SwaSan SS'..Ishq Bulava Aave Jab Aave..' Last Part Updated

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Hi everyone i am Farii/Fariza

I wanted to write something on SwaSan, So here i am trying to write a Short Story On SwaSan :)

Please forgive me for grammatical mistakes:)

In this story both Swara & Sanskar have some flaws in them either physically or mentally
they are not perfect as individuals completely but when they became a team and turned into SwaSan later on from Swara & Sanskar they became more than just perfect:)

Sometimes we build many restrictions around our life for love to enter But we fail to understand that Love Will Find Its Way Someday And Somehow It Will Definitely Blossom In Our Hearts In Form Of Fresh Air Of Happiness❤️


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Sharmishtha is one 17years old young girl grown up in a family were her father is very supportive and caring but her mother is women with very orthodox and regressive thinking. Soon Sharmishtha's father and mother dies leaving her absolutely alone in this world but before dying they got Sharmishtha married to a man who is very straight forward so much that some times he forgets the fact that his word may hurt his dear ones, extremely short tempered and arrogant.But Sharmishtha tries to adjust in her new life with the upbringing of her mother, amidst many bad quality of her husband Sharmi starts to find good qualities like her husband is very hard working and honest, he speaks what ever he feels, doesn't like to keep words and thoughts between himself.
Time starts flying soon Shekhar - Sharmishtha's 12th marriage anniversary comes, they have one cute but little over weight 11years old daughter Swara.
Swara is very naughty girl but very obedient of her mother.One day Swara asks her mother that why every Sunday father leaves us alone and goes to our Farm House. Even in occasions like Diwali and Holi also very early morning he leaves for farm house. Sharmi cares Swara's face lovingly and says because he loves nature and trees very much you know na Swara how much your dad loves trees every Sunday he goes there to nurture them because he feels those trees are also his kid like you.

Swara smiles and again asks that i had another question Ma why Dad never celebrates any occasion not even my birthday nor both of you celebrate your wedding anniversary like parents of my friends celebrates
Sharmishtha says because your father is little conservative that's why he don't like to take part in any celebrations but he never stopped us from celebrating anything.Swara smiles happily and says i knew it my Dad is the best and my idol also, love you Ma for clearing my doubts.

{After Few Days One Phone Call Comes For Sharmi In Her Neighbours Land Line Number
(because Shekhar never allowed mobile phone in his house for communicational purpose)
And after this call everything gets completely change in Swara's life and her believes about life also gets changed}

[11 years Passed After That Incident Now Swara Is A Grown Up Girl And Getting Ready For Her Wedding Ceremony}

[Sharmishtha(In widow attire) running in the road to reach the wedding venue for stopping Swara's wedding]

[On Her way to the venue Sharmishtha meets a Sweet and very loveable guy who agrees to give her lift in his car and
Says that what a coincidence he is also going on the same area for his wedding,
Suddenly Sharmishtha realises that this sweet person is blind and can't see anything
Meanwhile they reach the venue and Sharmi rushes to stop the wedding after thanking the stranger guy for lift]
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Part-2

Sharmi finds Swara and takes her to a room to talk.

Sharmi: Swara i know very well that you are doing this marriage just to achieve your goal of becoming a world famous scientist and to complete your dream project but in your this mission you are cheating that person who will become your Life Partner just after few hours, Please Swara try to understand the situation and change your decision beta, Don't be so Heartless just like your Father.

Swara: Ma please don't you compare me with that good for nothing so-called father of mine.He is the reason for turning a cute bubbly Swara into this Swara who now just want to do all those things which my so-called father used to hate, This way i think i can acheive that mental peace which i lost 11 years before. Mr.Shekhar Gadodiya used to love trees, nature and he used to hate scientists, That's why i hate trees, nature and have worked so hard for becoming a good scientist.
This marriage with famous scientist Sanskar Maheshwari is nothing but a mere contract and ladder for me to achieve my goal,
I don't love him nor do i believe that there is anything in this world called LOVE, But yes trust me Ma i won't ever betray and break his faith on me which my father had done with you.
Sanskar very well knows that i don't love him, he agreed for this marriage just to provide me help 24*7 for completing my 1st dream project as a friend that's it nothing more than that and after this marriage Sanskar will be also benefited.
He will free himself from all the blackmails of his Ex-Wife Kavita, which will provide him custody of his 11 months old daughter Sanstuti.

