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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear friends

Lets write an episode for TMKOC which would not only be good in terms of content but also has lots of laughter. So let your creative juices flow...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well let me try, following story is really pathetic disgusting... well I too agree but still its fun compared to that Munnulal Magician or angry Colonel.

The Nightmare

Tappu,Champak, Jetha & Daya goto their ancestral village during summer vacation. After a month, they return back to Gokuldham society only to find out that things have taken a turn for the worse ..like

Tappu Sena (gang) has been taken over by Pinkoo!! Now Sonu,Goli,Gogi show no respect for Tappu.
Babita-ji has shifed to USA, after Aiyyer got a job in NASA!
Natto Kaka and Baghaa double crossed Jethalal and took over his shop using fake power of attorney documents!
So now Jetha is forced to work as a salesman cum accountant in his own shop.
Which means severe money problems for Jetha family, like no more phone-calls to Daya's mom, because they can't afford the bill!
Champak buddha has been diagnosed with cancer cum TB cum Hepatitis cum heart problem and they need Rs. 50 lakh for his liver, kidney, knee, heart & hip replacement surgery.
And unlike the previous episodes, Tappu can not help him because Tappu Sena now only accepts Pinkoo's commands. And Pinkoo has no interest in whether Champak buddha lives or dies.
As Jetha cannot afford this costly surgery, he seeks Matkaa-king Mohanlal's help.
Mohanlal lends him the money only on the condition that Jethalal will do all the match fixing and hawala-transactions for him.
So, our beloved Jethalal becomes a hawala operator cum cricket-bookie.
On one such occasion, Mohanlal orders Jetha to recover money from a punter in A'bad, who owes him 1 Cr. rupees in cricket betting, and if that punter refuses to pay, kill him.
It turns out that the punter cum scamster is none other than the great Sundarlal.
Can Jethalal recover the money from Sunder? And if not, will Jethalal kill Sundar? OR will Jethalal arrange the money on behalf of Sundar to save his own marriage?

I'll write more later. You can also add more to this track.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one Mrunal_Patel.
It definitely would have more laughter than many of the recent episodes. But let us keep this as a dream sequence of Dayaben or Champak chahcha or Bhire.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kk1974

Nice one Mrunal_Patel.
It definitely would have more laughter than many of the recent episodes. But let us keep this as a dream sequence of Dayaben or Champak chahcha or Bhire.


Thanks! Adding another twist to that preview story-
Mohanlal also forces Jetha to handle the illegal liquor trade between A'bad & Mumbai. Sodhi also joins the gang, providing jeep-ferrying servies so that he can do party-sharty every night free of cost!
Popatlal adds another feather to yellow journalism by agreeing not to write any story in Toofan express about this, provided that Sodhi & Jetha supply him one English bottle every night!

But soon, they're caught by police and Champak buddha has to come to bail them out of the police-station (Sad background music ? He ji re....He ji re..?)



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