twinj os ::two clutched fists of shirt and a smile:: - Page 2

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Aww so cute awesome os😳😳

oh thank you !!
im glad you liked it

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

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aweee its so amazing Sakshi

Kunj and Mann are so damn cute they made food for Twinkle aweee and the way you showed Mann almost biting her tongue was superb
And Twinkle thought of surprising them was also a good one
that line about the trio family's every member is perfect
true Twinj are the other name of perfection so their daughter also
and that last part was utter cute two clenched fists and a smile suppperrb

thank you !!!
hehe, I wish yeh sab actual mein hum sab dekh pate,
thank you so so much

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

OMG...

FOR ME...😳

THANKS MY QUEEN WRITTER...

'll be back after reading

I m back...

At first...The way u start ur story saying-"A queen imagination" is really different & it brings a sudden curve on the Readers lips..

Now the story,

1.The description of Morning...was...Wow.!

2.Twinkle cocconed in white sheets...the panicked twinkle...Walking of two figures..-The word choice & arrangement was simple yet perfect..

3.The explanation of Mann holding tray was..So cute..!

4.Loved the GOOD MORNING RITUAL...😳

5.The line Chef kunj & daughter Sarna la Salem Mahotarma-Showed father-daughter bond & family bond in a sweet funny way..❤️

6.Talented Pati- No argument on that kunj is kunj...🤣

7.Daddy-daughter breakfast for Twinkle...Awww..👏

8.Mann sitting in twinkles lap & her explanation-Sweetu baby Mann..

9.Twinkle saying I m Blessed was so Twinkle & total bliss

10.The way u explained their goodlooks not only TWINJ but also Mann proved that it's indeed A Queen Imagination...

11.The Last portion of story can't be described in words...

The way u portrayed every thing from kunjs sitting position & holding Mann & remote & his attire...Twinkle kissing her both babies & the smile on their face...

Kunj waking up & seeing his two most precious & inseparable part of his life sleeping clutching his shirt...

The Peace...

The Bliss...

The Perfection...

Is Inexplicable...

#I DIDN'T LIKE THE STORY, I LOVED IT...!🤗

#THANKS MY LONG LOST SIS...FOR DEDICATING IT TO ME...

LOVE YOU...

#Stay Blessed

now that was a long nice comment, (psst I love long comments)
so im gonna give you a nice long reply
thank you,
hehe, im glad u find it different and nice, hopefully everybody does.
yeah, I know, mann has to has to has to be the most adorable kid on earth, not more than me though, cuz she's twinj's daughter
yup, kunj's so kunj, that I had to use that line, lol
awww, im so glad u made this point like description, it made me smile real big though.
well well, im honored you didn't only like but loved it, my mehnat didn't go waste after all
oh you're a sweetie so you got a dedication, lets hope im the first to do that, *smiles wide*
you too
love you loads,
sakshi

ps. sorry, zyada lamba nahi tha
maafi maafi

Hayeee that was so cuttee

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Queeennn!!!!!!

This was absolutely adorable! !!!!!!

I love your stories. You portrayed those little instances of daily life was beautifully, the reader can't help but fall in love with it

How darn sweet of Kunj and Mann to prepare breakfast for Twinkle on her big day!!!!!😃😃

And Twinkle reciprocating with movies and popcorn😳

But dude the last part was BLISS! IT WAS MAGICAL, BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL👏👏

2 clenched fists of shirt and a smile...LOVED IT

❤️

🤗

here comes the comment i wait for the most
sistaaa !! *runs to hug you*
just so you know, i was in bed, eating a donut while reading this comment on the phone, and after that i got this hugeee, hugeee smile on my face and started dancing.
i was thanking stars the door was locked, not that my family dosnt know im insane, but i can swear i looked funny.
i am so so so so so glad you liked it !! like so so glad,
plus that coming from you is BIG stuff man, so yeah, thank you loads
i literally thought it wanst one of my best pieces but you guys liked it, so im not angry at me . lol
oh that last part,hehe, i would say im glad, but then pehle bol diya hai, so thank you so much
loads of love
meee

Originally posted by: Zainakhalil

Hayeee that was so cuttee

Loved it to the core

Definitely kunj is handsome and smart

Our twinkle is no less she is also sexy and smart

Our sweet twinj and mann

Give us some more like this :) :)

hello,
thank you !! im so very glad that you liked it
hehe, will sure write more,
uski tension na lo

Originally posted by: ..queen..

now that was a long nice comment, (psst I love long comments)
so im gonna give you a nice long reply
thank you,
hehe, im glad u find it different and nice, hopefully everybody does.
yeah, I know, mann has to has to has to be the most adorable kid on earth, not more than me though, cuz she's twinj's daughter
yup, kunj's so kunj, that I had to use that line, lol
awww, im so glad u made this point like description, it made me smile real big though.
well well, im honored you didn't only like but loved it, my mehnat didn't go waste after all
oh you're a sweetie so you got a dedication, lets hope im the first to do that, *smiles wide*
you too
love you loads,
sakshi

ps. sorry, zyada lamba nahi tha
maafi maafi

Originally posted by: ..queen..

here comes the comment i wait for the most
sistaaa !! *runs to hug you*
just so you know, i was in bed, eating a donut while reading this comment on the phone, and after that i got this hugeee, hugeee smile on my face and started dancing.
i was thanking stars the door was locked, not that my family dosnt know im insane, but i can swear i looked funny.
i am so so so so so glad you liked it !! like so so glad,
plus that coming from you is BIG stuff man, so yeah, thank you loads
i literally thought it wanst one of my best pieces but you guys liked it, so im not angry at me . lol
oh that last part,hehe, i would say im glad, but then pehle bol diya hai, so thank you so much
loads of love
meee

Awewww that ws so so so cute sakshi..

This was so cute!! Like really one of ur best ones!! Really loved it!! But I really miss sid!! 😭 n all I could imagine was Sid as Kunj n no one else