{Suddenly someone knocks on the door,Swara opens the door and says Sanskar, please come in and meet my mother}
Swara introduces Sanskar with Sharmi,
Sharmi is shocked to see that Sanskar is non other than that stranger guy who had given lift to her.
Sanskar also recognises Sharmi after hearing her voice

{Sharmi after seeing Sanskar as Swara's groom thinks in her mind that although Sanskar is Blind from eyes but he has a golden heart and true gentlement in behaviour, Sharmi thinks that Sanskar is the correct guy for Swara, who can make her believe in Love and provide that mental peace to her which Swara is searching in taking revenge from her dead father.}

[Swara and Sanskar's marriage takes place with Sharmi's blessing]
[Location: Maheshwari Mansion---Swara and Sanskar reaches Maheshwari Mansion]
Swara enters at her new room and notices a cute baby cot beside the bed. She goes near it and sees Sanstuti sleeping with so much peace in her face, Swara doesn't realise it but she feels happy whenever she sees this baby.
Sanskar knocks at the door and takes Swara's permission before entering the room,then he enters the room.

Sanskar says to Swara that until this custody case doesn't solve they have to stay in same room, but she can sleep in the bed and Sanskar will sleep in the couch. Swara agrees.



Night Time 2.00 A.M
Swara is getting disturbed by nightmare of All Incidents which occurred 11years ago
suddenly Sanstu starts crying, Swara & Sanskar both wakes up and hurries to see why Sanstu is crying but Sanskar stumbles because of carpet, before he falls on the ground Swara rushes and holds him.
Wind starts to blow and the wind charm in the window rings which makes Sanstu happy and she stops crying.
Watching this both Swara and Sanskar starts to laugh loudly that Sanstu by her own stopped crying but they got panicked with it.
And in this process Sanskar could have broken his bones if Swara didn't helped him.
Sanskar says to Swara that now they must sleep as early morning they will start their tour in forest for gather required thing related with Swara's dream project.
Swara proceeds towards the bed to sleep but she was thinking that if they both go to forest then who will take care of Sanstu for 2 days. Swara wanted to asks Sanskar about this but then thinks that Sanstu is not her daughter nor her responsibility,Sanstu's father is there to think about her,So Swara decides to just concentrate on her mission and nothing else.

Sanskar calls her by calling her name and Says that Sharmi Ma has promised to him that she will take care of Sanstu for 2days.

Swara unknowingly Smiles in relieve that Sanstu is safe with Sharmi.

Both SwaSan wishes each other good night and goes to sleep.
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[Part=3]
Swara & Sanskar are leaving for their forest trip but before that they are taking Sharmi's blessing. Swara goes out to bring the Car.
Meanwhile Sanskar feels from Sharmi's voice that she is little worried for Swara so he talks to Sharmi and promises to her that he will take care of Swara. Swara is his responsibility in this tour. Sharmi smiles and says that i trust you son but i don't trust my impulsive daughter and her short temper that's why i am worried for both of you. Swara comes with car and both SwaSan leaves from there.

[Swara is driving the car but she is not at all feeling good emotionally the location of there destination is very near to Swara's Farm house, that's the reason that she is feeling very angry and depressed. In anger she starts scolding and shouting at Sanskar for no valid reason. But Sanskar figured out that something was bothering Swara, So he decides to silently listen Swara's scoldings without uttering a single word, and ask about her problems later on when her anger will be cools down]

Location: Forest:SwaSan arrives at the forest.

Both helps each other for preparing their tent and camp fire.
But Swara is still in her depression mode
Sanskar tries to give Swara a small bell just in case if She needs to call him for help but an angry Swara throws it towards the bush
Then they both starts their search for the rear flower needed for their pharmaceutical research.
Swara is lost in her own problems and starts walking very fast,she forgets completely that Sanskar can't walk as fast as her in the jungle.

