Twinj OS: Main Hoon Hero Tera

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

--Nazakaat--

@--Nazakaat--

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

emotional first half and tender and cute second half

perfect...i loved it to the core

u r an amazing writer👏👏⭐️

tanejas...pity..very pity👎🏼

sorry and thanku wala setup??...nahi date wala setup😉😉😉...i loved it...how cute is that😳😳

awsm well written one shot👏👏

do write more

Quote

Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved it.
I agree with Twinkle being upset with her family, no need to be Mahaan nd all.
Date sequence was good. Kunj understands Twinkle well nd knows how to make her happy.

Do write more

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anjum

@Abhia2Twinj4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Www it's so cute so lovely 😳❤️

Quote

neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Oh...This story is giving me them feels and I am loving it!

Great job buddy 👏👏

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters
Awesome OS loved it very very much!

thank you so much! :)

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: teddyyy
YAY another one! Unfortunately I'm working on my English paper right now so this will be my prize LOL, will leave a nice comment tomorrow inshallah! (:

aww thanks! good luck on your paper😊

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
Very very cute...
Really Loved it..
Date.Wala Set Up...
So cute...
Taneja's deserves this...

aww thank you so much! so sweet of you!😊

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
wow awesome OS
loved it
pls write more

thanks so much😊

will def try and write more (its not too hard really twinj are on my mind 24/7😆)

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: vina88
Awesome😳

thanks!

Quote

...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Culdnt keep my self away from dis forum...so thought I would read sumthing nd dis one was perfect...
loved it to the core...loved TwiNj. .nd the small kiss was even more cute...
do write more

thank you so much! and i'm happy you picked my OS to read😳

😆 wish we got more twinj scenes on the show as well (loving the ones we have now but kya kare dil maange more)