SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 65

Loved it.. TBH I liked RagYa part bit more..was kind of emotional.. It was good Laksh shared his story with her..it will help her in sorting out her and Swara's relation... SWASAN part don't know why but there was some thing wrong with the flow... Err may be coz I'm sleepy..

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Loved it.. TBH I liked RagYa part bit more..was kind of emotional.. It was good Laksh shared his story with her..it will help her in sorting out her and Swara's relation... SWASAN part don't know why but there was some thing wrong with the flow... Err may be coz I'm sleepy..

Update soon

Was waiting for you to update :)

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Was waiting for you to update :)

It was amazing as usual. Hope to see more SwaSan bonding.

RagYa part was also good! Mostly bcoz Sanskaar was a part of that & got to know about his childhood & his bonding with Uttara as well as Laksh!

Update soon. And next time big update for SwaSan...plz!

Thnx for the PM :)

Res 🤗 will un res soon.

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Hey Nita,

Back for an un -res now as I was not feeling well last couple of days. 😊

Really liked both the parts. SwaSan bit was so nice, you have traced the development of their understanding and comfort level in a very lovely manner. I really liked the way Sujju was concerned for Sanskaar too, not seeing Swara in their room, she was fearing if she had also run away and how that would leave her son shattered. 😆 And when she saw them together in the study, she was so relieved. 😊 That warm hug Swara gave her, apologizing for not telling her before leaving to the hospital the previous day, was in a way also assuring Sujju that Swara would be by Sanskaar's side, that she understood her responsibilities. A very nice saas--bahu moment. 😊

The way Sanskaar and Swara exchanged numbers, and how he wanted her to have a bachelorette part was so sweet! I like the way their relationship is progressing in steady and incremental steps from understanding and friendship, to increasing the warmth and trust between them. A very realistic take on their marriage which after all, happened all of a sudden, before they had really come to know anything much about each other.

The mature and very sensible way Sanskaar is behaving, wanting to put Swara completely at ease, would go a long way in making her comfortable with him. I think it won't be long before Swara starts feeling a lot more for him that companionship and friendship. 😳 😉 And vice versa, too!

BTW, Lakshya was love guru, the ostentatious and flowery compliments he was giving Ragini made me go completely 😆 🤣 I like him a lot more in your SS than his version on the show! Here, he is kind of crazy and has wacko ideas, but his intentions are good, and he does have a good heart.

I also really liked how you have portrayed Ragini's feeling of remorse and guilt. She is feeling especially bad since both Swara and Sanskaar apologized to her; despite Ragini having done some devious things. She has again realized how much value Swara attaches to their relationship, and how Swara thinks of her really as a sister, not just a cousin.

The RagLak part was also very nice. It takes a lot to reveal one's weaknesses and negative emotions, and Lakshya took a very admirable step in revealing to Ragini how he had earlier felt jealous of Sanskaar. His narration of that memory of his birthday, how he finally realized how much Sanskaar and Uttara love him, was quite moving. And very realistic, too, how he explains it was difficult for him to conquer his feeling of jealousy and insecurity as regards Sanskaar, but with the genuine affection and brotherly love between them, he was able to do so.

How mature and sensitive of Sanskaar , the way he handled the confession from Lakshya that he felt jealous! He was so cool about it, he said he would help him overcome it, and even said that he, in turn, was jealous of Lakshya's sporting skills. I don't believe he actually felt that 😉 😆, but it was a very tactful and diplomatic thing to say.

Finally, Ragini seems to getting some really good advice. Thankfully Lakshya is a far better person than Annapurna it seems! 😊

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter my dear.

BTW, am keeping fingers crossed for a blockbuster Indian Wells SF match Sunday morning between our favorites! 😆 Will you be watching Live?

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Nice update...

nice updates and also i like how laksh helped rags this was quite good i hope she will overcome her jealousy soonish

Nita... 🤗 ... Moi just loved it really loved it thier lite moments.. Really want to give bada bada comment but time restraining me... 👏 👏 👏 for your work dear...

I loved sujatas concern and fear... 😛 ... Swara assuring too... Sanskaar reaction tooo..

Sanskaar idea of bachelorette... Party.. Nice idea...me too had this kind of party... Before my marriage... Doing our favourite things for the one last time... It was a different feel...

Soo... They exchange their no.. In a nice way I loved that too...

Suju anger while her son's disturbing her while watching her favourite serial... Supporting bahu. To win evil Sasuma...who resembles her own Sasuma... Wow.. I'm laughing like a hell...

Just loved it...

Love you too...


PS:- I forgot to read ragya part will read later... Work calling me...

Nita superb update again 👏
Loved it
Sujata and swara scene was awesome
Lakshya the romantic guru 😆
Sanskar and shekhar 😆
Swasan 😳 i loved their understanding
Swara bachelor party 😆
Raglak scene was awesome
Very well written 👏
Update soon

Lovely update Nita!! I'm glad this Ragini is trying to get rid of her jealousy early on itself.. You aren't planning on turning her negative na?? And i also liked the sanlak bonding and swasan's understanding that u portrayed.. Nice one😊