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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys I just wrote this in 15 minutes so bear with me it's short.but forum isn't active so I thought kuch dhamakedaar kam karoon lol
Excuse me it's not that polished or good but jaldi mein aisay hota hai

Enjoy.

Twinkle sat against the rough wall. She could feel the cold seeping into her back and she felt numb.not because of the cold but because she was tired of feeling so much.
She felt her mind would explode the first night she spent in jail.if it hadn't been for kunj coming in she would have combust with grief and anguish.
What had her life changed to. She was so happy basking in the warmth of newly confessed love.finally mending bridges with her sister. Her mother in law had accepted her whole heartedly.she finally had someone she could call her's. The love of her life kunj due to him she had gotten so many relationships.she finally felt complete.
All of it ruined due to the enmity luthra's shared with tanejas
All of it ruined because of yuvraj luthra's obsession to attain her.
Her sister dead,murdered and her blood was used to feed this growing fire between them.
That's what had broken her but no she would not let her sisters death another one of the cold cases. Her sister would not be a file number among dozens of dust ridden files.
She had had enough of the luthra's destroying her life her family.
All this time she had seen her mother defending never doing something to harm anita but not now.
Now the fight had shifted. The players were changed.
The generation that started would no longer be a active player.
She would end this game with yuvraj luthra. She would no more be defending.she will attack ruthlessly and mercilessly. She would weaken them to the core just like they had used maahi and her weakness against her. Then she would push them off the cliff of success into the deep abyss of this very prison where she was made to suffer.
She had enough of playing by the rules. Now no more rules and no more consideration.
She would defeat them this time she was sure not because she had a plan,she didn't have one yet but she was sure because she knew she had kunj by her side. Together they both would write the ending of this dark chapter that luthra's had started. The game was on. This time it would be more dangerous and more lethal after all everything is fair in love and war. And this was a war for love.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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In 15 min dang Ian! I loved it
Especially the ending, war of love...TwiNj will definitely win
but haan activity todsa low hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3dancelover

In 15 min dang Ian! I loved it

Especially the ending, war of love...TwiNj will definitely win
but haan activity todsa low hai


Haan record time hai mera I take days to write normally.
Thankyou uma darling
Twinj r winning it for sure

Yeah but abhi thori jaan ayi forum mein and now I'm gonna be busy
I knew yahi hona tha lol

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1


Haan record time hai mera I take days to write normally.
Thankyou uma darling
Twinj r winning it for sure

Yeah but abhi thori jaan ayi forum mein and now I'm gonna be busy
I knew yahi hona tha lol

ya i realized how difficult writing is. Hats off to all the writers of the forum. TwiNj will win for sure, end of Luthra is on the horizon

And mai bhi, abhi mera free period but in a while its gonna end. So cant comment either!

When do you think Mahi is gonna come back? And you should update your SS on controlling desires plzzz, lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it...in 15 mins Ian!?? Wow...I usually end up writing hours long...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i loved it Ian..
15mins😲 wow... good going👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow..only in 15 mins.. Ur idea totally Conveyed Darls...
Sahiii hai.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3dancelover

ya i realized how difficult writing is. Hats off to all the writers of the forum. TwiNj will win for sure, end of Luthra is on the horizon

And mai bhi, abhi mera free period but in a while its gonna end. So cant comment either!

When do you think Mahi is gonna come back? And you should update your SS on controlling desires plzzz, lol


So true I love writers on this forum highly creative and amazing
I'm super excited for luthra ka downfall
I hope it's soon
This shouldn't be dragged alot it should be crisp like cvs usually do like with rajjo track.
Yeah I remember it. Just let me get around to finishing it will update then
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

Loved it...in 15 mins Ian!?? Wow...I usually end up writing hours long...😆


Same here sanju I take days or hours but abhi jaldi mein kuch likha tha coz forum was dead

Thankyou
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is wonderful Ian.
Wow amazing in 15 mins.

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