“WHAT?” Veer knew that it was not the price. It could not be.

“That or a simple sorry.” Sahiba shrugged.

Angad didn’t think twice as he whipped out his wallet and added the money and held it out to her.

"Paaji-" Veer started but was silenced by the firm look his elder brother gave him.

“Thanks.” Sahiba chuckled as she took it and without another glance back, went her way while Angad took the opposite route.

Veer stood there, staring at the backs of the retreating figures and then at the broken pot.

“Did she just put a price tag on Angad Paaji’s sorry? The Angad Paaji who put a price tag on everything?”

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Edited by ShivaShumbo - 2 years ago
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Very niceeee do continue. It's refreshing

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Loved it! So refreshing!

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So far, I'm loving this!!!!!!! I love this Sahiba, who sees even her mother for what she is! Also, question, is Ajeet alive still? Because you said he had a heart attack, yes? Or is he just alive and sick? Or does he still run his little food shop?

And yes! I love the way she behaved with Angad! Kam se kam Veer ko tho realisation hua, ki the money was for the sorry, not the price of the actual gada.... 😆

I'm waiting for more on this!

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Loved this two parts! ❤️ I've actually seen some clips of the OG story and you definitely got the part of Sahiba correct! I enjoyed this one. Hope you continue soon!

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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Very niceeee do continue. It's refreshing


Thank you so much. Will update soon.

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