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Posted: 8 years ago
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Socha na tha...Never thought..Part5

PART-5...Swara and Kartik arrange a cake for Sanskar to celebrate his birthday.
They wish him:Happy birthday Sanskar.
He smiles:Thank you.
Karthik:Cut the cake yaar.I am craving to eat it.
Swara:Stupid..it's Sanskar's birthday cake ,but you are thinking of finishing it.
Karthik gives an embarrassed smile.
Swara notices the dull face of Sanskar.
Swara:Sanskar..why you don't look happy though it's your birthday.
Sanskar is silent.
Swara:Understood.Missing Ragini.Right?
Karthik:Don't worry dude.There is a solution to your problem.
Suddenly Sanskar sees Ragini coming from Swara's back.He can't believe his eyes.
Sans:Ragini?
He keeps looking at her without blinking eyes.Everyone laughs.Ragini waves her hand at Sanskar.
Sanskar smiles.
Swara:How is our surprise Sanskar?
Sans:Really it was a surprise.Thank you so much guys.
Ragini:Happy birthday Sanskar.
Sans:Just a wish?No other gift?
Ragini:This cake was brought by me to celebrate your birthday with me.
He is surprised:Really?
Ragi:Yes.You thought I will ignore your birthday?No way.
He smiles:Thank you Ragini for making my birthday special.
She smiles.
She lights the candles on the cake.He blows out the candles.She holds his hand and cuts the cake.Then she puts icing on his face giggling.
Sans:Oh no..
Everyone laughs.
Sanskar takes the cake and starts eating it crazily.
Ragini:Oh God Sanskar...are you crazy to eat like this?
Karthik:Hey buddy..don't finish off the cake fast.Share it with us also.
Ragini:Yes..please Sanskar...
Sans:No way.This is my birthday cake and I won't share it with anyone.
They all show baby angry face.
Karthik:So cruel you are.

Suddenly Sanskar burst out laughing and puts cake piece in everyone's mouth making them smile.
After some time..
Ragini:Now I need to go guys.
Sanskar feels sad.
Rag:Don't be upset like a kid.You are coming to my house only.
Sans:But a short separation is also unbearable for me.
They share an emotional eye lock.
Rag:Bye..
Sans:Wait..
He goes close to her seeing icing on Ragini's cheek.He wiped it with his lips.
Ragini blushes.They share a romantic eye lock.She goes away blushing.He smiles.




Swara Comes to visit Sanskar.Ragini comes there:Hi Swara..how are you?
Swara:I am fine.
Actually Ragini..I have arranged another house 4 Sanskar.
Ragini feels sad:Sanskar,plz don't go...
Swara:what's this Ragini?its 4 Sanskar's career.its true that this house was lucky4 Sanskar.but he has 2 change his house.there different producers & directors cum.it'll bring favour 4 Sanskar.
Ragini:ok...if it favours Sanskar's career I agree with Swara.
Sanskar feels sad.
Sanskar:i'm going from this house,not from ur heart Ragini.
Ragini smiles.

Ragini's dad Om & mom Naina plan 2 come to India.that eagerly awaited day cumes. Ragini-dadi-shamit go 2 the airport 2 receive them.they were very happy.surprisingly Raj Uncle & devika aunty{their family friends} were there with their son.Ragini is seeing them after many years...
Om:Ragini,can u recognise who this is?
Ragini looks at the guy {their son}.
she was surprised:Laksh!what a gr8 surprise.
Laksh:wow!so u remember me?
Ragini:Yes of course...I remember you Laksh,We were childhood friends.
Laksh:That's great.I am very happy that you still remember me.
Ragini smiles..