Sanskar starts facing difficulty in walking he calls Swara for help but Swara was not replying to him.

Swara opens her bag, She takes out billhook & sickle for cutting bushes and brunches of trees which are coming on their way in jungle. But she completely forgets that there are other animals in the forest.
Suddenly one poisonous Snakebites Swara in her hand and she shouts in pain and falls unconscious under the long bushes.
Sanskar becomes panicked when he heard Swara's shout, he was calling Swara but got no respond in return. Sanskar was crying thinking that he can't let anything bad happened to Swara because she is his responsibility.
While Sanskar was trying to run in jungle he stumbles with a bush and falls very badly in the ground and hits his hand with a broken sharped branch of a tree. Sleeve of his white shirt instantly turns red in his blood.
He crawls in bush and something got stuck with his shirt, he holds it and by touching it he recognises that its Swara's mangalsutra.
Sanskar then finds Swara under the bushes,he gets water bottle from swara's bag and sprinkles water on her face, Swara gets her conscious little bit, She takes Sanskar's name and informs him that Snake has bitten her, and gets unconscious again.
Sanskar runs towards the jungle and collects some herbs which he recognises by it's smell, and makes a herbal medicine which his father taught him in his childhood as a instant remedy for Snake or any poisonous animals bite.
Sanskar faced difficulty but with determination he picks Swara up in his hands, he stumbles but finally reaches that place were they made their tent.
[When Swara threw the bell given by Sanskar it got stuck in a tree near the camp side which helped Sanskar to locate the exact location]

A worried Sanskar was sitting beside Swara, he cares her face for reassuring himself that She is fine and safe now, He sleeps besides her by holding her hand.
whole night passes out.
In morning Swara regains her conscious, she reminds all the things which happened yesterday and in guilt and fear that because of her angry nature she invited unnecessary trouble for both of them.
Swara becomes emotional when she sees Sanskar beside her holding her hand, She flows in emotions and gives a tight hug to a sleeping Sanskar. But Swara didn't notices that Sanskar got hurt in his arms.
Sanskar wakes up from sleep and shouts in pain.
Swara realises about his wound and rushes towards her bag to get antiseptic medicine.
Sanskar asks Swara about her health and then asks her that why was she hugging him?
Swara didn't had a answer for Sanskar's second question at that time.
Swara diverts the situation by scolding Sanskar for his careless behaviour about himself.
Sanskar asks Swara that today she is behaving normally with him but what happened to her yesterday? Why she was angry about everything yesterday?
Swara gets up and tries to run from the situation but Sanskar also gets up and confronts her.
He says to her that she will feel better if she shares what's troubling her with him.
Swara hugs Sanskar, she cries trebly while hugging him and agrees to share her past with him.
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PART-4---Continuation Of Previous Part

