TSM : Life Goes On... {Chapter 4 Updated! Pg 9} - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Princicute

Hey nabs🤗there u are. ..was waiting eagerly. ..aahaa I loved it ...true I could hv not imagined in my dreams though ...mantu is bang on.👏 ...The French connection is super. ..

I wish the chapter never ends. ...merci madame for this bliss ...keep updating regularly 😉
Well love you ...such a fresh air ...refreshed totall.. ..
I mean bestie convo was way super. ..good going. ...keep it up girl ...


Heya Princi! 😆

Yup here I am! I am honored that you like it so much. Haha! I am glad you like the french connection!

Well If only my muse never decides to die ever but unfortunately that's not the case. haha.
Du rien MADAME! 😆 I will try my best!

Awww I love you loads as well! <3

Tanks for dis sweet and lovely comment Princi
You are a sweetheart
Love you!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Fanfictious_KJ


I really want to know more about Sophie 😆


😉 Well you will know about her in the coming updates! Teheh She might be playing one of the cupids for Manya... 😉😆<3


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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: loveleen12

Oh my gawd!!!! Nabi that was fabulousness!!!!

I absolutely love that Mantu knew French and again, I cannot stress more on the fact that I love Amaya's connection with Paris and her old life that you are portraying here!! Eeks and they are so cute, she was checking him out :D That is ma gurl!!!


Awww! Tanks fellow sista!
😆 I am not sure fabulousness is a word...but hey I'll take it! 😃 <3

Well he is The Tour Guide...! I am glad your liking Amaya's connection to France. I feel honored! <3

Well you know...when a taylor swift song plays Love is inevitable! 😆😆
Tanks again Gurl! You truly are a very positive and lively person!

Love you loads!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Live-life



😉<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Well you will know about her in the coming updates!Teheh She might be playing one of the cupids for Manya...😉😆<3</font>




Ahh!! You mean jealousy huh!? 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fanfictious_KJ



Ahh!! You mean jealousy huh!? 😉 😆


Well...😆 You'll find out soon enough! 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Live-life


Well...😆 You'll find out soon enough! 😆😆
Well I am waiting already..😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni2015

mantu aayega ka plz koi toh batao .

Sorry darling I think Dhruv quit. I don't think he is coming back
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well peeps! It's been a while..
And a lot of things have happened in that while . They have effed up the show and frankly I have stopped watching it. The only link I have with it is this forum and of course my baby right here! I know a lot of you are really really disappointed but things happen and sometimes all we can do is move on so better things can happen! I love Dhruv for playing Mantu so realistically and honestly I cannot imagine anyone else in his place. I hope we get to see him back on screen soon! As for Manya...well we have our forum and our stories to keep them forever alive! And we shall do just that!

I hope you guys like this installment. It might not be the best but...I tried!

French Vocab for the Day:-

Mon cherie: My Dear

Vache: Cow

Arrtez s'il vous plait: Stop Please


c'est tres mal: It is really bad


Oh Mon Dieu: Oh My God


Je suis fatigue: I am tired


Merci: Thank You


De Rien: Your welcome


Chapter 4


"Yo Gurl where you at? Look who is here!!!!!!"



I heard her even before I turned around. Soph! She was finally here. I ran towards the entrance literally bouncing in excitement. And there she was...



"Sophie Wophie!" I squealed in excitement. She was unloading the luggage from the car. She turned around as soon as I called out to her and my god! She had't changed a bit. She was still a mother effing giraffe with her height. She still had the cheeky look to her face..and her eyes held that light that always makes me wonder what keeps her so optimistic. Her hair were dark brown, falling in tresses. Same old sophie! Ah how I have missed her!



"Ams! Mon cherie!" she ran towards and in the blink of an eye she was hugging me like she was cuddling with a teddy bear. I laughed at her eagerness and hugged her back with equal passion. Throughout all this chaos she has been the once constant, that one friend that you need to just be by your side. Even though we weren't face to face all these months but the fact that she was just there for me made it a lot easier for me to keep living. After Mom, Rachi Di, and Jazz she is the only one that I trust the most! She is like the second home for me. Even if I am having a bad day she will say something totally random and optimistic just to make me laugh. When I use to run low on inspiration she would make these cheesy but real remarks just to help me gain motivation. If I fall she'll always be there to pick me up. If I lose she will always be there to tell me never to give up. If I am lost she'll always guide me to the right path. Like she has for months now...which is why she is my best friend. Truth be told I sometimes wonder what good did I do to deserve such a caring and loving friend. Seriously I consider myself lucky that I have Sophie with me as a friend, as a benefactor, and a well wisher or else I don't know where I would have been today.



I could feel her crying while hugging me and to be honest I had tears clogging my vision as well. Ah we were such melodrames!



"Gurl...you'e turned me into a freaking drama queen. You left for a few months and look how I've become. It's all your fault!" Soph said with her usual tone while detangling herself from me.



