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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Really good update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: dafodilsduke

Really good update

u r doing a good job

Tq so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part13
Everyone was busy in preparing for the sangeet. Jiya asked kunj to dance with her. When they were dancing, suddenly
Ku.. Aaah
Jiya.. Kya hua kunj?
Ku.. Mera kamar
Jiya... Kya hua tera kamar ko?
Ku.. Yahan both dart horaha mujhe ,aur tu poochrahi kya hua?
Ji.. Sry kunj mein abhi doctor ko phone lagati hoon. She was about to call doctor when
Ku.. Aaah
Ji.. Bohth dart horaha, tum na aaj dance mat karo, mein hi iska prepartion kardoongi
Ku... Pakka na. Mujhe pata meri darling sab kuch manage karloogi. Jiya just blushed
Twinkle ws passing and she gave him a tough look nd went away.
Ku.. Ab mein gaya
In terrace
Twinkle was just humming a song when kunj hugged from her back.
Ku.. Meri siyappa queen kya hogayatha?
Twinkle turned and said tum laduko ns sab ek jaise ho, koi bhi ladki mile tum log shuru kardege flirting.
Ku.. Arey meri jaan tum gusse se badi cute lagarhi ho
Tw.. Acha mein bohth cute aur jaan hoon tumari aur voh Jiya tumari kya tah... Haan darling
Ku... Arrey baba mein toh apne aap ko bacchane keliya kahatha yaar.
Tw.. Tum ko pata hai voh hotel vali aurat kese tujhe chidakti aur yahan jiya aur college mein sari ladikiyaan itni saari ladikiyaan ki attractions na mujhe bilkul pasand nehi
Ku.. Hold on hold on tum toh aesa bolrahi hai jaise mein amritsar anesi tum ko mujhse pyar hogaytha. Mein jabhi kahin jata hoon ladikiyaan marti hai mujpar toh mein kya karsakta uspe mein hoon thoda popular. Ab mein kya karoon
Tw.. Tum toh jante ho na sab, ki mujhe voh sab attractions pasand nehi hai
Ku.. Kya janta hoon mein. Abhi pata chalrahi ki meri swthrt jal bhi sakti.
Tw.. Kun.. Kya tujhe kuch bhi yaad nehi hai.
Ku.. Kya yaad hai babs
Twinkle stopped for sometime and didn't answered anything
Amritsar
Taneja mansion
Leela... Chinky tu kab ayi
Ch.. Mein bus abhi ayi hoo aunty. Twinkle kesi hai.
Lee.. Usse mein kali baat ki thi voh tk. Bus meri bacchi ki kushiyaan uski pass rehtehi voh kush nehi hai
Ch.. Matlab
Le.. Tu chod. Aur tumara aur rohan ka kese chalraaha
Chinky blushed and said ki rohan aatehi hoga voh bhi apse milna chatha hai
Le.. Hoi hoi sharamati hua bohth soni lagrahi meri pari
Ek tum ti jo mere Twinkle ko ache se sambalata. Ussne mumbaise aaneki bath voh apna sari dukh apne aapse rakar parsheen hojati hai, lekin ..Leela stopped as what she is talking.
Ch.. Aunty aap to delhi se ayethe 4 sal pehle toh kyu aap kehrahi ki aap mumbai se he
Leela was about to speak when rohan entered
Ro.. Ohh ho sab log kya bate karahi. Chinky agli mahine humre shadi usski bare mei bata.
