A Bouquet of Seasons(SwaSan Drabble series)-Part 1 Pg 1

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Dearest Viji,

This drabble was on the top of my bucket list but somehow I forgot. 😭

Winter Chill... hmm... You portrayed that juncture pretty well. I wish we could see something like that. At least we would have been spared from the torcher of Swara's character assassination by Ragini track.

Swara and Sanskar both had each other's mementos and the warmth emanated from them probably helped them to bear winter chills! Their plight could be palpable, in case of Sanskar it was worse. He had to bear the pain of losing her to someone else. He couldn't even claim it as his loss! Finally the ice melted and they could breath the breeze of happy spring... In the hope of sunny summer... heat rising between them perhaps? 😉

Hey don't keep GPP in hiatus for too long. I'm waiting!

Love,
Dyuti

P.s. Why don't you join wattpad?

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Viji darling...

I just cant explain my happiness in words that u came back for us...thank u n love u alot...seriously missed u...

About the newest drabble..it made me super excited...part 1..winter chill...well it was not quite chilly..i felt the warmth of early spring in it...

Though Sanky beared the pain of seperation, rough patch inhis life..seperation from swara was tough...n the little pinch of pain knowing lucky's constant visitation at her house...made him quite unsettled...liked how he distance himself from her...giving her space n time to take decision...

Sanky n swara convo..just made my day ...it was easy going talk...so much fun...it showed how both are pining for each other...but did not say...their unusual topics of discussion...jurrassic world...n all..it was soo sweet...made me all smily...both are idiot...specially swara...not realising what sanky meant to her...

Looking forward for next...summer rain...the title itself made me curious ...waiting...

Love u

Talia

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jess_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

vijiii... im so so so happy to see you back here.. and you know how much i missed you... thank you so much for this.. and also sorry for the delay in my comments..

i wonder, have you ever written anything that i have not loved.. this one was so so so beautiful.. the entire part where you depicted sanskar's pain was heartbreaking..

the part when swara calls sanskar, and that bit really got tears in my eyes.. it was wonderful..

you always pay full attention in depicting the smallest detail, that reading your story is like watching a movie.. i can picturise each and every thing..

all in all.. loved the first part.. waiting for sanskar and swara's meeting.. im sure that will be beautiful as well..

update soon..

love

Jessica..

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

My 5000th post...

My dearest dearest sis,🤗🤗

The mere fact that I am writing a comment on one of your writings is making me teary with nostalgia, but the moments that were reflected in the tale itself made my eyes moisture more, until I had to stop and wipe my eyes with the back of my hand for my vision had gone blur.

There are few things SwaraGini had left in my mind, sharp, vivid and kind of hurting. And all of them are memories of the beautiful couple that was SwaSan. The Sanskar that you brought out with this is the character I fall in love with. The man who I admired for his strong will and deep feelings for the woman he had lost his heart to. I was in awe of the depth of his affections, and those memories were refreshed with this shot.

How wonderful it is, that a simple one shot could make you time travel. For a moment I was back in the era of SwaSan --Lak, when we were making fun of Lakshya's bratty behavior, having daily discussions on how SwaSan should end up together. Those were some of happiest times of my life, and thank you so much for bringing back a glimpse of them to me.

I miss you terribly, and reading your writing too. You know you're the writer I idolize after. That quality in your writing is something I thrive to achieve. Your words always touch my heart, set my imagination running and makes me feel so satisfied once I finish reading. You're one brilliant soul I was fortunate to meet, and I really hope our bond would always remain as strong as it is, no matter how busy our offline lives makes us...

I wish you all the good luck for the challenges on your offline world dearest sister. You will always be remembered in my prayers. Everything will be sorted out in the best way. Even amidst obstacles I'm glad you made a comeback to the forum. This place is not the home it used to be if you're not here. I'm waiting for my vacation to make an official come back. It is only two weeks away, then I will be around more often, hopefully.

In the meantime, please don't forget me.

Love you loads like always,

Saku

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chemgirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Hi Viji Di,

A beautiful update...this was probably the best phase of Swasan...I loved the carefree and comfortable chat they have with each other...a blend of friendship, love And longing...waiting for the next update.

Hope you are doing well.

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Dear viji,

Welcome back after a long gap. Hope everything will return into its place in ure life. Have hope on god and leave everything in his hand. He will take care. As your story itself tells after winter surely spring will come. Same appears in life as seasons changes n bring new hopes same in life sadness n happiness comes. Everything wil be fine.

Back to story its really nice to read about swasan again. Its like watching serial again but in different story line with dame concept. In serial sanskar asking swara ti give lucky second chance and she accepting lucky as friend and ragini playing her game with lucky swara anf sanskar was boring. But you have another thought in your mind. Swara and sanskar talking normally a cute conversation bets them. Swara is clear about lucky that he his just friend and Sanskar is her "best" friend. Its nice to read the story in this perspective.

And waiting how swara will realise her love for sanskar. As season changes and bring us new hope same how their friendship will blossom in to love and how they will fight against all odds and have a life.You have left in cliffhanger. Waiting for next update to see their love blossoming.

With love,
Divya.

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aamias

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

viji

what should i tell u a genius or a beautiful writer everytime i log in and find ur stories i am overwhemed how could someone co relate seasons with love and feelings u r always marvellous