After reaching home Ragini tells Om:dad,i want 2 tell an important matter.
Om:what's that?
she:i'm in luv.
Om:wow!u r in luv?how did it happen?may be ur luv was at 1st sight..bcoz i had told him not 2 contact u till we reach here.bcoz i was planning 2 giv u a surprise.
Ragini:dad, whom u r talking about?
Om:about Laksh,
Ragini is confused:Laksh?
Om:Yes.You remember the surprise gift I arranged for you.
Ragini:Yes,I was waiting for it.Still I am waiting.
Om:The wait is over Ragini beta.Laksh is the surprise gift u were waiting from me.
Ragini was shocked:no,this can't happen.
Om was shocked:why?
Ragini:bcoz i luv Sanskar.
Om is shocked.
Om:who is he?
she:he is a famous playback singer.
Om:i'm sorry beti,i can't agree with u.
Ragini was shocked:is it my dad who is talking like this?i can't believe this.
Om:bcoz i promised them that i'll conduct this wedding.plz Ragini...
Ragini cries:no papa,i promised Sanskar that i won't leave him.
Om:when i told u about my surprise 2 u,if u had given me a hint about Sanskar,i wud'nt have continued going with this idea,but now its too late ...it'll harm my reputation.if u don't mind ur dad getting insulted b4 others i'll conduct ur wedding with Sanskar.do u want that?
Ragini becomes upset:Papa...
he cries:i beg u Ragini...
Ragini:no papa,i wont allow u 2 get insulted b4 others.i'm willing 2 marry Laksh.
Om was relieved.Ragini was upset.she lost her sleep.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
Sanskar Birthday Part was so Nice.😊
Ragsan Conversation was so Nice.😊
Om fixed Ragini Marriage with Laksh,it was so sad.😭
Om only thinking about his Reputation not about Ragini's life,it was so sad.😭
I hope eveything will be fine soon.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved Sanskar-Ragini birthday scene. It was quite romantic. Nice that Swara has arranged an accommodation for Sanskar so he could shape up his career. Shocking that Ragini's dad brought Laksh and didn't agree for her marriage with Sanskar. Ragini gave to her dad's emotional pressure. Will Sanskar be heartbroken and obsessed about Ragini or will he move on with Swara?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Very nice update
It's lovely
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update, superbly written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Lovely birthday surprise
Poor sanskar was sulken till he saw ragini
Now he's away
N Laksh has arrive n her father emotionally blackmailing her into marriage
Looking forward to sanskars reaction n see what's gonna happen
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Nyc FF dear
Loved it!!
Loved Ragini's prank on sanskar and his back answer
Loved the camaraderie between swara and sanskar
Loved their confession part too
Sanskar and ragini celebrating birthday together
Ragini's dad brought her alliance for laksh
Ragini denied to oblige her father's words and her father denied to accept Ragini's endurance for sanskar
Looking forward to know who sanskar will react
😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Thanks for the pm dear
Looking forward to the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Hey please don't separate RagSan...please...is RagLlak marrieage photo thats why in the poster??? Will they get married?? Please no...I trust you haan...but loved the cute RagSan scenes today...Ragini cares and loves so much for Sanskar , loved the cute birthday scenes...they were just awesome...Ragini and Sanskar's love is so beauitufl...they can't live separately even for some time and they got separated...but yup that was for Sanskar's benefit...but now...RagLak?? Scary yaar...please make laksh as the cupid and don't make him villian...please...you increased my desperation for next part...please soon...Love you...be happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Socha na tha...Never thought..Part6

Part-6...Ragini being in love with Sanskar is known to the whole family now.
Naina scolds dadi:its all bcoz of u.whydid u make that stupid singer stay in the outhouse?she went away with Ragini's heart.now he is more important 4 her.

dadi:i never expected this 2 happen.i did'nt know that there was a romance going on between them.

Naina keeps on blaming her.

om goes 2 Sanskar's house.
Om:I am Ragini's father.
Sanskar was happy 2 welcum him:Come inside..please sit Uncle.
Om:Ragini told me about ur luv.
Sanskar smiles:she had told me that her luvly dad will surely conduct our wedding.

Om:i'm sorry Sanskar,i came here 2 tell u 2 4get Ragini.
Sanskar:what?
Om:i promised my friend that i'll make Ragini marry his son Laksh.he is a smart guy.
Sanskar:uncle,why can't u tell ur friend about our luv.we can't liv without each other.
Om:how can i tell him like that after giving him word? my reputation...
Sanskar:ur reputation is more important than ur daughter's happiness.Ragini told that her dad is a very understanding luving person.but i feel the opposite about you now.
Om:luv is sacrifice.why can't u sacrifice?
Sanskar:its very easy 4 u tell .but do u know the pain a luver has when he has 2 sacrifice his beloved?
Om:be practical and think about its after effects.

