Backfire new twinj Ts-.plz read PART 2 UPDATED PAGE 2

Hi everyone! I joined recently on India forums. This is my second story. First I did a short os for the KKB forum. Today I wanted to do one for Twinj and I may change it to a ts as I might not have time to finish. Wish me luck! Any feedback is ok bad or good.
Kunj is very rich but still has the same character.

(Yuvi kidnapping Kunj)

Yuvi men cover Kunj face with a bag...
Yuvi: ab tere twinkle meri honewali hai Kunj! Aur tu kuch nahi kar payega.
(Signature nose thing 😆 )
Men take Kunj away to my farmhouse.
Farmhouse
K:uv?! Tu yaha? Yeh kaise possible ho sakti hai?
Uv: haan! Mai UV aur tujhse aur uss twinkle se apna badla poori karne ke liye.
K: tu bhar kaise aaya?
Uv: oh toh iska matlab twinkle ne tujhe kuch nahi bataya (tells him story)
K: how dare u do this uv? Khabardaar agar tune meri biwi ke pass bhi gaye toh!
Uv: bye bye

At Sarna Mansion
T: mai aaj pure dil se Kunj ke honewali hoon. Aaj usse sab kuch bata dungi.
B: twinkle puttar mai aaj bohut kush hoon ki mere dono bacche phir se ek hone wale hai.
L: haan puttar mai bhi
U: twinkle mandap mein baitnein ka vaqt aa chuka hai. Jaldi aao.
L: Chalo ji.


(Uv replaces Kunj place)
(Pheras going on)
RUKO!!
A voice enters

To be continued very soon... Sorry if my Hindi was bad! And I apologize for any mistakes. NO INTENTION OF PLAGIARISM 😃 I know it's not interesting but the next part will be great plz keep reading I have a good plan for the next part n hope for the best. Any feedback is ok:):)

Awesome can't wait for d next part

this is interesting. lookong forward
Welcome to forum. myself Jerry

This is interesting. Looks like its kunj. Do update fast. I am tikit. Welcome to forum.

oooh that sounds interesting !!
well, welcome to the forum, im sakshi
please update soon, cant wait to read more

It sounds interesting.. eagerly waiting.. 😃

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Awesome can't wait for d next part
[BR][DIV]WELCOME TO OUR FORUM buddy[/DIV][DIV]whats your name?[/DIV][DIV]I am Harshi btw[/DIV][DIV]Hope u have loads of fun with us.[/DIV][DIV]We r glad to have u here[/DIV][BR][DIV]click on d link[/DIV][DIV][URL=/forum_posts.asp?TID=4621144]http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4621144[/URL][/DIV]

Thank you so much! And my actual name is Samshritha and if u want u can call me by any nickname I'm fine! I will continue soon. [:D]

Originally posted by: sbsmartness4

Thank you so much! And my actual name is Samshritha and if u want u can call me by any nickname I'm fine! I will continue soon. 😃

Then I will call u Sam what say.
It's a nice name u have there it's unique😊

Btw did u click on d link it's for newbies on our forum.

Originally posted by: harshi2000

[BR]Then I will call u Sam what say.[BR]It's a nice name u have there it's unique[:)][BR][BR]Btw did u click on d link it's for newbies on our forum.

