SwaSan SS ~Remember Me~ Updated Epilogue on Page 45 - 04/09 - Page 6

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Hai shreetha..

Wow dear it was just superb.👏 Really enjoyed it.

Hi dear.

thanks for the pm.

and the update was awesome ...

Awesome update 👏
Seriously every updates of this story is giving me goosebumps 😆
Starting with past was awesome
And in present swara attraction towards ananya was lovely
Update soon can't wait for next part

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shreetha,

A great update as usual.

First the dream - must be of Swara about Sanskaar , Sanskaar is so caring and gentle even when he was young and his observation that the other girls find Swara ugly is because she is actually pretty - quite mature for his age. And his gentle admonishment that she should not come running to him, that would be him asking her to be a little stronger and not cry for everything though he would be there for her

Then the encounter with Ananya and Sanskaar - I simply loved the way you described Sanskaar and Ananya and could visualise it clearly - a father and daughter bond is always beautiful and considering the shadow of the missing mother, the bond, in this case is even more beautiful. A marvellous piece of writing👏👏👏 And Swara feels an irresistible pull and is actually slightly proud (???) to see their bond. Till she gazes into his eyes and almost melts.

She is quite unsure of both her feelings and his behaviour - which leaves her nervous.

I quite like the characterisation of Lakshya here - a man with self respect for himself and his friend /brother in law. Quite a pleasant change from the serial.😉

Finally the silent car journey - which is leaving me as curious as Swara - just what is going on.😕 Guess you have to update us.

love,

Nyna

PS: I think you should enable both the copyright and the no copy mode. Will send a pm regarding the same

Hi Nyna,

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.. It means a lot to me..🤗 I am glad that you like the update..

Yes sanskaar indeed is very caring as always.. I too love Sanskaar and Ananya bond and even Sanskaar.. He loves his daughter very much..

And Swara is pulled towards both Sanskaar and Ananya.. Lets see how she can control herself..😉

Laksh is very matured and kind person here.. And even Ragini is different from serial..

About Sanskaar's strange behaviour, I think you have wait for it unfold in the next updates..

Once again thank you so much dear..

PS: Thank you for the PM..

Shreetha..

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Hai shreetha..

Loved the update. .

Especially the way u explained swara came in to give milk to swara...

U r a wonderful writer. ..u have very nicely brought up swaras confusions ..her comfort in seeing ananya..all her emotions...

About sanskaar I feel he is a bit rude now but would like to know exact reasons for this in ur next updates...

Thanks for the pm

Pls update next part soon

Hi Sarathy..

I hope that is your name, If not I am sorry..

Thank you so much dear..😊 I am glad that you like the update..

You have to wait for few more updates to unfold everything..😉

I will try to update soon..

Shreetha..

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Wow dear it was just superb.👏 Really enjoyed it.

So swara is getting dreams about her past. I 'm sure those are sanskaar's & hers childhood memories.

Father & daughter's morning scene was very beautiful & heart soothing. But i can't understand why sanskaar is behaving so rudely with swara. Plz dear want an update about sanskaars p.o.v...

It's ok shreetha. Take your time & update. We will wait. Thnks for the pm..

🤗

Hi Kaveetha..

Thank you so much.. I am glad that you like the update..😊

Yes, even I love father daughter bond.. It reminds me my father..

Will unfold everything in further updates..

Thank you so much for understanding dear.. I will try to update soon..

Shreetha..

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Hi dear.

thanks for the pm.

and the update was awesome ...

Hi Annie..
Thank you dear.. I am glad that you like the update..

Shreetha..