Its almost evening SwaSan will leave early morning for their house. Swara is sitting beside Camp Fire lifelessly Sanskar comes to her and gives her coffee to drink, Swara then says to Sanskar that her father Shekhar Gadodiya was owner of a big medicine manufacturer company, that's why Shekhar build a farm house were he used to collect and cultivate all types of rearer species of trees,plants & herbs. He was obsessed with this trees and can go to any length for satisfying his this obsession. But he was not a Pharmaceutical Scientist so he hired Mr.Ram and his son Mukesh for the research work, they used to live in our farm house with their family as research Lab was nearer from there.
Everything was going smoothly until that day when my mom was cooking in kitchen and a neighbour came to call her, One call had came for my mom so she went with me to pick the call.
That call was of Mr.Ram who wanted to inform my mom that my Dad Shekhar and his son Mukesh was not only corrupted in their profession but also number one Casanova and Womanizers. Both of them were using that farm house as an enjoyment spot since many years before my mom's marriage with my dad.
My mom was numb and shocked to here all these.
Then Mr.Ram said that both Shekhar and Mukesh is searching for him because he was eyewitness of what ever they did last night, he can't call police because police is also involve in this with them. My mom panicked and asked him what happened last night in farm house.
Mr.Ram said that he had a daughter of 16 years old age named as Sukanya, who also used to live with them in the farm house, Last night when Shekhar and his friends were partying by drinking alcohol, they noticed Sukanya and made a plan to Rape her, for that Shekhar made a deal with Mukesh that if he gives his sister Sukanya for one night, in return Shekhar will give him his daughter Swara for one night as a gift.
Mukesh agrees but Sukanya dies due to them, when they were burying the body under a tree in the farm house Mr.Ram spots them,they bit him badly but now he is hiding in a garbage area and don't want any other girl to face same fate as his daughter that's why he called to alert us.
My mom holds my hand tightly and we both start running towards the main road were a Microbus was waiting for us it came very fast towards us my father was inside it he grabs my one hand and kidnaps me from my mother.
They took me to the same farm house and ropes were bind in my hands and legs. I was just 11 years old very small to understand what was my fathers motive why he handed me to that creepy man Mukesh.
I was crying, pleading to my father that i don't want to go with this Mukesh but he was not listening to my any plead. I was crying badly but no one listened to my plead until Mr.Ram and My Mom reached on that spot with some near by villagers, when i saw them coming i was almost getting fainted in fear and trauma.
My Mom in anger hit a big stone on my fathers head and he dies on spot.
Since 11 years my mom was in jail that's why she didn't knew about our marriage. Although that day my body was saved by my mom on time but my soul died that very moment in that farm house.

While saying all these Swara almost got fits but Sanskar holds her and says her to forget and move on from the past, But Swara said to Sanskar that its not easy for her to forget everything and move on in life, because on that one day she lost everything, her mom went to jail, Her idol Dad's real was came in front of her as a demon and her Soul was killed brutally by non other then her own father.
Sanskar says to Swara that he knows how it feels when Idol of someone's life betrays them. He says to Swara he was not blind from birth. His mom was having an affair with her boss , she wanted to get rid of 7 years old Sanskar and his dad, She didn't asked for divorce directly because she wanted his whole property not just a piece of it as alimony, So she decides to kill us both. One night she stabs my Dad and burns his body with Acid. When i saw her killing my dad, she drops some acid towards me due to which i lost my both eyes.
When i grew up i had also same problem as you.
I was 19 years old young boy when i went to an NGO and experienced some incident which changed my thought process about life for ever and made me a better & happier person than i was ever before.
Swara said to Sanskar that you are really lucky that you gave life a chance but i am not as strong as you Sanskar then says to Swara that its okay now lets not talk about all this, you are still very weak health wise take some rest because in morning we have to from here.
Swara tries to smile and goes to her tent to sleep.
Whole night Sanskar was worried for Swara, he was thinking how he can help her and make her again believe in life, because he was feeling really hurt when he heard about Swara's pain.
Then an idea comes to his mind, he decides to execute it in morning itself.

Both Swara and Sanskar are in car and on their way to home
Sanskar says to Swara that before going home they have to go somewhere to meet someone. Swara becomes surprised but agrees to take Sanskar were he wanted to go.

Location-----At Nandlaal Shelter Home
Both SwaSan reach at a shelter home which is run by a NGO.

Sanskar takes Swara to meet Mr.Krishna Thakur.
Inside the shelter home there is a small room but from that room a very bad smell is coming as if rotten meat is kept there. SwaSan enters the room and met Mr.Krishna there, Swara asks him about the bad smell which is coming from his room, but he doesn't reply just weeps his tears silently. Sanskar says to Swara that Mr.Krishna's wife and only son has a rear disease their flesh gets red and gives a very bad smell. No doctor was ready to take care of them. Generally in this disease patients family abandons them. But Mr & Misses Thakurs undying love defeated this problem between them.
Swara and Sanskar says bye to them and leaves from the shelter house.

In Car Sanskar says to Swara that i took you there just to show you that not every person in this world is Selfish. There are many examples of true love and good humans in this world just like She just saw.

