ENDLESS LOVE TS part 2A updated

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Endless love TS



Hey guys...this is my first swasan os!I am excited regarding the upcoming track and bit disappointed wid swara after yesterday's episode!so wanted to share by views! please excuse any grammatical errors!

Part 1

Swaragini never thought dat their idea of opening a marriage bureau would be a success let alone famous!"Shaadi Mubarak" is now one of the best and recommended bureau in whole of Kolkata for planning for wedding! They r everyday flooded wid customers from all around Kolkata!


Swara was right now in one of such events!they had got a contract from a well known businessman for his daughter's wedding!he had then invited swaragini to a party thrown for his daughter's future!

Ragini was not able to make it so swara had to go alone!


Swara thought abt the events dat took place few days back!Jus two days before sanskar had come to know dat laksh was actually in hoogly working as a mechanic!when asked why didn't he come home,he answered dat he felt guilty and wanted to repent for his mistakes!when ragini came to know abt it,she left laksh saying dat he never cared for her!


She remembered her conversation wid ragini


Flashback


Ragini- swara try to understand!laksh didn't even think abt me once before taking such a big decision!agar wo hamse sach mein pyaar karte tho wo kabhi Aisa nahi karte!


Swara- par ragini tum meri baath...


Ragini- nahi swara,tum hamare baath suno! sanskar ki koi galti nahi thi! U hav given him so much pain wid Ur words six months ago!and too for a mistake he never did!hamne bhi bohot saare galtiyan ki hai swara, lekin tumne hame hamesha maaf kiya hai, hamara saath diya hai tho phir sanskar ka saath kyun nahi de sakte!hamare baath maanlo aur sanskar ke pass wapas chali jaao!


Flashback ends


Swara knew dat whatever ragini said was correct but her ego got the best of her!she couldn't admit it!her thoughts came to a halt when she heard a lot of commotion behind her!she turned to see many people lined up to welcome a VIP! After few minutes, the person entered wearing a black suit looking devilishly handsome and ravishing!(I know tum log imagine kar rahe ho) . ofcourse it was sanskar! His posture was like an arrogant business man who doesn't take crap!he met everyone and moved towards the married couple! Swara was shocked to see sanskar walk past her without giving a second glance towards her!she noted with immense jealousy dat his sexy secretary was walking behind him ogling at him every second!

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Sanskar's eyes never wavered from swara from the second he saw her wearing a beautiful red dress!she was looking absolutely breathtaking and he didn't want anything but to go to her and take her in his arms and never let go!but he couldn't!He had warned himself to not to come close to swara again after she had accused him in ragini's kidnapping! But he had disregarded it and now he was suffering!

Now the pain was 10 times more! Her words dat she said to him six months back were continuously ringing in his head! He promised himself dat he wouldn't make the same mistake again! He realised someone was calling him!he turned to the person who was revealed to be his secretary pinky!


Pinky(nervously)- sir aaj mein Kaise lag rahi hun?


In normal situation, sanskar would've blasted her off for asking such a question for her boss, but he saw dat swara was nt standing too far and was actually listening to their convo!


Sanskar(fake smilingly) - bohot beautiful lag rahe ho!I think u r the most beautiful looking woman in this party!


Pinky(happy)- thank u sir! Aap bhi bohot handsome lag rahe hai!


Sanskar came closer to her and said(smirking)- Really?


They talked for a while and sanskar turned to find swara actually gone! his eyes wandered from side to side to see if she was there but she was not!


He decided to go look for her!se found her standing near the bar wid a man who was trying to come close to her!

*******


Swara's blood was boiling seeing sanskar wid his secretary!she was sitting near the bar! She couldn't handle their closeness and ordered something to drink which unfortunately turned out to be some kind of alcohol!she felt her whole world turn around! She felt someone's Hans on her shoulder!she turned to find a man standing wid a smile looking at her from top to bottom!


Man- I hav never see a more beautiful girl in my life


Swara(not in her senses smiled)- really,so sw(hiccup)..sweet!


That man was coming closer and was about to touch her waist when a hand stopped him!he turned to see sanskar looking at him wid anger!


Sanskar- uske pass bhi gaye na tho mein tujhe jaan se maaf dunga!