Yes it's great and ya I clicked on the link thanks for the welcome

Hi guys! I'm back with PART 2

(Yuvle marriage pheras)
Ch: arre gud 4 nothing kam teekh se karna drinks teekh se serve karo! Rrriinngg!(phone)
Ch: Mai abhi aaya bebe yeh call attend karke.
B:tk jao.
...
RUKO!
A voice entered.
B: Surjeete?! Tu kab aaya?
S: Haan Bebe! Mai hi hoon. Mai amritsar mein kal hi pohunch Gaya tha.
B: toh phir ghar kyon nahi aaye?
S: woh bebe Kya hain na ki meri gadi raaste mein khrab ho gayi thi toh ab aaya. Par Bebe, yaha ho kya raha hai aur anita ji kaha hai? Anita ji? He yells out.
A: Kya hua
SLAP!!
👏
S:tumhe sharam nahi aati? Kaisi aurat ho tum? Mujhe apne aap par ghussa hona chahiye ki Maine tum jaisi aurat ko pyaar kiya. Ek aurat hoke tum ek shaadi shuda zindagi kharaab karoge?!
A: Aap k..ky..kya bol rahe hai!
S: KUNJ KAHA HAI!? Maine pucha KUNJ KAHA HAI ANITA?
A: Kunj waha hai mandap mein.
S: aaccha? Kunj hatao uss sehra ko
UV hesitates...
S: teekh hai Mai hi uttar tha hoon
(S removes sehra everyone shocked)
ANOTHER SLAP TO UV
S: Bol kya kiya tune?
T: toh yeh tha tera plan? Bol mere kunj kaha hai?
Uv: Janna chahati ho toh suno.
Maine Kunj ko kidnap kiya. Aur pata kya, Maine usse maar dala. He's dead! Hahaha!
SLAP
T: Teri himmat kaise hui mere Kunj ko hath lagane ke liye? Mujhe pata hai tune usse nahi maara. Tu jhoot bol raha hai!
Uv: Yakeen nahi hota baby?! Toh yeh dekh(shows a picture of Kunj laying on the ground unconscious)
T: Yeh nahi ho sakta! Yeh sab Teri wajah se hua! Mai tujhe jaan se maar dungi!!
Police inspector: uski koi zarurat nahi hai Mrs Sarna kyonki woh jail mein sadne wala hai ek kidnapping ke jurm mein.
T: thank you inspector, le jaiye isse!
(UV leaves)
(No Anita from here)
T: mera Kunj...( is about to cry)
...
Tere Kunj ko kuch bhi nahi ho sakta! Someone said
All turned to see..
T: KUNJ!! Runs and hugs him(sajna ve plays)
K: please rona band karo tujhe pata hai mujhe acha nahi lagta.
T: I'm sorry Kunj Mai tumhe sab kuch batane wali thi par yeh sab hua.
K: tujhe safai dene ki koi zarurat nahi.
T: I love you Kunj K:I love you twinkle
B&U&L: par bhai yeh toh batao ki ho kya raha hai?
S: aap betiyen Bebe Mai batata hoon.
B: bol

Flashback...

S: (sees something) oye driver, gadi RUKO!
Yeh toh Kunj hai na? Woh log usse kaha le ja rahe hai? Mujhe pata lagane padega.
( he follows them)
Over hears KUVI convo...
Uv: sab meri mom aur mera plan tha! Twinkle ko blackmail karna tujhe ek ek bottal khoon dene ke liye, aur pata, humne tum dono se dhokhe se apni divorce papers par sign liya, aur ab Mai tere Jagah bet ke meri twinkle se shaadi karunga mai aur tu kuch nahi kar payega!
K: chod mujhe agar tune meri biwi ko haath bhi lagaya toh haath paau tod dunga.
Uv: awaaz neeche kar! Warna tere twinkle ko hi nuksaan hoga!
K:yuvra...! (Goon hits kunj head with a branch).
They tie him up others leave while one stays back.
S: (thinking) mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki Anita aur yuvraaj itna ghatiya log hai! Aur Anita mujhse sirf Leela ji aur twinkle se badla lene ke liye shaadi ki!(Here Surjeet is very emotional, gullible, and no riot loves manohar as brother). Mujhe Kunj ko bachana hoga!
(Comes behind and hits goon with rod)
Surjeet unties Kunj pours water on his face, and takes him to his car.
K: Tauji aap?
S: haan Mai . Tu chinta mat kar Maine sab sun liya aur hame jaldi se ghar chalna chahiye. Shaadi ki rokna hai!
K: haan Tauji chaliye!
They reach house...
S: tu Abhi andar mat aa, pehle cherry ko phone karo aur usse batao kya hua aur usse bolo ki jab uv sab kuch confess karega toh Wo record kare evidence ke liye. Aur uv aur Anita ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki tu zinda hai warna hamara plan kharaab hoga.
K: teekh hai tauji.
FLASHBACK ENDS

S: toh iss ke baad aap jante hai. Woh recording cherry ne inspector ko de diya.
T: thank you tauji agar aap nahi hote toh aaj Mai uss janvar se shaadi kar hi leti.
S: na puttar agar Mai anitha se shaadi nahi kiya hota toh yeh sab nahi hota.
T: nahi tauji aap ki galti nahi hai
...
In twinj room:
K: Twinkle
T: haan bolo Kunj
K: tu mujhse pyaar karti hai?
T: of course karti hoon puch kyu rahe ho
K: toh phir apna promise pura karo na 😉
T: konsa promise
K: wahi.. Wo kiss wali promise..
T: 😳
Just like every time, yuvi's plan was backfired once again and Kunj is still desperate for twinkle to finish her promise 😆
The end!
So how was it? Sorry if my Hindi was bad. I tried to get as many slaps as possible 👏 ! Sorry for any mistakes! NO INTENTION OF PLAGIARISM. Any feedback is ok. Waiting for your feedback! Thx.