ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 61

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Posted: 8 years ago
Shru
Hope you are having a great time with family. It's so sweet that you have managed to find some for your forum family too. You are a darling. Push, pull... anxiously waiting for the romance to kindle. But I feel swara will once again spoil the spark unknowingly. She might reveal she is feeling drawn towards laksh' s portrait. Oh this building tension is too much. Sanskar has a beautiful home ..But shru I have a doubt. Don't laugh at me too, Why were they suppressing a laugh at swaras question? Please pardon me, I don't have any idea of the canines!!!I too am confused...
Veena..

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Posted: 8 years ago

I bet that BEAST is gonna be Swara's best friend ..and I adore Pets esp doggies ..I have one of my own .My cutie..and the minute BEAST .. I guess we will get name by Next chapter..I am so excited with this new entry😉 Sanskaar will also be melting towards it ..and for Swara ..Well the love is in air ..here and there ..hoping to catch up on Swasan..

The view of Sanskaar's Jannat from Swara's eyes is beautiful😳.a much needed change from usual routine for Swara and Akanksha ..and Clothes ..I am sure Swara's change of wardrobe will just add up to Sanskaar's pull towards her..He's already having a tough time.

This update .a subtle and lovely feel through out chapter😳👏

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Shru,

Will be back, promise - and very soon.

love,
Nyna


Dear Shru,

I loved the description of the house, the detailed detailing that you have given, slate floors ( I wonder why, most normally use marble, though given the climatic conditions, slate is indeed a much better choice) and then the open fire in the central hall (I am literally drooling over what the future chapters would bring). The descriptions were so vivid, I could literally see the house, a true "Jannat"

And I am rambling, but I liked Sanskaar trapped, sort of, between the beauty and the beast- one a very fitting label and the other, as she asks, "Beast, really, for a dog?" Poor Sanskaar, half his emotional turmoil, or rather most of it is because even his cool logical mind is finding it impossible to resist his heart and is somewhere, failing to find valid reasons for what he is supposed to feel for her. And then arises the very practical problem of clothes, which I am sure he would address in his trademark fashion, very eager to read this too.

Now that Swara sees the family portrait, and does find Laksh familiar, I wonder how that would tie in?

Is Beast a german shepard, easy to confuse with a wolf in that case? I think Swara is going to prove the adage " love me, love my dog" The beauty and the beast have fallen for each other, how long is Sanksaar going to resist?

A lovely update, I so loved the progress, slow but sure and am looking forward to read how futher entangled they would get before they straighten the matters.

Have a great vacation.

lots of love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Shruti,
Finally managed to catch up with this very interesting story. Read all chapters at a go. Enjoyed it thoroughly. You do write wonderful stories. Looking forward to reading the next. Take care. Thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Shru dear for ch-10. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Sanskar's house Jannat is indeed a 'Jannat', a 'Heaven', what we can see through Swara's eyes. 😃 For SwaSan, love is in the air, but neither on realized it till now. 😳 Swara looking at the family portrait of Sanskar, so does she finds Laksh's pic familiar?? 😕 If yes, then Sanskar will doubt her more as Ragini, already he's doing that! And Beast, I think he will be the new companion of Swara. 😉 I'm loving this story so much dear. ❤️ Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Wow Wow first for your new journey of writing
now about chap 10
Amazing work as always by you n you know I love reading what you write n I was amazed how beautifully you describe the place and palace and it was so perfectly written I could feel as if I was actually there. The beast part was a total surprise and a lovely one and I can sense a beautiful bonding of Swara and beast n yes what a name Beast hahaha. Overall a very light chapter but beautifully written
loved it and looking forward to next updates
love
Kawal
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shru my darling!!!

A most awaited set of chapters 9 and 10!!! Lovely to read as always sply as how u have explored their feelings for each other...Sanskaar falling in love most unwillingly and in fact against his better judgement and Swara unknowingly attracted to him in an inexplicable way when she is still grappling with her lost memory and has no clue as to who he is and why he behaves such with her...its so basic for them and thats why its so true n pure without any ulterior motive...loving how the story is progressing.

Waiting eagerly for ur next...

Lotsa love
Tas
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love to all you wonderful people for the comments I am delayed replying to!
Nyna- wow! Some of your observations are so heartwarming I will be doing a reply that justifies and was especially excited as you got my Beauty and the Beast "theme" straightaway- much more on that *wink* and a BIG reason for the name Beast:). I'll explain the breed too but as ever your not far off at all lol!

All- a big mmmwah and I'll be back with replies once my trip finishes (literally last days left *sad face*).

Love xoxo
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
Both the chapter 9 & 10 is awesome
Swasan slowly coming near to each other ...waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Love to all you wonderful people for the comments I am delayed replying to!
Nyna- wow! Some of your observations are so heartwarming I will be doing a reply that justifies and was especially excited as you got my Beauty and the Beast "theme" straightaway- much more on that *wink* and a BIG reason for the name Beast:). I'll explain the breed too but as ever your not far off at all lol!

All- a big mmmwah and I'll be back with replies once my trip finishes (literally last days left *sad face*).


Love xoxo


Dear Shru,

Take your time and enjoy your vacation, very little left of it. BTW this year you have gone earlier, if I recall correctly, last year you were at your sister's place for Christmas, right?

The Beauty and the Beast - I do not know, it sort of just "hit" me and I could not resist putting it down😳😳

Take care

lots of love,
Nyna

PS And I have finally managed to reply to your wonderful heartwarming comment on Chapter 6 - to the extent I could find words to do so.

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