Swara silently listens to him and drives the car.
Location SwaSan's Room

Sanskar is sleeping peacefully in the couch. Swara is trying to sleep but couldn't sleep.
She is thinking about what happened last 2 days with her. After sharing about her past with Sanskar and after visiting Thakur Family, She is feeling relaxed as if all the pain and depressions of 11years have vanished in a minute.

Suddenly Sanstuti starts crying Swara goes to see her, Sanskar also wakes up and goes there.
They both try to bring smile in Sanstu's face but falls asleep near the Baby Cot.

In Morning Swara wakes up and notices that her one hand is caught my Sanstu and other hand by Sanskar.
Both father and daughter are sleeping silently and peacefully. Swara smiles seeing this, when she tries to get up from there Sanskar wakes up. When he realises that he was holding Swara's hand he feels embarrassed and apologizes about it to Swara.
Swara says him not to say sorry as it was unintentional and smiles. Sanskar informs Swara that today is Sanstu's birthday, so in this occasion he has kept a small Puja, he says he will be happy if she joins in puja. Swara agrees.
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Part-5
Swara is getting ready for puja, 1st time she will be wearing a traditional attire, Red colored Chiffon saree.
Swara enters her room takes her saree from cupboard and goes to take a bath before Puja.
On the other hand Sanskar enters the room and starts searching for his kurta, wallet & watch. And was roaming around in trouser and sleeveless tee-shirt.
Right then Swara comes out of the bath room in that beautiful saree, her hairs are still little bit wet, some drops of water is still dropping from her hair.
Swara becomes shocked, shy and uncomfortable when she notices Sanskar in the room at that time. But Swara decides not to get noticed by Sanskar because she didn't want him to feel embarrassment or uncomfortable because of her presence, Swara tries silently to walk out of the room, but her wedding ring gets stuck in the curtain.
Meanwhile Sanskar senses someone's presence in room so he silently moves towards the person to check who was it and why standing in his room.
As Sanskar was coming closer towards the curtain Swara gets panicked and both SwaSan gets tangled with curtains and both of them falls on bed with curtains around them.
Sanskar recognises that its Swara who has fallen on him.
Both SwaSan laying on the bed and tightly tied with the curtains around them, because of which they can't even run from the room to avoid embarrassment.
Swara tries to get up but fails and falls on Sanskar again, Their faces are so close to each other that they are even feeling each other's breath which are very restless and warm at that moment adding to that water drops falling from Swara's wet hair on Sanskar's face. But somehow Swara manages the situation and to light up the moment starts laughing by making fun of themselves which brings smile in Sanskar's face, and turns the awkward situation into a comfortable situation. Finally they both manages to get up and Sanskar goes to changing room to wear his white and red mix kurta with dhohti. And Swara goes near dressing table and tries to tie the dori of her blouse but fails to do it again and again.
Sanskar enters the room after getting ready and was about to leave the room when an shy, uncomfortable Swara asks for his help to tie the dori.
Sanskar comes near her puts his hand around her shoulder and tries to find dori but fails, then Swara helps him and guides his already shaking hands towards the dori, Sanskar somehow manages to tie it and was about to rush out from the room but Swara calls him and tries to stop him but he was feeling too shy to listen to her. Swara holds hand forcefully and stops him from going outside.
Swara informs Sanskar that his dhoti is not tied properly and it may fall when he will have to sit for the puja. Then Swara helps him to wear the dhoti correctly, Sanskar thanks Swara for the help and goes from there.

At the time of puja Panditji notices that Swara is not wearing Sindoor, so he asks Sanskar to put sindoor on Swara's mang. Sanskar takes the Sindoor's box and fills Swara's mang with sindoor some of which falls on her nose. Swara was lost in this moment and had tears of joy unknowingly in her eyes.

In evening both of them decides to take Sanstu for a outing in the garden near by.

In the garden Sanskar is playing with Sanstu and standing near the road, while Swara goes to buy some food for them.
Suddenly one car proceeds in speed towards Sanskar, Swara comes running towards them manages to save them but gets hurt in her both hands.
Doctor advises her to take rest for next 24hours completely without moving her hands at all.

