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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

wow.....dramatic start!

can't wait for more.....


*Sigh* I'm indeed very dramatic. Can't help it.. 😉 Won't keep you waiting too long..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay Guys! 😉 I am sorry! I am sorry! I am sorry! It is stupid to post the first chapter so late but ohhh well... that's me.. bombarded with assignments, pressure, problems and peer pressure.. And heyyy please forgive me... And also will make a promise to you all: 2 updates every weekend. Unless I am loaded with too much homework, the updates are certain but if I am, will inform you guys personally through PM.. how's that for a deal...mmm?? (I know you guys won't disagree so it's confirmed!) 😆 Jokes... of course let me know with your comments.. read onn xxx 😳

Chapter 1

Present Day

Closing his eyes in frustration, Anurag ran his fingers through his silky hair as if trying to sooth down the anger which rose in his heart. What was this guy's problem? Couldn't he see the pain, he was going through and the questions which he threw at him were killing him a thousand times...no...a billion times.

"You have no answer, mister Anurag! You harassed your wife, she left the house and the next day her body was found on the railway tracks, ready to be ran over by the early morning train!" he accused jabbing his finger in front of his face clearly blaming him for everything. It was vague whether he had any backup to these accusations but he didn't let that become evident.

His hands balled into fists at the words he heard, getting ready to almost jump over the witness box and slander him. How on earth could he murder his own wife, the woman he loved - cherished and treated the prized possession of his life. The one who would know about his whereabouts, his problems, his feelings and the care of his happiness. The one he loved.

"That's a lie!" he contradicted, his eyebrows furrowing angrily, his balled fists resting on the wood as if he was controlling himself. He swore to himself that if the lawyer did not stop with his futile and provoking questions, he would really commit a murder. His chocolate brown eyes traced the sight of his family, a glaring Shekhar, worried Nilanjana and the evil Ritesh with a wailing Kuhu in his arms.

"Order! Order!" ordered the judge banging the gavel while placing the pen back in it's place. The lawyer swung round with a gleeful grin on his face as if the case was on his side and the whole thing was shut down. But the words which poured out from the judge's mouth made him frown. "You are provoking the client, I will not allow that in my court. Mr Mehta, you are meant to be obtaining information not provoking the client with already answered questions..."

"I'm sorry, your honour," he murmured turning to walk to his wooden chair while muttering "No more questions." bringing the end to the court hearing session dismissing everyone. The two policemen took hold of his arms and lead him away even after the loud cries of Nilanjana who wanted to just touch her son once.

"Can you please bail him out?" she implored her husband a second later as he looked away. "I can't see my son like this, I won't!" The tears poured out of her eyes, while her hands reached out and clutched her husband's stiff ones. Why was Shekhar being like this? It wouldn't take him a second to bail Anurag out so why was he being so unfair? Why?

"No," came the short reply and Shekhar walked away followed by a grinning Ritesh and the confused Kuhu. Nilanjana had stood there with her hands together in front of the scale muttering those small yet emotional words "Save my son..."

Author's Note
🤔I know it's not good... so please criticize and let me know if I should continue...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's very nice, and looks interesting. Plz add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update......👏 i lykd it vry much..........👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Very interesting Concept Tammy. Do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Great Chapter, Tamanna! 😉

Keep up the good work and PM please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its not good ........ but its awesome
but an short update
nxt time i want a long update
taani is dead........ and they are accusing anurag but he can never do tht
feel really bad 4 anurag
whts wrong wid Sekhar....and as far as ritesh is concerned he can never be good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow.........great start!
thanks for the pm.....do continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
It's a diff story & its wat I lyk it
Continu plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2

Present Day

Robindo popped his head round the door. Nilanjana was sitting in the study, idle; staring into space with a small tear just on it's way to fall down. He couldn't see his mother like this not even for freedom, drinks and girls. He could never imagine that things would shatter to such extent after the death of his Taani Bodi. He didn't even know the condition of his Anurag Dada. Shekhar had forbade him from coming to the court hearing and had involved Robindo in his business that he barely had time to go meet his love; Mauli.

He glanced hopefully at the embroidered Sari he held. It was in his mother's favourite colour; Red and had heavy stones and work neatly done down the front of it. At first his voice trembled but he pushed that lump away and meekly said "Ma, I have brought something for you," And then he had found himself drawn towards his mother; her welcoming lap and the way her hands patted her thighs inviting him for the stroke on the head.

