FF: Forced into Marrying your Soulmate(T2: Epilogue 3 on 103[14/5/17)

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Thank you for the likes, Res and Lovely comments that i happen to read now.. In Office.. Will reply to the comments once i get back home.

Love

Nita

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Beautiful update... 👏

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Nita sorry for not commenting since so long...reason my exams till June...

Yaar it was fab but plz don't mind this part I didn't like the way I loved the other parts es last part it was wonderful with tongue slips n all...was a complete package...I dunno but I love previous one more even this part is very gud

I think I missed their conversations in this chapter which are so unique and matured ones where they can freely speak and even don't worry about their slips...also these matured conversations are building blocks of their relation.

U know what Nita what is the strength if this ff ?it is the naturality and the understanding here we can connect the characters n situations eid real lyf...here characters are very strong and genuine and firm which we normally face in real lyfs unlike the extra mahaan characters...so I luv this ff very much dear.

...yaar sorry if it hurts ...really sorry ...but to comment means to say what's in our mind n I didn't want to lie so I said frankly...sorry again...

Love u

Ishita

Edited by ishanita - 9 years ago

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Prerana

@prerulalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Its absolutely beautiful😊

Their first date 😳

Swara's chatting with her sisters for hours 🤣

Both of them chitchatting for hours ☺️

Sanskaar already thinking about their next trip☺️

At the end icing on the cake "If everyday is like this then i want to stay married to him"

Yes girl u are going in the right direction😉

Lovely update

Love,

Prerana😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Res

Unres..

Nita love...😉

Sorry sweetie little late...i know u would say .do not say sorry..but i will still say sorry..cant help it...😃

Coming to awesome chapter 11...

Honeymoon of swasan started...

The whole journey of plane to newyork was wonderfully described...sooo sansku thought she would deny going with him to honeymoon but to his utter shock ..she agreed n they finally reached their honeymoon destination..

In part u described how during whole month of uttara stay they didnot get enough time to spend with each other..now its perfect time to know each other..😆👏

Journey to hotel n their date was enchanting..the scene when she got to know that she keeo her hand on sansku shoulder n he even know it..was beautiful..she was embaressed but glad she know that he knows...

N that date...😳.ahhh...literally my dream date..sansku gives soo effort to give swara a big surprise n she loved n enjoyed it alot...😳..till now i have noticed they both adore each other n have feeling too..but none of them has realised that they have fallen in love..not even sansku...😭...sansku is doing soo much for this relationship ..it high time he should be at receiving end..at least get some surprise or sweet gesture of love from swara...😃

N that scene when all sister were gossiping n discussing in detail about their day..it was hillarious😆

Nita babes i want a high shocking drama for swara..any scene by which she or both realises their love for each other..or atleast any one of them..plzzz😲

Whole update was sweetest...i smiled soo much...n climax that they bith talking n trying to know each other more was droolworthy...😉

Fantasticly written love...👏

Will wait for another swasanlicious update...😳

Lots of hugs n kisses

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

nita 🤗

the swasan journey is so beautiful and the journey towards love just started . i just want to say u left me awestruck and as usual I am without words

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Kaira10

@Kaira10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Omg its sooo sweet
Swara and sanskaar are a perfect couple

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Anusha

@Anusha62

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Nita dear lovely update:)
Wid ful of swasan swasan wow i loved it ya..
Oh our swara madam started liking her charming prince sanky,she wanna knw more abt him,she wanna spend time wid him so sweet..
Swara fake angry was cute..
Aww swasan 1st date simply amazing swara enjyd alot whr sanskar like it because he went wid his swara..
Hahahah girls na seriously we chitchat hours huh;)
Agn sanskar planning for 2nd date nita it shuld b better than 1st date(i thought in excitement swa v'l hug sanky bt no u disapponited me fulfil my wsh in 2nd date:P)..!!!

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ANSHEL

@ANSHEL

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

res chap 11 ures hi nita dear,so finnaly i gt ma update😃😃 ,though short relatively to ur standards, bt i luvd it .and luv u too for being so considerate dat despite being busy u stole some time to upload😊😊.a BIGGG thanku and lots of jhappis 🤗🤗..coz puppies are reseved only for sanskaar. 😆😆 i luvd ur description of d backstory before both swasan agreeing to honneymooon in their individual ponts of views👍🏼 and swara unbridled excitement for the first tym in flight...so swara has already got into d habit of seeing d handsome yet beautiful face of her husband every morning and sanskaar being at his best ...not letting swara know any of his plan to guaze her pleasantly suprised reactions at his surprises ..hmmm luving it😊😊😃.man dis sanskaar is too gud for any guy ..hw nice of him for asking swaras permission even though he din quite actually required to do so being her husband...u know wat girl u r making it harder for me nw wen i wud trying to find sumon for me the list of ideal characterstics wud be tooo long nw nd i m hoping against hope to find sm incarnation of sanskaar ...somewhere ..somehow ..nd if i dun find him i wud be too dissapointed.😭😭.i think every boy shud read dis for at least one tym to know wat we girls expect . .😆😆😆i have n described the surrounding amazingly dear ..hwever i have a request here i u cud infuse dese descriptions wid alittle more conversations bw swasan .i think i kinda missed d convos, sweet n mature .i want dem to explore each other through a journey of word dat wud ibe icing on d cake ( n plz make d icing blueberry cheese ma fav ummm😉😆😆) nd yeah i forgot to mntion i luvd d bonding of four sisters though though dere is a newly formed bond butdey cant wait to share dere experiences wid each other ..nd bechare guys n ..longing for pvt time wid dere wivesbt to no avail😆😆😛

Edited by ANSHEL - 9 years ago