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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ hope you like this os , please hit like adn leave your feedback ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Be intehaan


Kunj was on his knees ... He just had a shower ... and his hair was wet ... he was wearing a orange shirt and pants ... He was placing a candle on the cake... Their anniversary cake ... At that moment... Twinkle came out of the washroom... She was wearring a pink and blue salwar suit ...

her eyes fell on the cake and then ... kunj... he was looking so handsome ... with his wet hair... Soon , kunj saw twinkle ... she was looking gorgeous ... he stood up ... And covered the cake ... little by little ... he got lost in her beauty ... he was intensely looking at her ... and taking slow and steady steps to reach her ... she was standing near the balcony..


Suno na suno na
Kahe kya
Suno na suno na
Dil mera
Suno na suno na
Sunlo zara

shewas trying to understand his sight ... that intense gaze... in the time sh shewas thinking ... The next momeny ... he held suddenly held by her waist and pulled her closer to him by her waist... she collded against his chest and placed her hand there... She fwlt shivers running through her body. ... And ... Her heart startd beating fast...



Teri bahon mein
mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri bahon mein
Hogi subah


Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan

Twinkle was sonehow trapped...his strobg arm was on her waist... And she couldnt run away anywhere this time ... She looked at His brown eyes ... She slowly surrendered herself in front of him... As she couldnt even try to push him... She couldnt ... She was captivated ... In his love...


Dekha karon
Sari umar
Sari umar

Tere nishaan
Be intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe
Meri khabar na rahe
Choole mujhe iss kadar
Be intehaan

He looked at her trembling lips... slowly... Leaned fowrward...they were feeling each others breaths... Twinkle clutched his shirt As she saw that kunjs lips were only ffew mm away from hers ... so she closed her eyes ... Being unable to take his gaze... But he didnt do what she was expecting... he moved towards her right side... And placed a kiss on her ear... And whispered " i love you...twinkle" Making her blush ...

Jab saanson mein teri
Saasein ghuli toh
Phir sulaghne lagey
Ehsaas mere mujhse
Kehne lagey
Haan bahon mein teri
Aake jahan do
Yu simatne lagey
Sailaab jaise koi
Behne lagey

He placd His other hand on her waist ... He got back and looked at her... Her closed eyes ... Then... She slowly opened her eyes... and looked at him... She can clearly see that his eyes were filled with questions... Asking for awnswers...

Unknowingly... Twinkle said what she felt for him... What she always felt for him : " i love you too kunj ... Right after she pronunced thpse words... Kunj hugged twinkle... Then... Twinkle just realised what she had said few seconds ago...


Khoya hoon mein
Aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahan ab
hosh mein
ye raat ki
Ho na subah
Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan

Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm

She then closed her eyes and hugged him back... Tightly... Getting completely lost ihim...feeling secure in his arms... After a while. ... Kunj broke the hug... Twinkle didnt want the embrace to end ... It ws too soon... She wanted to stay in his arms more...

Gustakhiyaan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum karein
Is tarah
Sharmake do
Saaye hai jo
Mooh pher le
Humse yahan
Haan choo to liya hai
Yeh jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Anfaaz bheege bheege
Kyun hai mere

They shared a pationate and intense eyelock ... Kunj ... Without breaking the eyelock ...lifted twinkle in his strong arms and walkd towards their bed ...


Haan yun choor hoke
Majboor hoke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege
Kyun hai mere

He gently placed her on the bed... And while placingher...he inclined towards her... Slowly... Twinkle could feel his hot breath on her face... They werenow only few mm away from each other... They werelooking at each others eyes... Kunj had an inmense pation in his eyes and twinkle looked at him lovingly...

K : Happy anniversary twinkle... ( hhe said ... Kind of whispering ... atherlovingly... )

T. Happy anniversay kunj... ( she replied with epqual love )


Do bekhabar
Bheege badan
Ho besabar
Bheege badan
Le rahe raat bhar angraaiyan

Then ... Kunj eyes fell on the clock... It was 12.05 ... And they had to get up eary because the whole family had to go to gurudwara ...

K. Raat bahut ho gayihai twinkle ... I think humein so jana chahiye ...

And he starts to leave to go to the sofa where he sleeps ... But twinkle holds his hand and doesnt let him go ...

T. mat jao na kunj ... Mere paas reh jao aj... Please...



Be intehaan
Be intehaan be intehaan
Yun pyaar kar
Be intehaan
Dekha karon
Saari umar

He sits on the bed ... Besides her... And softly caressed herface ... Twinkle closd her eyes and feels his hand on her face ... He was looking ather lovingly... All this timehehad hid his emotions hiis feelings for her ... But today he wished to tell her how much he loves her... After awhile... Twinkle opemedher eyes... She sw the most beautiful and pure emotions in his eues for her... ..

And ... the next moment . ... . He was sleeping right next to her ... His hand was twiinkles waist ...And twinkle was sleeping peacefully side hugging him...

Tere nishaan
Beinteha
Koi kasar na rahe
Meri khabar na rahe
Choole mujhe iss kadar
be intehaan


PS : please ignore the typo mistake please

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Amazing yaar...awesome os...do write more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Lovely update.
Both confessed so cute.
Edited by Duumps - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
beautiful update dear. really adorable <3 please do wrire more <3 loved it. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
It was awesome...loved it..โค๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36



thanku so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

im gald you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: hurrom

Amazing yaar...awesome os...do write more..



thanku dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thinking of a concept
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hopefully pen it down ๐Ÿ˜ณ

thanku ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
aww.. it was super cute os
just loved it
keep writing more !!

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