The man was scared and apologised and left


Swara- arre...kaha naa rahe ho!aur bolo mera bhare mein!meri dress Kaise hai!tumne bathaya nahi!(looking at sanskar)why did u ask him to leave?


Sanskar- stop it swara!chalo mera saath!mein tumhe ghar drop kar dheta hun!


Swara- nahi mein nahi jaaunga!tum jaao na tumhare wo secretary tumhari wait kar rahi hai!I hav to find dat man!tumhe patha hai usne kaha ki mein beautiful hun!it's been 6 months since someone called me beautiful!(she looks at him while saying the last line)


Sanskar was stunned for a second but he pushed all his thoughts aside!


Sanskar(held her hand)- swara meri baath suno. Chalo yahan se!


Swara(removing her hand from his and saying by looking at his eyes)- kyun...abb mein tumhe khoobsurat nahi lagte!


He wisely avoided answering dat question but swara didn't!


Swara- bolo...mujhe patha tha!mein khoobsurat nahi hun(saying this she started crying childishly by sitting Indian style on the bar table)

She was crying so loud and sanskar panicked when guests started looking towards them!


Sanskar grabbed swara's arm and dragged her from the party !she was all the way protesting!he forcefully made her sit in the car and they left!


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Swara(still drunk)- tumhari problem kya hai...


Sanskar(angry)- shut up swara...what the hell were u doing? Tumhe andaza bhi hai vo aadmi kya kar raha tha tumhare saath? B***d


Swara- usne Aisa kya kardi!he jus complimented me na?! Aur kya kiya usne?!


Sanskar- koi bhi aise Kaise compliment kar sakta hai!


Swara(drowsy)- haan sanskar..wo tho tumhe Karna chahiye tha na?!...


Sanskar was stunned to hear that!


Swara- par tum tho apne so called secretary ke saath busy the!


He had no idea what to say!


Swara(innocently)-kyun sanskar? Tum mere taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe ho? Mein tumhe ab khoobsurat nahi lagti? Tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte?(said by cupping his face)


Sanskar had a very hard time focusing in driving especially wid swara pouring her heart out!it has been bloody six months since he had been this close to her!he wanted time to freeze here itself but controlled!

He removed her hands from his face and avoided her!


He dropped her off at the baadi! Swara by the time they reached was fast asleep!so he had to carry her in his arms inside her house!


Everyone were shocked to see swara in an unconscious state and too wid sanskar! sanskar explained the events and placed swara on the bed slowly!

Shomi wanted him to stay for sometime but he didn't want to be there for even a section!he excused himself saying dat he had some imp work and left!


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MORNING


Swara woke up wid a terrible headache!Ragini entered and gav swara lemon soda for the hangover


Swara- thank you ragini!per mein yahan Kaise aaye? Mein tho party mein thi?


Ragini- sanskar chod kar gaye the!


The moment she heard the name sanskar she felt all the events that happened yesterday came to her mind!she didn't know what sanskar was thinking abt her now!jus then her mother came in


Shomi- Shona... sanskar aaya hai tumse milne!


Swara was overjoyed and jumped from her bed and ran outside!she saw sanskar standing at the entrance!he saw her and

Sanskar- Hi..

Swara(nervously)- hi

San- mein bas tumhe kuch deine aaya tha!

Swara(confused)- kya?

Sanskar handed our some papers to her!she opened it and wid a shock realised dat it was divorce papers!


Swa- sanskar ye...


Sanskar- ab toh Sab kuch teek ho Gaya hai swara!laksh wapas aagaya!ham vaise bhi saath nahi rahte aur na rehna chahte hai!toh mein soch raha tha ki iss rishte ko officially khatam kar de!


Shomi- par beta...aise Kaise..ek mauka tho do shona ko!

San-kyun dun maa?..kitni mauka dun!Isne kya kuch nahi kaha mujhe!iss keliye hamesha mein hi galat hota hun!

Laksh meri mom ke bare mein itna kuch bola!koi bhi beta wo Sab sunkar gussa hi karega! Meine bhi vahi kiya!lekin iske liye sirf mein galat hun!laksh koi chota bachcha thodi na hai ki wo Jo bhi karega hame use maaf kardeni chahiye!