"Will he be out, Robindo?" she asked hopefully, her hands ruffling through his brown curls as he nodded. He wasn't sure though and he regretted being the cause of her fake excitement as she reached out and grabbed it. "I will wear this Sari when he comes home. And I shall offer 21 coconuts to Goddess Ambe just like Laboni Di would have done." she announced, cheerfully stroking the stones of the Sari, feeling bliss again.

Before he could stop his mother, the stiff man on the door glared at the two as if he had registered every word of the conversation. "Nothing of that sort will have happen, Neelu. Your son will be there for imprisonment and he will suffer for what he did to our daughter-in-law! And you," he pointed straight at Robindo ready to bawl out his anger "Get out of here, you useless good-for-nothing son. I sometime have a doubt whether you are my real blood..."

While walking away, a thought triggered in his mind wondering why he was still called a good-for-nothing son when he had become Kolkata's best industrialist in a flick of time...

***

The plate came sliding through the perpendicular bars filled with a dry flatbread and some lumps of vegetable cornered in the end making the dinner look extremely small and disgusting. But nothing mattered any more. He didn't care, and he was willing to eat a thousand meals like this just to have her back. He had started to believe that he was the killer otherwise she would have never died. He had killed her.

"You have 10 minutes. Eat it or don't." barked the fat inspector banging his wooden stick on the steel bar gaining the attention of others. His looks, his personality didn't scare him and Anurag was sure that he was far stronger than the lump which was bossing everyone around. His hands tore a small morsel and dipped it in the vegetable but the loud cry instantly stopped him.

"Anurag!" called out the familiar understanding voice. Ananya ran past the confused inspector and clutched the bars, her left hand holding on to a silver tin. "Look at this. I brought this for you. It's your favourite dish," she offered sliding past the tin and smiling happily as he took it in his hands.

"No thanks, Di. My favourite's have died out and I will only eat what I deserve," declined Anurag pushing it back and eating the morsel which he was about to eat. She stared at the state of the food and bawled angrily at the inspector who sat on the desk lazily. "Is this what you call food? I agree that my brother has done wrong but this is not even enough for starters! Do you want to kill him through this way just because he wasn't sentenced to death?"

He stared at her from head to toe and understood she was rich enough to scream at an inspector. Rising from his seat, he placed his hands on the desk and muttered "I have been eating this food since 10 years and look at me. I am fine, stuffed and well healthy."

"Why can't I see, Inspector?" she replied vainly smirking at his belly which stuck out as if a pregnant woman's. Turning to Anurag, she assured "Don't worry, Anu. You will be out of here in no time for the crime you haven't even done!" Swinging on her heel, she turned around and walked away while pushing some guards off their transfixed position.

***

Laboni ran her fingers on the glass photo she held. Two lone tears coursed down her plump cheek and fell on the glass instantly reminding her of the tears her own daughter had shed for the beastly man who was trapped in the jail. But how will she ever get her daughter back? She was gone, and everyone assumed she was dead. Even she had started to believe that and her trust was crumbling away in small pieces.

Taposh placed a hand on her shoulder, a reassuring smile on his handsome lips. She felt he was here to give good news and instantly wiped away the lingering tears. "Has the final judgement happened, Taposh?" asked Laboni while placing the frame back. "Has he got it for what he done?" she asked harshly looking straight at him.

"Not yet, Ma. He will and Mr Mehta has said that we will win the case," said Taposh giving one of his striking smiles yet not forgetting his sister's recent death. "Ma? What's happened to Mauli? She's just disappeared and she doesn't come for street plays either."

"I don't know. I don't care," Laboni replied gloomily walking out of the room. He wondered how his mother had gone from loud to quiet, caring to disregarding and mostly happy to sad. His eyes brimmed wondering whether the same vociferous sounds of stories and the melodious voice would ever echo from his house. And he made sure that the causer of this suffered. He would make sure that he would kill Anurag first before they sentence him imprisonment rather than death and that he swore to his dead sister.

***

Author's Note

Extreme apologies to all the readers. I did take a while to update and you all must be wondering where Taani is. Don't worry guys, I haven't kicked her out of the story and I will never do that. There is going to be a sudden twist in the story and I hope you all enjoy it.

Please comment and here is a BIG hug from me 🤗
Edited by Humari_Dosti - 14 years ago

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