Leela thanked Rohan with his eyes and congratulated both for their marriage.
Mumbai
Eve everyone was enjoying the Sangeet, everyone danced and made the moment vry spl for yuvi and simple.
Kunj said he had a pain in his kamar. Bebe, yuvi and merry became doubted.
At night everyone returned to their rooms when kunj came to twinkle's room.
Tw.. Kunj tu phir se aesi aya.
Ku: toh mein kya karta sabse bolta ki mein Twinkle ki kamre jaraha hoon
Tw.. Tum na bohth naughty ho
Ku.. Aur tu kya gaana sunarahi hai
They both were listening songs by lying in beds, it was her fav song. They both were looking each other and kunj kissed Twinkle's forehead. He came on top of her
Tw.. Kunj yeh tum kya karahib ho
Ku.. Shh... Bass tujme mein ko jana chataha hoon jaan
He kissed her forehead and then her eyes, and her cheeks, twinkle moaned kunj. Kunj looked her lips, and was about to kiss when twinkle stopped him and said kunj aab nehi bohth hogai.
Ku.. Kya hua tume
Tw.. Kunj hum shayad hum tknehi kareha hai
Kunj Just closed her lips by kissing her. bohth bolti hai tum
Aur suno mein tujhe advantage nehi leraha hoon. Aur mein limits janta hoon. Bus thoda apni hosh kogyai tha. Jab bhi mein tumari voh red lips dektha hoona toh mujhe apne aap ko control nehi hota. Sorry.
He got up from the bed and was about to go when twinkle hugged him from back.
Tw.. Iam sorry kunj. Mujhe maaf kardo
Ku.. Twinkle kyu tu maafi mangrahi hai, infact mein bohth lucky hoon yaar.
Twinkle.. Kya aaj tu yahan mere paas soyega plz mujhe bohth dar lagraha. Mein tujhe kona nehi janti
Kunj just picked her in his arms and gently placed her on bed.
Twinkle extended her hands kunj layed on her with twinkle on bottom. She just hugged him tight and both drifted to sleep.
Next day
Mehendi function
All women were putting mehendi as men were not allowed there.
Kunj tried hard to see what Twinkle was writing on her hnd. When the function got over twinke was returning to her room.
When kunj pulled her closed but he is cautious as not to smear her mehendi.
Tw.. Kya karahi ho
Ku.. Mein apni hone wali ke sath kuch bhi karoon tujhe kya
Twinkle was wearing a beautiful baby pink lehenga and looking gorgeous as always.
Ku.. Mein bhi toh dekho meri jaan ne mere naam ko kahan likha
Twinkle showed her heart and said yahn
Ku.. Haye meri wari jawan. Tum toh tanliya na mujhe marane keliye
Twinkle made her hands and enclosed his neck kunj made his way towards her bare navel and tickled her and roamed her hands their. She is just feeling the touch. He just bend down and put her legs on his lap one by one and put anklets on it. Twinkle just smiled. He kissed her navel and put kamar band on her waist. Twinkle clutched his hair and he kissed her neck and put a pendent nd said you were looking beautiful baby.
She just hugged him tight and said I love you. Both remained in each other embrace.








