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Posted: 9 years ago
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Knockkk Knockkk...
A man try to hit the door as hard as possible.
'Why the bell is off' he murmured.
Suddenly a voice raise around behind of him.
'Excuse me Sir'...
He turn around and say 'Yes'...
'Do I notice the lock in the door?' ask the lady.
Man gets a jerk and again turn around.
'Oh!No' he exclaimed in pain.
And all of a sudden he kneel down.
To hard to find the strength to stand only.
'Are you OK? ' ask the lady.
'Yeah!Thank You Mam' he replies and quickly move away from there.
He call someone but get engaged.
He try to calm down but it's go to all in vain.It seems the Earth forget to moving round.
All pasts are in front of his eyes...
FLASHBACK STARTS:-
A handsome guy ring the bell of Sarna House.
After 2 times attepts the door is open.
'Cherry Bhaiya' he speaks out.
'Who is there' asks a lady from inside the house.
Cherry shockingly moves on and lady now get to view of guy.
'K..U...N...J' She is going to faint.
'Bebe' Guy forwards to the lady and hold her and make to sit her in sofa.
'Are you OK Bebe?' asks Kunj.
'Are you alive Puttar?' asks Bebe.
In this mean time Cherry also ask a bundle of questions in a single breath.
'How..When...Where?'
Kunj ask 'can i start from first?'
Cherry replies hurrily 'Yes'.
He start to describe:-After shot in Goa I was found by local fishman.
They saw me all blodded and unconscious and took me into hospital.
The Doc of the hospital took the charge and immediately moved to OT and thankfully took the bullet out,it stucked in my left upper shoulder.But due to loss of lots of blood I got in Coma.
Also my blood group is rare u know but again by God's grace the pouch of that blood group was in their store.
They tried hard to put me in conscious by then but it takes 2 years.
Yeah!he again murmur the word '2 Year'.
He suddenly stand in feet and exclaimed in joy 'Look!Now I am back and as well as fit.By the way where is my crazy family Ma, Papa,Anand Bhai anddd...
'Twinkle' Bebe speaks out.
Kunj see Bebe and easily find the pain in her eyes.
Kunj sit besides her and pull the hand softly towards him and ask 'what's the matter?what was happened in this 2 years?'
Bebe looks on him and tell 'all has been left'.
After a short pause she tell Manu and Usha now is in London with Anand and his family.(Yes,Pinni & Ishu returned back and joined the family after Manu's loss in business overcome...Bebe stops to speak.
Kunj is now getting so worried and ask in his husky voice 'And Twinkle?'
'It's all our fault'...Bebe again cried out loudly.
'If we didn't force to marry her she never left us'.
This one sentence is enough to understand to Kunj 'What was happened'.
He shoulders to Bebe.
AFTER SOME TIME
Kunj is just in front of his room,hesitating to go inside.
'Go Kunj...It's your and always will be.Bebe always take care of this after Bhabhiji left.'Cherry try to assure Kunj.
'And take this.its yours.Bebe tell me to give you.'Cherry give a letter to Kunj and move around from there.
Kunj look at the letter and fear to open it and he decide to open the room's door first.
KUNJ'S ROOM:-
Cherry is right.
All are there like before even Twinkle's belongings.
Kunj look and moving around the room for half an hour and think Twinkle is just left,nothing she took away from here.After thinking it he realise his hand still grab the letter.
He sits in the corner of Twinkle's side of their bed and it gives a imense comfort to him like he just touch her Siyappa Queen.
He try to unfold the letter and atlast succeed with vibrating hand.
It's the last letter from Twinkle for his family.
Ma,Mama,Papa,Bebe
I take a decision.
I leave the house.
I know i hurt you to doing this but I can't be here,This atmosphere haunts me.
I know you want to make me happy again,that's the reason you told me to marriage Yuvi.
But...
I can't.
It's only 1 month Kunj has left.How can i marry to Yuvi?
I know he is changed now,he took all the blames of Anita Aunty.
He will be always my friend.
But this relation needs more than friendship.I can't give him false hope.
I know i feel little weak these days but I will be strong and prove myself 'Kunj's Sherni'.
Love u all.
Give me blessings...
I need this so much.
Twinkle
Kunj put down the letter on bed and feels opaque in eyes.He realises that he is in full tears.
After some time a idea strikes in his mind.
He ring to Chinky but it's say the no.is unavailable.
He again getting depressed.
'Here it is' Bebe enters in room and give a paper to Kunj.
Before Kunj ask anyting there is the number of Chinky.She gave to me in one condition I can't divulge to anybody.Through her I get Twinkle's news.
Kunj suddenly jumps and give a tight hug to his Babe.
Flashback ends.
LONDON
CHILDREN'S PARK
Why are you running...
Stop Prish...
Mama is getting...
Suddenly Prisha cuddling a leg from back.
A man is standing there.
And in reflex he turn around.
Again it seems the Earth forgets to moving round.
Four Eyes sparks like before.
Twinkle...
Kunj...
They speak out abruptly.
Kunj then realises a touch in his hand.
His eyes stuck with a little cutie.
Her eyes just like him.
He pick up her and 'What's Your name?'
She first pouted and then answer 'Priesha'.
'Our Baby' add Twinkle.
'You knew I will come to London' asks Kunj.
'Yes,Chinky told me all' tell Twinkle in heavy voice.
She tell all happenings in her life after leaving Amritsar.How she got to know she will become mother and how she get independent with help of Chinky who was already settled to London then.
'Did you tell about our baby to our family' asks Kunj.
'No' replies Twinkle.
'Still now i don't gather courage to face them'.
'Twinkle...My Siyappa Queen'
This word is just blessings to hear,Twinkle gets shy.
Kunj ring the phone.
'Hello...
Bebe'...