Sanskar:do u think Ragini will listen to ur words?
om:yes..sure..she is practical.she understood what i told.she agreed 4 the wedding.the day after 2morrow is her engagement.
Sanskar is shocked:no never.Ragini won't.
Om:if u hav doubt u call up Ragini.
Sanskar phones her.Knowing that it's Sanskar Ragini becomes weak.
Sanskar:Ragini,ur dad told that u r going 2 get engaged with Laksh.is it true?
Ragini did'nt get words bcoz of pain.she weeps silently,

Sanskar:Ragini say...i can't liv without u.
Ragini cries and disconnects the phone.Sanskar becomes upset.

Ragini comes out of the college.She is shocked to see Sanskar there.
She is not able to face him.She turns off her face.
Sans:Ragini...I wanted to meet you personally.That's why I came here to meet you.Tell me that you did'nt agree to marry someone else.Your dad was lying to me.Right?
Sanskar is restless.
Ragini is silent.
Sans:Ragini ..tell me..
He turns her towards him with his hand.
Ragini's eyes are full of tears.They share an emotional eye lock.
Ragini:My dad does'nt lie Sanskar.
Sans:Means..?
Ragini:It's true that I agreed to marry his friend's son Laksh.
Sanskar is shocked:No,this can't happen.It's a lie.
Rag:No,this is the truth Sanskar.

Sanskar is shattered.He is numb for some moments.
Sans:Then what about our love Ragini?What about the dreams we saw together about ourselves?
Rag:Not every love can be fulfilled Sanskar.And may be our dreams are the dreams to be broken.
Sanskar weeps:Why Ragini?I know still you love me.Then why?
Rag:Because I can't disobey my papa.I don't want him to be embarrassed before others because of me.Sorry Sanskar.I can't go against him for you.This is my condition.Please try to understand.Let me go and forget me.
Sans:I can leave you.But don't expect me to forget you.I can never do that.
They share a teary eye lock.Ragini walks away painfully.Sanskar drowns in pain shedding tears.




The engagement day...They dress up Ragini.She wears a grand navy blue choli.puts ornaments and mehendi. she was shedding tears.

Tum ho gham ko chupaye, mai hu sar ko jhukaye Tum bhee chup ho, mai bho chup hu, kaun kise samjhaye Abb duriya itanee hain toh, milna yaha kal ho naa ho - (2) Too vekh tai lai aj raj ke apne sariya nu, chetee apne nahee mil de Ja banno pave khushiya te dil dariya too Pave arman sab dil de Sach hai ke dil toh dukha hai, hamne magar socha hai Dil ko hai gham kyon, aankh hai nam kyon Hona hee tha jo huwa hai Uss bat ko jane bhee do, jiska nishan kal ho naa ho Har pal yaha je bhar jiyo, jo hai sama kal ho naa ho...(Kal ho na ho).




Om :Ragini,wipe ur tears .otherwise others will doubt.
Ragini wipes her tears and smiles.
Ragini is taken to the hall.she pretends 2 be happy b4 others.Laksh was not taking his eyes off her.He smiles at her romantically.Ragini smiles back.
Laksh:Ragini...you look so gorgeous...you are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen in my life.

She gives him a pale smile.

They exchange rings.

Sanskar was taking liqour in his house.Swara comes and becomes upset seeing his condition.
Swara:Don't drink like this Sanskar.
Sans:I will drink Swara.
Swara:No,you can't destroy yourself like this.
Sans:I am already destroyed ever since Ragini left me silently.She did'nt even say a word about break up.Let me finish.
Swara weeps and holds him:No Sanskar..don't do this.I will not let you destroy like this.

Sanskar pushes away:Don't interfere in my life Swara.When Ragini does'nt bother about me why should you bother?
Sanskar cries bitterly.Swara sheds tears seeing his depression.

Lajsh's mother Devika:Ragini,do u sing now?when u were small u used 2 sing.
Naina:ya..she sings.but she never sings b4 public.Actually she is shy.