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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Part14
kunj and twinkle remained in the same position for some time.
Tw.. Kunj mujhe jana hai
Kunj tightened his grip And said mat jao.
Tw.. Kunj bohth kaam hai.
Ku.. Tu iss mehendi hathoon se kaam karegi
Tw.. Kunj plz janedo mujhe
Ku.. Jane doonga lekin ek shrat par
Tw.. Mein nehi manoongi teri shrat vrat
Ku. Tune mujhe challenge kihai
Tw.. Toh kya kerlege tu
Ku... Mein tere sath kunj bhi karoonga. Aur tu kuch bhi nehi karpaygi
Tw.. Acha karke toh dekho
Ku.. Tu mujhse challenge mat kar mein sach mein kardoonga
Tw.. Mein tumse darne wali nehi hoon.
Kuch.. Tk phir tum baatme mat kehena. Tune aesa kyu kiya.
Tw.. Tu kya karne wala hai.
Kunj pulled her lehenga blouse knot and sensouly touch ed her there. twinkle was shocked
Tw.. Kunj tum kya karehe ho
Ku.. Tumne mujhe kuch bhi karne ki permission dedi toh mein kya Karta.
Tw.. Kunj plz mujhe pehanado, mujhse teri shrat manzoor hai
Kunj just smiled and turned her back towards his front and he sidelined her hair and pulled her closer,
Tw.. Kunj jaldi (senstious tone) she closed her eyes.
Kunj kissed her back, to which twinkle just hitched her shoulder. He took his time and atlast put the knot correctly
Kunj turned her towards himself and gently kissed her forehead and said
Ku.. Twinkle mein aesa koi bhi kam nehi karoonga jisme tume kush nehi hai. Kyunki mereliye teri kushi sabse kaas aur special.
Twinkle just smiled at this. She blushed and ranfrom there in order to hide her blush.
In room
Twinkle was reminiscing all her moments with kunj and cant stop her blush. She saw his name in his hands and kissed it.
Tw.. I love you Kunj. Mein tumse boht pyar karti hoon. Mein tera bina jee nehi sakti. Kaash mein tumse keh pati ki mujhe tumse kabse hogaya pyar. She just blushed at this thought and slept.
Next morning
Taneja mansion
Lee.. Hey vaiguru meri kudi ki vaste apse dua mangtihoon. Usse humesha kush rakna, usse himat dena ki voh ek neyi rasta chunke uspe chale. Aap toh jante ho na ki mein kya mangrahihoo. Jiss cheese se dar ta aaj vahi horaha. Hum sab ne sari muhal walako yeh kediya ki hum delhi se ayen hai. Lekin humto ...chinky wanted something to discuss with leela aunty, but when she came in, she saw her praying, so thought not to disturb her and join her in prayer.
Chinky heared everything, she was sure that Leela aunty is hiding from her something, so without telling her she peeped into twinkle's bedroom. She started searching as if to find some clues. She didn't find anything, but suddenly, she remembered one day twinkle hided somethong in her secret locker when she broke in her bedroom ,Chinky asked twinkle what it was, she said nothing and tried to change the topic. So chinky started finding the key for the secret locker and her face looked worried in searching it.
Mumbai:
All girls r seen wearing white or yellow dresses, twinkle came down in her yellow and white combination lehenga. Kunj eyed twinkle and singined beautiful through his eyed, she just kept ignoring him and kunj noted this, so he waited for the right time to talk with her. they all first applied haldi to Yuvi and then passed the haldi to the girl's side. Yuvi was restricted to see mahi till evening so he was in little sad mode. Kunj started kidding yuvi.All women applied him haldi and washed him with sacred water. They all started preparing for the evening marriage. And hence went to different sides. Twinkle started to move to her room when kunj held her hand and walked with her to the other side of palace, where no one was present.
Tw.. Kunj yeh kya karahi tum hath jodo
Ku.. Kyu chodu zindagi bar hath deneka vagan dene wale hoon.
Tw.. Kunj hum tk nehi karahai hain, hum istara parivaar se chupke se milna aur sabke se samne natak karne mujhe acha nehi lagraha. Mujhe lagta hai ki hume sab kuch bate dena chaiya.
Ku.. Yeh sab hum Baath mein karlenge... when she was about to speak kunj gave her a tight kiss. He pulled her very closr and started kissing her.He sucked her low lips bite her their.she opened her mouth. He made his way towards inside and started exploring her. She clutched his coat tightly and started kissing him back with same intensity. They both unlocked their lips to get oxygen. And they were deeply seeing each other eyes,
