Twinj os : Miscarriage.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys do try to bear the emotional part.

Twinkle was roaming up nd down the bed when she fainted in kunj's arms. Kunj immediately called a doctor. The doctor gave said congrats Mr. Sarna twinkle is pregnant. Whole sarna family was happy with the news of twinkle being pregnant. Kunj fainted with too kuch excitement.
Half n hour later twinkle nd kunj got up nd congratulated each other on becoming parents nd hugged each other.

First month of pregnancy

Kunj was trying to make twinkle drink the milk. Twinkle refused saying she does not like it. Kunj said main tumhe thode hi peene ko keh raha hoon twinkle its for our child. Twinkle said agar aisi baat hai to tum bhi mere saath peeyo. Kunj said tujhe pata hai ki mujhe milk nahin pasand hai. Twinkle - thheek hai hum log half half milk peeyenge. Twinj happily drank half the milk.

2nd month of pregnancy.
Twinkle woke up kunj at 2 am nd said kunj mujhe chaat khaani hai. Kunj meri siyappa auedn subah ke do baje kahaan se tere liye chaat laaun. Twinkle suddenly started crying nd demended chaat. Kunj said oh meri sweet siyappa queen thheek hai tere liye kuch bhi. Kunj went to kitchen nd within half nd hour made bhelpuri nd panipuri for health. Kunj knew that she might want to eat junk food like this so he got all those ingredients which were used in chaat. Twinkle ate chaat nd then demanded chocolate. Within 5 minutes kunj got chocolates for her. Kunj had made one resolution in mind to fulfill all wishes of twinkle.

3rd month of pregnancy.
Kunj got many toys nd cradle for his child. He was very excited for the baby nd decorated the room. Kunj told twinkle he had a big surprise for her nd told her to come in the room. Twinkle was surprised to see half room decorated with boys stuff nd half with girls stuff. Twinkle laughed at this.

4th month of pregnancy.

Kunj took twinkle to hospital for her check up. The doctor said that twinkle's health is normal.

5th month of pregnancy.

Everyone were out except kunj, twinkle nd ishaan.
Kunj went to take a bath. Twinkle was feeling thirsty when she decided to get up nd go to kitchen to have water. Twinkle starting walking fast when she slip nd fell down the stairs very badly. Twinkle shouted but before kunj could do anything twinkle become unconscious.

Immediately twinkle was rushed to hospital.
Doctor said i m sorry kunj but right now twinkle is in critical condition. So kunj u have two options either to choose twinkle or the baby. Kunj immediately replied twinkle. Everyone were shocked with this decision but understood his plight too.

After an hour.
The doctor announced the baby was no more.
Kunj was really shattered from within nd started crying. All were shocked. Bebe comforted kunj nd said - puttar samhal khudko warna tu twinkle ko kaise samhalega. Kunj slowly tried to calm himself down.
Doctor- twinkle ko hosh aa gaya hai. Kunj went in twinkle's room. Twinkle- hamara bachcha kunj nd started crying. Kunj was trying to consle her but could not do so s he himself was not able to come to terms with it. For abt an hour twinj embraced each other nd cried.

It was not till everyone came in that they left each others hand.

Next day.

Twinj came home.

Twinkle was angry with kunj for saving her nd not her their child. Kunj tried to explain it to her but twinkle was in no mood to listen. Twinkle stopped talking to him nd slept in another room.

Some days later.