Aur kya kaha tumne...rishta todna ke shauk hai mujhe!tumhare so called behen aur mere Bhai ne hamara shraad kiya tha! Lekin wo Sab tumhe galat nahi lagta! Jab ragini Aur laksh koi galti karte hai toh woh ek misunderstanding hai, lekin jab kuch karta hun, tho wo meri ego hai!

Lekin abb bas bohot ho Gaya!tum abi ke abi ye divorce papers sign Karo(and gav her a pen)


Swara knew that she had overreacted dat day and right now she regretted it!

She had no choice but to sign the papers as sanskar was not listening to anytime!

Sanskar took the papers and turned to leave but stopped for a moment and turned to swara


Sanskar(sadly smiling)- I never wanted more from u swara!I jus wanted a place in Ur heart!and expected dat u would atleast make me Ur first priority for once! Par tum vo bhi nahi kar paye!mein hi galat tha ki ye soch liya ki tum bhi mujse pyaar karte ho!

Tumne kal mujse pucha tha na ki mein tumse pyaar karta hun ya nahi!karta hun swara aaj bhi karta hun, but farak sirf itna hai mein tumse jitna pyaar karta hun na utna nafrat bhi karta hun!yehi sach hai!


Saying this, he left!swara fell down wid a thud, his words ringing in her head!her mom and ragini supported her and made her drink water!


Ragini- tum aise himmat nahi har sakte swara!

Tum he sanskar ko manana hoga!


Swara(lifelessly)- sahi kaha usne!Mein bohot selfish hun!meine sirf apne bare mein socha, apne parivaar ke baare mein socha, par mein yeh bhool gaye ki sanskar bhi mere zindagi ka hissa tha!


Shomi(angry)- yehi toh problem hai swara!tumhare liye sanskar zindagi ka ek hissa hai lekin uske liye tum Puri zindagi ho!


Sanskar was shomi's favourite son in law almost son- like!she was so angry wid swara when the latter accused him of many things!she couldn't believe her it was her beloved shona!


Ragini- maa...aap yeh kya bol rahe ho?


Maa- toh mein kya bolu ragu... sanskar mere liye beta jaisa hai!iss ladki ne hamesha apni manmaani ki hai!ussne mere bete ki kabhi koi khadar nahi thi! Uske feelings ki koi khadar nahi ki! Haan...meine use kaha tha sanskar se baath chupane keliye lekin muje laga jab Sab kuch teek ho jayega toh ye ladki usse mana legi! Lekin isne kya kiya!uss bechare ko itna kuch sunnaya isne!apni behan ki zindagi bachane ke liye tumhe khud apne zindagi barbad karli!


Saying this she left angrily!


Ragini-swara maa ki baathon ka bura mat manna!wo bas gusse mein hai!

Swara was speechless at her mother's outburst!

Swara- Sab khatam ho Gaya hai ragini!

Ragini- nahi swara..hamari swara kabhi himmat nahi harti!tumhe sanskar ko convince karna hoga ki wo tujhe aur ek mauka den!


Swara wiped her tears and determinedly said "haan ragini! Mein usse mana kar hi rahungi!"

She now had another mission in her hand!" Mission sanskar" and her priority was only her sanskar now!



The End!


Itna acha nahi hai but I tried!I hope you guys enjoyed! please comment!

Edited by Priya12000 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mission sans was good😳
Loved it

Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice
if u can plz give part two
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Priya..
Incredible OS...dialogues were carefully n perfectly chosen n woven...enjoyed it loads..if possible convert to ts...want swara sanky manao mission part...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Endless love
Part 2A

Ragini was always a shy timid and reserved girl whose world revolved around her father and grandparents!she had always envied her carefree and independent neighbour Swara Bose who had the liberty to think and do as she wished unlike ragini who had to resort to her dadi maa for every situation!she always wondered whether having a mother would hav changed anything in her upbringing!

But she never complained or unhappy wid her life until a man named lakshya maheshwari entered her life! She fell irrecoverably in love with him the day she saw him!she felt that her childhood dreams were finally going to be fulfilled but destiny had other plans!