Ku.. Twinkle kuch mat bolo, agar tum bolna shuru kardoogi na toh mein kiss karna shuru kardoonga samji. Acha sun mein tere liye Kuch laya hoon
Tw.. Kya hai (she cant hide her blush and kept seeing down.)
Kunj lifted her chin
Ku.. Haaye kitni soni lagrahi hai meri hone wali
Tw... Kunj ...trying to hide her blush
Ku.. Agar tum ek aur baar blush karoogina toh mein apne aap ko control nehi karpaoonga. He said acha tk mein tumko yahan issiliye laya kyuki mein tujko kuch dene wala hoon.
Tw.. Kya.
Kunj made her sit on the bench.
Tw.. Kya karne wale ho
Ku.. Ho hoo siyappa queen wait karna. Tu yahan rukh mein abhi ata hoon.
Kunj came with a bowl of haldi.
Tw.. Yeh haldi kyu lekar aye ho
Kunj applied her haldi in her face,
Tw.. Kunj yeh. He kept his hands on her mouth and continued applying haldi in her cheeks, then hands and made her sit and applied on her legs and all the bare parts, twinkle keep enjoying her touch .
Kunj.. Bohth pyari lagrahi hai
Twinkle pulled kunj and rubbed her cheek and hands against his. And said tum bhi bohth handsome lagrahi ho.
Ku.. acha. He took a tube near the lawn and splashed water over her. They both were playing with water when Jiya came there
Ji.. Kunj Twinkle tum dono yahan kya karahe ho
Ku.. Voh baby yeh mujhe na haldi lagarahithi aur mein isse iski saza deraha hoon
Twinkle glared kunj and thought, kesa acha bachoon ki tara natak karaha hai. Isse toh mein badme dekh loongi.
They both reached the palace and all family members saw both of them were completely drenched.
Be.. Yeh kya bachoon ki tara tum dono kya karete. Aur tum kunj mujhe na tumse akele mein bath karni hai.
In room
Bebe: yeh kya chalraha
Ku.. Be.. Be ap kya puchrahi hai
Be: vahi joh tumere aur twinkle ke beech chal raha hai
Ku: hum dono ek ache dost hain
Be. Acha mujhe aesa kuch nazar nehi araha.
Twinkle was crossing the room when she heard bebe and kunj were talking about them.
Be. Dekh kunj ek ladki aur ladke aese chup chupke se bath karte haina toh logona uss ladke ko nehi sirf ek ladkikohi galat samjege. Agar tu Twinkle ke sath flirting karte rehta hai, toh tumare imge nehi bigdega sirf twinkle ka image bigadega. Kyuki logoka humesha ladki mehi kami nazar aati hai. Ladke karte hai toh tk per ek ladki karti hai toh galat. Agar tumra aur twinkle ka kuch chalraha toh bata dena puttar. Kyuki mujhe pata hai Twinkle ek bohth achi ladki hai. Mujhe usse apnane mein koi problem nehi hai. Tu bus uska izzat mat tootna. Kyunki tum usse kuch aur nazar se dekhraha mujhe voh bath dikraha... batana puttar. Infact hum jiya se bolke usse samjabi lenge. Voh bhi to meri kudi ki tara hai. Mein usse samjoongi. Pyar dil ka rishta hota. Aur mein voh sirf teri aur twinkle ke beech mehsoos karsakti hoon. Sab kuch tk kardenge beta. Teri jawab mein hai. Batana puttar tu usse pyar karta haina.
Ku.. Bebe mein usse pyar nehi karta hoon. Mein sach kehrahoon. Aur mein kyu twinkle ki peecha baagooga. Voh sirf mera dost hai. Aur kuch nehi. Mein sirf bakki ladikiyoonki tara usse sirf flirt karahata. Ab bataya meine aaj tak aapse koi bath chupayi. Toh ab kese chupavoonga.
Twinkle heart broke into pieces. She never imagined that kunj could stoop so low that he only did everything for his happiness
Be.. Twinkle bohth achi kudi. Uski nam mat karabh karne. Agar flirt karbhi raha toh usse limit mein karo.
Aese chup chup ke karne se sablog yehi sochenge tum logoki beech kuch chalraha. Aur mujhe pata hai mere lad koi bhi ladki ki izzat nehi karabh karega samja. Flirting ko mein galat nehi boolungi aaj ka zamana ki bebe hoon mein. Per voh bhi ek ladki hai. Usse parsheen karna bandh kar. Voh tera dost hai. Aur tum uss dosti ka bhi izzat karo. Samaj aaya meri baath.
Ku.. Ji bebe. Mein uska izzat karoongi bebe.
Be.. Shabash beta. Agar tu twinkle ka izzat karega na toh tumari dosti bhi bohth mazboth banegi. Ab ja aut meri bath ka gaur karo.
Twinkle didn't know what to do. She felt a tug in her heart. So returned to her room with heavy heart.











