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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: bobby87
loveily update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: bobby87
nice update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Episode 4:

Bemul: Shekar,ab hum chaltey hai.

Shekar: Arey! Ye kya? Mujhe toh laga tha ki tu rukega yahaan pe.

Neelu: Haan,itni jaldi?

Laboni: Arey,ab ek hi city main hai toh ab hum miltey rahengey na.Ab chatey hai hum.

Neelu: Theek hai.Di,bahut acha laga aap aur jeeju aye.

Laboni: Mujhe bhi.Main toh raj aur pooja ko bhi lana chahta tha lekin wo aap nahi paye.

Shekar: Haan,ab kitna kaam hota hai na.

Bemul: Hmm.Theek hai toh fir,phone karunga.

(Bemul and Laboni quit)

Next morning: Anu goes to the sets with jay for the second time.

Anu: Hey!

Taani: Hey..spot boy,tu pir agaya?

Anu: Jee ma'am. Aaj sound system ready hai. (laughs)

Taani: (laughs)

Anu: Acha,tu kis sey baath kar rahi thi?

Taani: Siddhart.

Anu: Oh! So,woh tera boyfriend hai?

Taani: NO! Hum toh bas dosh hai.

Anu: Haan..haan.Sab yahe kahtey hai.

Taani: Acha?

Anu: Haan..jab main 11th class main tha na..i had a crush on you and main sab ko bolta tha ki hum sirf dost hai!

Taani: Tum mazak kar rahe ho na?

Anu: Obviously. Not.

Taani: huh? Tum ney mujhe kyu nahi?

Anu: Apney number toh dena chahiye tha na,aisey him gayab ho gayi thi. Ma ney mujhe bataya kit u Singapore gayi thi.

Taani: Oh,hello..mujhe sey pehley tu gayab ho gaya tha,Mumbai ko.

Anu: Haan haan.Galti toh hamesha merey hi hoti hai na.

Taani: (laughs) Hum belkul aisey hi ladtey the na?

Anu: (smiles) Hmm..

Jatin: Abey Anu..chal..main tujhe kuch amazing dikhata hoon.

Anu:Kya? Heroine agaye?? 😆 😆

Jatin: Arey yaar,pagal.Yahaan na ek rabbit hai.Cute sa.

Anu: Abey..mujhe in bekar cheezoon ki liye time nahi hai.Mujhe jana hai.Bye! Taani,spot boy sey apkey kal mulakat hogey. 😆 😆

Taani: (smiles) Okay.bye!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sofsunmannee
wow awesme update
juss fab dear
do conti it soon😃😃

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arshiforeve

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

hey nice part ha............ onu had a crush on tani wow.............waiting for more.........

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Wow, Rocking update ! U are doing SuperB work ! 👏👏 This one was short, but Cute one ! 😳

As I always says - The dialogs is too goood ! 👏😳

"Anu: Haan..jab main 11th class main tha na..i had a crush on you and main sab ko bolta tha ki hum sirf dost hai! 😆" Oww... this one is shoo cute !

Hmm.. Onu ki life mein kya hua tha ?? 😲

Keeep it up the great work ! 👏 Thnx for the PM !

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: pravschills

Haha..thanks stuti. I ll try to..actually,now, I have characters but the next time I need to introduce a character I ll definitely use Akshara for that. 😊

hope so..
btw.. missin chattin wid u..
never c u onlyn only!!
wer r u dese days yaar...
n ya... ask me 4 hinas pfoto.. ill giv u many!!😛😊😳

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Stuti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

hey.. i didnt get d pm!!
i didnt even noe yeh update kiya hai tune!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

hope so..
btw.. missin chattin wid u..
never c u onlyn only!!
wer r u dese days yaar...
n ya... ask me 4 hinas pfoto.. ill giv u many!!😛😊😳

Yeah,I ll ask you :)

I have my final exams in a week,i don't get to stay online much..so..:(