Twinj FF- The Perfect Couple Ch43 Pg57 27/12 - Page 43

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shraja

Guys any ideas for further plot??
Pleassseee help !

Hey shraja

This epi is so cute... I so loved caring Kunj... Well about further plot u can show twinkle having some issues in pregnancy and she hiding it from Kunj and family coz Kunj is very happy to be a father and she didn't want to ruin his happiness and for his sake she wants to continue her pregnancy and give birth to baby even though it takes away her life... Then later Kunj gets to know about this and he breakdown and ask twinkle to abort bit she isn't ready to... Something like this emotional track u try to bring up...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shraja

Guys any ideas for further plot??
Pleassseee help !

Yah you can show complications in twinkle pregnancy.
But my opinion is you can show twinkle and kunj seperation but no fights. , like bebe wanted twinkle to stay in Amritsar so she could take care of both baby and twinkle bebe and whole family wanted twinkle to stay in Amritsar they all think that it is very difficult for Kunj to take care of both twinkle and the baby at sometime. Daily twinkle and kunj were talking in phones and twinkle badly wanted Kunj by her side. One weekend kunj appeared Amritsar as a surprise and twinkle and kunj moments after a long week. If this idea is already given Iam really sorry guys. But I would just go with that idea. But yah you can show anything as your post is always loved by me.



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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy shraja..
Again it was amazing dear..
Luvedd it it..
And about the next part i would just like to suggest that when twinj goes to amritsar and informs them about pregnancy so everybody would be really happy and den u can show 2 months leap and than something like twinkle wud meet with an accident or she wud fall from stairs and den she wud have miscarriage
And den u can show twinkle'z heavy breakdown and emotional scenes and kunj supporting her and caring and den u can show some extra wild twinj..
Hooe u wud like my suggestion and the rest is on u i know whatever u wud choose it wud be perfect just like u...
Luv u dear and keep posting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii friends!
Well I have tried for 5 days to write something but it is as if my brain has been drained out. I type and then it is not good, so I erase the content. This is so frustrating. If it goes like this I may not be able to complete the ff. I don't know what is happening! I can't write further.

So if someone wishes to write further 1 chapter, they are most welcome! You could write a paragraph or two and "pm" me. I would edit it and write further. This would be like a kickstart to my brain. And definitely the credit would be given.
Otherwise I am afraid I won't be able to continue anymore!

PLEASE HELP!
😭

Love, Shriti!
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
It ws lovely, thank you so much shriti
Seesha thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
It was amazing dear..
Lovedd itt...
Do post soon and plzz show twinj romance i have been dying for it..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys atleast have the courtesy to read and give the feedbacks! It means a lot for a writer.
There are hardly 2-3 people who comment nowadays.
Sorry for this sudden outburst, but it hurts when you take days to write a chapter and you get hardly 2-3 feedbacks!
And that's why I don't read other ffs and os.. because if I read, I make sure I comment!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey shaja
This epi is amazing as always...Kunj lifting up twinkle and saying now only I can left u up as u will become fat is so cute and funny... Kunj saying twinkle bol na ki mai maa banne wala hun is damn hilarious 🤣 the way family members where saying their relation to baby is so sweet... Waiting for next... Trying posting soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
😛 embarresed moment for kunj main maa bannaewala huvery happy
update..keep writing

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