Laksh was excited:Ragini,u plz sing 4 me.
Ragini hesitates as she is in a sad mood.Ragini agrees 2 sing after a while seeing Om's face.
she starts singing...


Mere dil ko yeh kya ho gaya, mai na janu kahan kho gaya
Kyon lage din me bhee rat hai, dhup me jaise barsat hai

Aisa kyon hota hai bar bar, kya isko hi kehte hai pyar
Mere dil ko yeh kya ho gaya, mai na janu kahan kho gaya
Kyon lage din me bhee rat hai, dhup me jaise barsat hai
Aisa kyon hota hai bar bar, kya isko hi kehte hai pyar


she dreams about her moments with Sanskar while singing this


Ho sapne naye sajne lage, duneeya nayee lagne lagee
Pehle kabhee aisa na huwa, kya pyas yeh jagne lagee
Madhoshiyo kaa hai samah, woh jukne laga asman
Khamoshee banee hai juban, chaide hai koyee dastan
Dhadkan pe bhee chaya hai khumar, aisa kyon hota hai bar bar


Laksh goes 2 a dreamworld with Ragini. He imagines romancing Ragini with burning passion.


Ho ayne me jo dekha toh dekha, aaye sharam ankhen jhukee


Dhak se mera dhadka jiya, ek pal ko yeh sasen rukee


Abb choree satane lagee, rato ko jagane lagee


Mai yuhi machal ne lagee, kuchh kuchh badal ne lagee



Jane rehatee hu kyon bekarar, aisa kyon hota hai bar bar



Mere dil ko yeh kya ho gaya, mai na janu kahan kho gaya
Kyon lage din me bhee rat hai, dhup me jaise barsat hai
Aisa kyon hota hai bar bar, kya isko hi kehte hai pyar: Ishq Vishk



Laksh:You are a nightingale Ragini.

His parents:We agree with Laksh.Ragini is a beautiful singer.
Everybody smiles.
Ragini:Thank you.
Laksh looks at her deeply:When you sang I fell in love with you more.
Ragini feels pain.

Naina:Why don't we have some dance?
Everyone:Sure.

Music is played.

Laksh dances with Ragini passionately.
Each moment seeing Laksh's love for her in his eyes her heart beats painfully.

( Jaaniye Heeriye
Jaaniye Heeriye


Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu


Kya Paya Nahi Tune


Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu


Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata


Mitwa... Kahe Dhadkan Tujhse Kya
Mitwa... Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa )... (2) - kabhi-alvida-naa-kehna


after the function without even changing the dress,Ragini sits in her room thinking about her painful separation from Sanskar.Om comes.
Ragini:my acting was'nt bad,right papa?
om:still u can't 4get Sanskar?if so,i'll bring him 2 u .

Ragini:no papa,i'm trying 2 4get Sanskar.

Sanskar is lost and becomes a big drunkard.he loses his concentration on career.he rejects the singing offers he gets.his career goes down.


Laksh visits Ragini.
Laksh:Ragini..why don't you come with me to my house too.
Laksh forces Ragini 2 come 2 his house with him.
dadi:b4 wedding girls r not supposed 2 go 2 their future husband's house.
Laksh:o,come on dadi,its a blind belief.plz send her.We belong to the modern generation.Nobody believes in this superstition.
he forces a lot.atlast dadi agrees:Ok.Fine.
Laksh becomes happy:Thank you so much dadi.
Dadi:but on 1 condition,i'll also come with u both.
Laksh did'nt like it:What?Why should you come with us?I mean what is the need of that?

Dadi:If you don't want me to join you both Ragini won't be coming to your house.

Laksh:Oh..I have no problem with that Dadi.You too come with us.
Laksh hides his irritation of Dadi joining them.

They 3 go 2 Laksh's house.Laksh's family welcomes them.
dadi roams about 2 see that big house.
Laksh holds Ragini's hand.Ragini shivers:Laksh..
Laksh:Come with me.
Laksh takes Ragini 2 his bedroom.
Laksh:this is my bedroom,oh sorry...our future bedroom.
Ragini feels weird. she sees a framed photo of their engagement that's kept over there.
Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago

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