Kunj felt guilty of letting his child go whom he had not seen but had a sort of a connecion with it but knew that he did the right thing of saving his life his wife. Kunj was still not over the fact that his wife twinkle was about to die nd again started started crying. All this took an emotional toll on his health nd his health started deteriorating a lot. There were times when kunj nd twinkle closed their doors nd cried whole night

Everyone were trying to make twinkle understand but to no avail. Bebe went to twinkle nd said -dekh twinkle puttar mujhe changi tarah pata hai puttar ki jo kunj ne jo kiya woh thheek nahin kiya lekin tu khud soch na ki jab doctor ne yeh baat bataayegi hogi ki aap sirf ek ko bacha sakte to us waqt kunj par kya beeti hogi. Dekh twinkle puttar mujhe mere hisaab se kunj ne jo kiya woh thheek kiya. Twinkle -par bebe bachcha. Bebe -puttar meri gal sun kabhi kabhi hum jise sabse zyada pyaar karte hai unhe babaji apne paas bahut jaldi bula lete hai. Ab ja jaldi jaa kunj ke paas waise bhi uski tabiyat kharrab hai aur har waqt bas tera hi intezaar karta rehta hai.

5 minutes later.
Kunj was sleeping.
Twinkle tiptoed in his room nd kissed kunj's forehead nd kunj lightly smiled. It was burning badly with high fever. Twinkle put cold cloth on kunj's forehead nd he started shivering a lot. Twinkle switched off the hugged kunj. Kunj was murmuring twinkle plase mujhe maaf karde please. Twinkle put her fingers on his lips. Kunj woke up with a start. Kunj saw twinkle but turned his face another side s he was not able to face her. Kunj had big drops of tears in his eyes. Twinkle kissed away his tears shocking kunj. Twinkle sat near him nd said mujhe pata hai hai ki tumne jo kuch bhi hai woh mere liye hi kiya hai aur jo kuch bhi karoge woh sirf mere liye hi karoge. Twinkle kissed kunj on cheek nd made him lie down on bed. Kunj lightly whispered twinkle aaj ke baad tu mujhe kabhi tu chhodegi to nahin na. Twinkle kissed him lightly nd said nahin. Twinkle made kunj sleep peacefully after a long long time. Twinkle kept checking his temperature which was slowly decreasing. Twinkle slept near kunj's bed incase he wanted something.

A week later
Kunj was fully fit nd fine.
Kunj decided to talk to twinkle.
Before kunj could say anything twinkle just hugged him nd embraced him tightly the whole day.

A year later.
Twinj had a baby boy named ayaan.

Ik it might be boring.
Do drop in ur comments.




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Shaveerkti thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ress
& don't u were say my eshu's stories r boring...They r very very interesting...
Unress

Eshuuu...
This is soo sooo...goooddd...

The way u explained months...👏

Kunj making chaat @2 & healthy chaat-such a caring husband😳

Chocolate in 5 min...-super fast kunj sarna

Then the miscarriage,kunj...twinkle...😭

Loved bebe...

Kunj...fever...twinkle's care...twinkle kissing the big big tear drops ...-eveything was very nicely penned down...

Then the last two part was bliss...

TWINJ baby...Ayaan...😳

I love stories with a happy ending...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like reading emotional writings... tq so much fr dis... nd fr d pm as well...
Love u a lots tikit
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eshu I knew what you wrote at first and for this my panic was increasing by each passing month.
And at last the day arrived;it was really worse to see them in pain.
But the beauty is that our Angel Bebe took part into the matter and solved it.
And last it's a boy and I love this.
& Esh,Please don't call it bore;it's really a amazing piece.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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soo emotional eshu😭
right from the first month...
i expected it to end with the miscarriage...but no...
it was a painful moments..
loved it yaar...
and...don't dare to call it a boring piece of writing...its beautiful..
nice os eshu

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice story.
I loved how you showed the emotional trauma on both Kunj and Twinkle.
Well written😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for liking it sanju, adi, komal, shreya, meh. Shavs unres soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. eshu..
I missed it..
Now happy to read..
Emotional one with happy ending..
Do write more..
Plz don't say ur stories boring..
I loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow 👏 👏
This was so nice E!
I liked how you described the months of pregnancy...
I think the greatest loss ever for a couple would be to lose their baby.I doubt if there is something even more painful than this.
You described their sadness so well
And I love you for giving it a happy ending 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superbly amazing in a wrd , eshu...
Wntd smthng to read lyk tht ...
Big hug

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