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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Its very complicated
actually kuch samaj me nahi araha
btw update was nice
plsss update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
New twist, y did kunj said like that n what is the secret
waiting for the next part loving ur ff
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Twinke

New twist, y did kunj said like that n what is the secret
waiting for the next part loving ur ff

Iam glad you like it. Actually it is very much important to show a different shade of kunj, i hope you liked it
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Originally posted by: dafodilsduke

Its very complicated

actually kuch samaj me nahi araha
btw update was nice
plsss update soon

I will soon post the next. Tq for the comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Part15
Mandap is ready dulhan is ready, dulha is ready and baarat bhi ready. Humere smart dulhe raja yuvi is seen on the horse. And the whole sarna parivaar is dancing
Here our handsome kunj is so eager to meet her love but where is twinkle, Is his love twinkle? . If she is his love then why our kunj said so. It will b soon revealed. A voice behind said.
Kunj went to search twinkle he went to her room and didn't find her there. He noticed a white note near her dressing table kunj took it and read it
Kunj,
Kyu kiya tune aesa ,kya bigadatha mein tumara, kyu meri dilki sath kela tune, meine sab sunleye tum aur bebe ki bath. Mujhe aaj pata chala ki tum mujhse zindagi mein kabhi pyar nehi karpoogi. Mujhe aaj ehsaas hua ki mein apni life mein kitni badi galti ki tujse pyar karke. Ek ladki kitni baar giregi apni zindagi mein mujhe aaj pata chala. Aaj tak mein kuch bhi kiya tere liye kiya aur tune.. Kher chodo tujse kyu mein bath kyu karahi hoon, mujhe yeh sab pehle samajna chaiye. Jiya ke sath humesha kush rehna. Tum uske sath aesa mat karne joh tum mere sath kiya. Mujhe milne ki kabhi bhi koshish mat karna. Mein tumara shakal bhi nehi dekh na chati. Agar dosti ki naam koi cheese hoti hai toh mujse milna aur mere samne aane bandh karo. Agar tune meri samne ayi na ..toh mein apni jaan leloongi. Meriliya bakki hai meri jaan agar voh bhi chaiyane na toh tum mujhe apni hatoon se marde. Kudh apni jaan nehi ley paayi mein kyunki mereliye meri maa hain joh humesha mereliye jeerahi hai. Mein apne aakri dum tak unkeliye jeeongi. Jarahi hoon Amritsar mein chali jaaongi iss college se door 1 mahine bath, aur tumare life door humesha humesha keliye.
Twinkle
Kunj fell down on the floor and cried a lot. He composed himself and got up and left to mandap.
Wedding
The marriage got ended according to Riti and rivaaj. Yuvi filled her head and tied the knot after walking around the fire for 7 times. .they got blessings from the elders. After simples bidaai. Everyone left simple and yuvi alone as they booked a room for their beautiful night.
Everyone were seen packing their bags when babe went to twinkle room and find her missing.
Be.. Kunj twinkle kahan hai.
Ku.. Bebe voh.. Voh
Bebe.. Voh kya
Ku.. Bebe voh Amritsar chali gayi
Be.. Chali gyai, kab kese kyu.?
Ku.. Bebe.. Uska usski... maa ki yaad agayi.. Toh issiliye chaligayi.
Be.. Usse toh batana chaiye tha na. Hum kitna parsheen hogaihai
ku.. Ussne kaha sab se batakar jayengi. Lekin aao sab busy te issiliye meine usse chodkar aaya.
Be.. Acha kiya tune. Aesa hota hai ek acha dost. Mushkil gadi mein apne dostki sath dekar tune bada kam kiya hai beta. Ab horaha mera kunj bohth bada. Ab agli tumari shadi ki baari hai.
Jiya aur tera jodi humesha bana rakhe baghwan.
In Amritsar
Taneja mansion:
Lee. Kudi tu itni jaldi kese aagayi.
Tw.. Aap kyu nehi aya
Lee. Voh beta mujhe last min koi kaam agayatha issiliye nehi ayi. Aur shadi aaj haina tu kese itni jaldi aagayi.