Its late night Swara has extreme pain in her hands that's why she is not falling asleep. Sanskar notices it and gets up from couch, sits beside Swara in the bed. Sanskar says to Swara not to worry she will surly get well soon. Swara smiles. Sanskar takes Swara's head on his lap and talks about many experiences about his previous research projects soon Swara falls asleep after hearing his boring stories and Sanskar knows that his stories are really boring but it was necessary for Swara to have some rest, he smiles but can't move from there as Swara is sleeping in his lap. Night passes away slowly slowly.

In morning Swara wakes up and sees no one in the room then she goes downstairs and reaches towards the back yard garden were Sanskar is playing with Sanstu and also giving waters to plants. Swara stares the father daughter duo and notices how good father is Sanskar and how good human is he because for Swara to complete her sleep peacefully he is taking care of Sanstu single handedly.
Sanskar then suddenly says Swara you woke up but why you came downstairs, you must take proper rest.
Swara becames shock and asks Sanskar that how he knew that its she.
Sanskar says that now a days he can recognise her by the sound of her footstep. Swara keeps starring at Sanskar.
whole day Sanskar didn't let Swara do anything, he prepared soup for her and also he made Sanstu's food by himself in this process he burnt his hand little bit but didn't complain.

Time passes away Swara's dream project got completed and Sanskar threw a big party for her in their house, many famous guests are invited. Swara decides to confess her feelings for Sanskar after the party.

Precap for the last part of this story:

Something happens in party which shakes Sanskar's confidence on himself and SwaSan's marriage.

Next Scene SwaSan's intense emotional rain dance with eachother.

Next scene Sanskar sad crying heartbroken in rain and sitting on a bench in the garden and is drenched completely.

Will Sanskar accept Swara's love for hiim?
Will they have a happy ending?
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Last Part:

Sanskar gets a call from his doctor who informs him that test reports of his eyes had arrived which says that Sanskars eyesight will never return in future. After hearing which Sanskar becomes heartbroken and falls near the window of his room. Sanskar sat beside the window of his room and is lost in deep thought, during this few months he has fallen in love with Swara, whenever Swara is near him he feels himself blessed. But Sanskar also thinks that he don't deserve Swara, he is blind, divorcee & also father of a 11months old child. Swara deserves much better life partner than him. He thinks that if he remains in her life then his presence will only bring sorrow for Swara. Suddenly Swara enters the room and gives Sanskar a gift, she requests him to wear this black tie with his tuxedo. Sanskar agrees and says to Swara that he also had brought something for her then he gives her a beautiful Blue long gown. Swara says she loved the gown and will definitely wear it tonight.

At the party Kavita's brother Laksh comes as a guest because he belongs to same profession as SwaSan. Laksh meets with Sanskar, taunts him and reminds him that how his sister Kavita proved Sanskar useless as a husband, he was only a shameful incident which happened to her. He also says to Sanskar that he can never ever give anyone happiness everyone will feel ashamed to be part of his life because he can give them only embarrassment, he will always be dependent on his life partner for small daily to daily work.

Then Laksh leaves from there but after breaking Sanskar's self confidence.
At the party music starts and all couples starts dancing. Sharmi requests both Swara & Sanskar to join other couples in the dance floor both hesitates but in two different way Swara was feeling hesitant to dance with the love of her life for the 1st time. But Sanskar was hesitant because he was feeling heartbroken,tensed & extremely nervous. Swara holds Sanskars shaky hands and goes towards the dance floor. They both starts dancing together on song-- Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor...
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
While dancing Swara tries to rest her head on Sanskar's shoulder then Suddenly Swara's heels breaks and she falls down on ground.
Sanskar fails to hold her on time. Swara was not at all embarrassed but Sanskar was feeling ashamed of himself,He thinks how he always becomes the reason of peoples embracement, how his life is a burden for everyone, Sanskar says to himself that Laksh was correct i am useless, everyone should abandon me, when Sanstu will grow older then she will also leave me because i will provide her only embarrassment nothing else. A heart broken Sanskar leaves the party area with teary eyes, he takes Sanstu also with him & disappears from Swara's life.