"Haww! My fault? You vache !!!" I hit her playfully on her upperarm.



"Ok Madame! Arrtez s'il vous plait . I was just kidding yaar! I missed you loads girlie!" she squealed again.



"I've missed you loads too Sophs! So how was your flight? Everything go smooth?"



"Ah don't ask gurl. The flight was awesome but the traffic in INDIA! Grrr...c'est tres mal! I literally had to sit in the car for freaking 5 hours! 5 EFFING HOURS?! Do you know how long that it? Argh my butt hurts from sitting that long" she said hysterically and not even considering the fact that we were standing outside on the road where people passing by could hear her clearly. I shook my head while sighing. Somethings never change!



"Soph I am right here! You don't have to shout so loudly alright? And why don't you go inside first and meet Mom, Rachi Di, and Jazz? I'll bring your luggage in." I said in order to make her stop warna she would have carried on for hours. Literally.



"Oops! I am sowiee. But you don't have to carry these bags alone..I'll do it. Here give it to me!" she said as I was trying to lift a bag from the roof of the car.



"No! Don't..I'll do it. You go inside and meet everyone. They have been waiting for you!" I replied.



"Oh Mon Dieu !!! I have an audience...pehle kyun nahi battaya Ams! Mein challi !" and just like that she ran into the house. Well...Mom, Rachi Di, and Jazz are gonna be surprised!



I turned around to accomplish the task at hand. Lifting the bag from this car...seems to be harder than I thought it would be. It's ok I am going to try again. All those days in the gym weren't for nothing. I gave it another try...and another...and another...but each time I failed miserably. Argh what did Sophie put in here! Mon Dieu! Je suis fatigue.



"Kuch madat kardon ?" said a voice from behind me. I turned around too quickly and bumped into a broad chest. I fumbled a little and hands shot out towards my shoulders to keep me from falling.



I looked up to find...Mantu The Tour Guide standing there just holding me as if it was nothing! Phirse...Why do I keep bumping into this guy? Gawd!



"You again! Are you following me? Because I swear if you are I am going to call the police!" I said vehemently.



"Relax Madam! Hum sirf madat car rah e the!" he said while trying to calm me down. And he was not going to succeed!



"I don't need your help!" I said nonchalantly. What does he think of himself? First buying shoes for me and now offering help. I am not stupid! I know all these tricks! I have lived in Paris for Godsake!



"Yeah I can see that!" He said gesturing towards his hold on my shoulders. Oh...right. I didn't realize he was holding me for this long. Uff! He's getting on my nerves I swear to God!



I shrugged of his hands a little rudely and turned around to lift the bag off the roof again. And this time I am going to get it done! As soon as I kept my hands on the bag I felt his hands encircle around me and reach towards the bags. We were close..closer than comfortable to be honest. I could feel his breath on the back of my neck and good Lord it was doing things to me that it shouldn't be doing! I turned my face to get a better look at him and Oh Mon Dieu! His face was so close to mine! Inches away...from my lips. When people said they feel butterflies in their stomach at a particular moment I used to laugh at them! Hell I even made fun of Soph when she said the exact same thing looking at her crush in 8th grade! It's because I used to think that feeling didn't exist! But now...now I was feeling it! Literally my heart fluttered at this close proximity and I am pretty sure it was beating faster than Usain Bolt runs! At this rate it would pop put me chest in no time. Oh God I hope he can't hear it warna I might as well let an earthquake swallow me into the ground!



I didn't even realize when he lifted the bag, set it on the ground and moved away from me! It wasn't until he snapped his fingers in front of my face that I snapped out of my trance.



"Kahan kho gayi thi madam?" he asked while searching my eyes for an answer.



"Uh...woh...kuch nahi! I have to go Bye!" I said too quickly in order to get away from his presence. He was doing weird things to me that I couldn't recognize and I didn't like it. I swiftly walked past him and was almost to the entrance when I stopped short in my tracks.



"Ruko!" he said from behind me. I turned around to find him walking up to me and giving me the bag. Right...I had forgotten about the cursed bag! Argh if only this stupid thing would have come off by itself then I wouldn't have experienced such bizarre feelings!



"Merci...I mean...Thank you!" I said fumbling with my words. I quickly turned around and started walking inside the house before I embarrassed myself further.



"De Rien!" I heard him reply. Right...he knew french...



To be continued...

So peeps! How'd you like it?

Drop in your sweet comments and hit that like button! Until then I love you all and keep smiling and I hope you are having a good day, afternoon, evening, and night wherever you are!
Hugs!

AU Revoir!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nabi, this was beautiful...pls continue updating...all of us will be waiting for another lovely update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nabz that was fab!!! I think I repeat this time and again, I REALLY love the french connect you have in your story!! Please keep it up!! This is such a cheeky, cheesy, adorable little story and I absolutely love it!!

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