Tw.. (Turned and wipped her tear) Voh mujhe aapki yaad agayi. Issiliye agayi
Le.. Maa hoon teri bata vahan kuch hogaya kya.mujhe achi se pata hai.
Twinkle cant control now she felt on leela's lap and cried her heart out.
Lee.. Nehi meri bacchi aesi nehi rote
Tw... Maa mere sath aesa kyu hota hai ma. Mein kabhi kisiki bura nehi chaha. Toh phir kyu maa...
Lee. Bachi sab tk hojayenge. Usne tk nehi kihai tera sath. Mein usse nehi chodongi. Usne meri kudi ki dil ttota hai.
Tw.. Nehi maa aap kuch nehi kareenge. Mein vapus apni duniya mein jaana chatihoon. Hum vapus vahi jayenga jahan se hum aye maa. Mujhe toda assignments hai mein usse katam karke yahan se jana chati hoon ma.
Le.. Tk beta tum jesa chayegi veas hi hoga
Pinni.. Kyu didi ji aap aesa humesha apki beti ki baare mein sochte hain toh bubbly ka kya
Raman. Kya bath karahi pinni
Pi.. Meine sab sunli. Jab didi ji chate tei toh hum mumbai se yahan agayi hain. Ab humera yahan sab set hogay joh phir se vapus. Badi mushkil se bubbly ne apni fashion show jeetkar ayithi iss school mein. Mein apni beti ki future nehi karaabh karoongi apki beti ki vajase usne apni friends sabko mumbai mein chod kar yahan ayi. Ab yahan se phir vapus. Humera liye koi izzat hai ya nehi.. iss ghar mein hume bhi kuch faisle karneki izzazat hai yah nehi.
Ra.. Pinni(shouted)
Lee.. Raman tu usse chila mat. Aur pinni bilkul tk kehrahi hai. Mein ek beti ko bacha ne keliye dusri beti ki sath khel nehi sakti.jayenge lekin sirf mein aur Twinkle. Tu bubbly pinni aur pr
Ma ki sath yahi rehage.
Ra.. Lekin didi
Lee.. Raman plz mereliye.
Ra. Tk didi
Twinkle went to her room and cried the whole night and went to sleep.
Next morning
With a heavy heart Twinke opened her eyes due to her phone ringed.
Twinkle got a call from chinky. She asked her to meet her in a park.
In park
Tw.. Kya hua chinky tune mujhe bulaya
Rohan came there
Tw. Toh yahi bath hai tum mujhe apni shadi ki shopping karane keliye layithi.
Ch.. Twinkle tune Mujse itni badi bath chupai
Tw.. Kya chupayi
Ch ..aur tum rohan tum bhi mujse chupaya
Ro.. Mein konsi bath chupaya
Ch.. Jute mat bolo, aur mere samne natak math karo tum dono. Aaj mujhe pata chalraha nah mein tumari dost hoon(turned towards Twinkle) na mein tera jaan hoon(turned towards Rohan)
Tw.. Hum dono ne aesa kya chupaya tumse
Ch.. Acha kuch bhi nehi chupayi abhi batati hoon.
She took a diary from the bag and showed them
Ch.. Ab yeh mat bole yeh tumara nehi hai twinkle.
Flashback
Chinky searched the key finally and got the diary and left taneja mansion. She read all the things in that diary and shocked to know the biggest truth in twinkle's life.
Tw.. Chinky voh
Ch.. Abhi nehi batyegi mujse yeh sab kya hai teri dairy mein har ek page mein ...tu sirf uska hi photo chippa hua hai. Kya hai yeh kya horahai tumari life. Kya mera koi hakh nehi kuch janeka.
She shouted at twinkle to tell her the truth
Twinkle shuted back and said. Haan haan haan sab such hai teri shak sahi hai. tune usse diary mein joh dekhaa sab sach hai. Kunj... Kunj.. Voh.. vahi...mera pehle pyar hai. With a hevy heart she said and breadth out that yes kunj is her first love.
Ch..tu pehle mumbai mein ti na toh kesa yahan ayi. Aur kyu ayi.
Tw.. Mein Amritsar sirf kunj keliye ayiti. Mujhe pata chala usski family yahan ti issilye yahan agayi.
Ch.. Tu aur kunj pehle ek doosre ko jante hai. Kese kab.
Tw.. Mein mumbai mein apni fashion designing ka course shuru kiya tha tab se...
Ch.. Matlab 4 sal pehle
Tw.. Haan lekin mein isse 5 salse pyar karti ayi hoon

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Edited by Sosan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
loved it Can't wait to read the next part please update sooner

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