Her dreams shattered when she came to know that the person she loved was actually in love with swara,her newly found sister and was further upset when swara reciprocated the feeling! Laksh who knew dat she loved him more than anything asked her help to unite with swara, swara her sister was so much in a hurry to get married to laksh after giving ragini's hopes up!

Ragini was devastated that she was only a pawn in the game and decided to take control!she did everything in her power to attain laksh !drugs, deception, kidnapping,murder, Malkin drama...she did it all! She was jolted out of her revenge drama when laksh saved her from kaveri and
When he accepted her as his wife only to betray her! But after lot of struggle everything was perfect!

Throughout her journey of love,hate and revenge, there was one person who stood by her in every situation, the person who she least expected to be, her sister Swara!
!she was guilty dat she separated swara from her love but was happy when her sister found a soulmate in sanskar! Sanskar was swara's love and life! Ragini was surprised when swara chose her above sanskar when laksh went missing! She was guilty for being so selfish and not thinking abt her sister once!for her laksh was her first priority and then swara!
Swara had fulfilled the responsibility as an elder sister and now it was her turn!she would make sure her sister gets her love even if that meant she had to get help from dat one person who hurt her the most!but she had to...for her sister!

She dialled a number and the person picked up!
Ragini-ham aapse milna chahte hai laksh! (ofcourse) kya aap ek ghante mein baadi aa sakte hain
Laksh(happy)- teeke ragini!I'll come!
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Swara was sitting outside her house thinking about sanskar when laksh entered the baadi!

Swara(angry)- tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

She was angry when she came to know dat laksh had left voluntarily and didn't even care once about her sister!more than that she held him responsible for her separation wid sanskar!

Laksh- mein ragini se milne aaya hun!
Swara-kyun?? Kitni baat kaha hai ki meri behan se dur raho!she doesn't want to talk to u!
Laksh was trying to tell her sat ragini called him but swara was not letting him talk and started accusing him fir everything!

Swara- tum hamesha Aisa karte ho!tumhe meri behan ki koi parva nahi hai! Six months back u didn't even think once before leaving!aur sirf tumhare wajah se Maine sanskar ko galat samja aur usse dur rahi!

Now laksh had had enough!

laksh- Bas Karo swara!mein jaantha hun mein ragini ke saath bohot galat kiya hai but that doesn't mean tum mujhe har baat ke liye zimmendar samjo! Haan...mein immature hun impulsive hun...Jo bhi karta hun apne Faidai ke liye karta hun!mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas hai!par kya tumhe hai!mere Bhai ne hamesha tumhara saath diya hai!aur jab unhe tumhare zaroorat thi toh tum kaha thi! Mein jaanta hun swara ragini ne Jo kuch kiya tha USKA zimmendar kahi na kahi mein hun!tab bhi mein uthnahi selfish tha! Ham dono ne hamesha un dono ko hurt kiya jinhone sirf hamse pyaar kiya tha aur kuch nahi! Meine ragini ko itna for granted le liya ki I thought when I'll come back she ll accept me happily!par mein galat tha! Jus realise Bhai's importance in your life before it's too late swara!

Saying this he left!

******

Laksh- u wanted to talk?
Ragini- haan...woh I wanted to talk to u abt swara and sanskar!
Laksh was a but disappointed but didn't show it!
Ragini-hame un dono ko ek Karna hai!iss keliye hame aapki zaroorat hai!
Laksh- haan ragini!mein kuch bhi karne keliye tayaar hun!

The End
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I'm sorry for no swasan scenes because I wanted your opinion on how u want their story to proceed!
A) jealousy track like nokjok wala or serious!
B) emotional track
C) something else(name it)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Priya,
Both the parts are really really amazing. Love this jealous and drunk swara who was pouring her heart out 😳. Sanky gave divorce papers to swara 😭. So, now swara is on a new mission sanskar manao 😆. Glad that ragini finally realized that it was swara who was with her in her difficulties. Hope swasan unite soon. And how their story should proceed, it is all ur wish. Would love to read anything on swasan.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Option A is a definite and wow the update was amazing...
Nice start and update soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice updates.. 👍🏼
I want emotional track
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome updates 👏
Really loving it 😳
Update soon

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