Six month passed since Sanskar left Swara and now he lives in a new city. Sanskar is now working on a new research, he has made his life extremely busy around his works to forget about his love Swara.
But destiny has some other plans.
Swara who is searching for Sanskar from all these days to ask him why he left her like this.
Swara gets an invitation for a success party of one famous Scientist, She decides to attend the party.
Swara wears that light pink Saree which Sanskar once gifted her. Both of them coincidentally reaches at same party,were Sanskar senses Swara's presence around him but before he becomes sure Swara sees him. And decides to confront him. Swara goes near Sanskar and asks him directly that why he left her like this but Sanskar avoids her and runs out from the party.
Winds blowing very fast amidst that Sanskar is walking on the side of the road crying,shivering and completely shuttered from inside. He is stumbling frequently but then holds himself some how and reaches at a garden near by. Sanskar tries to sit on a bench but stumbles again and hurts his hand, gets some bruises.
Sanskar falls on the ground and cries while talking to himself and rain starts to fall on him.

Suddenly someone one puts hand on his shoulder, Sanskar feels shock after feeling her presence,he gets up touches her face to confirm himself that its her only and finally says Swara you.

An angry Swara removes his hands from her face, and says yes its me Swara that girl who never believed in love or marriage but you came into my life and changed my views but then you also left me without giving any proper reason, after Six month i found you then again you ran away and now crying here in this heavy rain. Why you don't want to share what's going in your mind, what happened that night?
Sanskar says because my eye sight will never return in future and i didn't wanted to spoil your future with this burden. Swara says who gave you right to decide what is right for me and what is wrong. I have no problem with whether you are blind or not what matters to me is whether we are together or not. Swara goes near Sanskar holds his hand and both sits on the garden bench. Both Swara and Sanskar crying miserably, then Swara says to Sanskar by cupping his face that your presence,love and support matters to me nothing else.Before meeting you my life was full of darkness but you brought day light in my life. You are my soulmate which my soul was searching from endless time, My life was incomplete before but your presence in my life as my husband and as love of my life makes it complete, Swara tries to weep Sanskar's tears. But Sanskar gets up and says i am not that person Swara who will hold you, give support to you and can protect you from falling down in every step of life. Swara understands about the reason of Sanskars hesitations regarding confessing his love. Swara holds Sanskar's hand and asks him to look in to her eyes, then she says i know you will never let me fall, if you want prove then lets dance in this rain & let me prove it. Sanskar laughs and says what type of childish behaviour is this Swara i am seriously saying this and you are suggesting this solution. Swara comes towards him and shushes him by putting her finger on his lips and says do as i say.
Both SwaSan slowly starts to dance,

"Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein"

Swara says how important rain is for trees in fact for whole nature it is important Similarly he is important in her life, she can never imagine her life without him. Swara emotionally with teary eyes tightly hugs Sanskar.
And Says I Love You Sanskar.
Sanskar wants to hug Swara back but resists himself, But then he fails to hold his emotions and hugs Swara back tightly. Sanskar says to swara that:-" I Love You Too Swara.
Both cries emotionally while hugging each other and rain's cold drops falls on them heavily.

"Tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage hain
Himmat ke tukde bator
Ho bhaage zamaane se
Chhup ke dabe paanv jaise koi chor
Jaise koi chor...
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor"

3 years passed, Both SwaSan sitting on the Same garden and remembering that night when they confessed their love for each on this same place. Now they are happily married, and soon after a month Sanstuti's one little brother or little sister will also join their family as Swara is pregnant.
Swara rests her head on Sanskar's shoulder while holding his hand.

The End
Edited by Fariiiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Fari. Please carry on 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting concept..nice..update soon

Thanks for commenting 😃 hope you will like the next update:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apudeep

Nice update Fari. Please carry on😛

Hey Sis 🤗Glad that you liked my writing:)
Some days before you had asked me to change my DP, i changed DP its pic of a famous tourist spot of my city:)

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