The End

Kiara It's for you.
A little gift from bottom of my heart.
Adi
P.S.-Try to not to do mistake..
But if I am please forgive me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH MY GOD ADIII
This is the best gift ever
Thank you so so much for this...
I seriously didn't expect this
I know you don't really prefer writing but you did for the first time that too for me
I can't be luckier
Coming to story,It was so nice dude
I enjoyed it
It was amazinggg
How Kunj comes back after 2 years
I loved how Twinkle decided to leave instead of getting married to Yuvi😳
and their cute little daughter Prisha
The perfect ending with Kunj calling Twinkle his 'Siyaapa queen'
Mujheee bohot bohot "bhalo" laga,sorry I tried speaking in bengali 😆😆
Once again thank you so much for this perfect gift
I'll never ever forget this❤️
I love you a lot🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.dear..
It's so beautifully written..
Kunj came back aft 2 years..
I loved it tat twinkle decided to leave than marrying UV..
Priesha angel baby..
I always love happy wala stories..
Lots of love.,.,
Lavs and Sriya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god
It was beautiful yar
I mean, wow
You just made everything simpler
The story wad amazing like seriously amazing
Aw prisha was cute and the best part was siyappa queenhaye,
Cuteness and intense action
Good job
Keep writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a very beautiful story.
I really loved it.
Kunj coming back after 2.
Twinkle sab ko chod ke chali gayi.
Twinj ki beti prisha.
Wonderfully written
Keep writing dear.
Goodbye
Love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

OH MY GOD ADIII

This is the best gift ever
Thank you so so much for this...
I seriously didn't expect this
I know you don't really prefer writing but you did for the first time that too for me
I can't be luckier
Coming to story,It was so nice dude
I enjoyed it
It was amazinggg
How Kunj comes back after 2 years
I loved how Twinkle decided to leave instead of getting married to Yuvi😳
and their cute little daughter Prisha
The perfect ending with Kunj calling Twinkle his 'Siyaapa queen'
Mujheee bohot bohot "bhalo" laga,sorry I tried speaking in bengali 😆😆
Once again thank you so much for this perfect gift
I'll never ever forget this❤️
I love you a lot🤗

Love u K always.
Be Happy & Take Care.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow.dear..

It's so beautifully written..
Kunj came back aft 2 years..
I loved it tat twinkle decided to leave than marrying UV..
Priesha angel baby..
I always love happy wala stories..
Lots of love.,.,
Lavs and Sriya..

Thanks Lavs.
Love to Shriya.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..queen..

Oh god
It was beautiful yar
I mean, wow
You just made everything simpler
The story wad amazing like seriously amazing
Aw prisha was cute and the best part was siyappa queenhaye,
Cuteness and intense action
Good job
Keep writing more

Hey Shaks,
You like it...
Many Many Thanks.
I will try to write yaar...
It's need thinking and patience,
And I found that I don't have any of quality.
But I promise you try to write.
May be a FF.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

It was a very beautiful story.

I really loved it.
Kunj coming back after 2.
Twinkle sab ko chod ke chali gayi.
Twinj ki beti prisha.
Wonderfully written
Keep writing dear.
Goodbye
Love
Sayli

Thank You Sayli
And dear don't feel sooo sad.
I know you surely will overcome from your sadness.
You know Time never stops.
It change always...
Good to Bad
& Bad to Good..
Take Care
Aditi

Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so beautiful piece aditi...loved it to the core..kunj returning back after 2 years and twinkle having a daughter..it was so good..if such could have happened in the show...but anyways ur story made me so happy...u indeed gave kiara a very beautiful farewell gift ..
Edited by J.arora - 9 years ago

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