II SWASAN FF : HANDED TO YOU II - CHAPTER 5 UPDATED pg.26

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kavita_b_2004

@kavita_b_2004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awesome dear... Hope they meet soon

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Okay buddy awesome update if a bit sad...

Wow nice to see she misses him as much as he does her...hope they meet and he learns to forgive her...wonder how he will react...

And not fair huh cliffhanger at the end if such a short update no worries though...

Keep writing it's good...

Enjoy the homework ..

Raz ;)

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Nice update..feeling bad for Swasan 😔

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: raaz19
Okay buddy awesome update if a bit sad...

Wow nice to see she misses him as much as he does her...hope they meet and he learns to forgive her...wonder how he will react...

And not fair huh cliffhanger at the end if such a short update no worries though...

Keep writing it's good...

Enjoy the homework ..

Raz ;)

Glad you liked it dear

And due to homework there is a cliffhanger

Hahaha very funny ... NOT 😭

I don't wanaaa 😭

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Zainab...

They sounds more than best friend.Both missing each other badly..hope they will meet and unite soon.Its kind of painful for them.update soon dear

Love

Simi😊

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Superb update 👏
Poor sanskar 😭
Dadi 😡 i just hate her
Update soon please

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zeenucharm

@zeenucharm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Wow... Really amazing story... Waiting for next update dear

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Awesome.

The love of swasan is mutual. But they recognized it later.

Janam Janam saath chalna, the song was really suit for the situation.

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Hey Zainab...

Such a moving chapter yaar. So full of pain, loneliness, anguish and yearning. Swara and Sanskaar are suffering so much because of their separation. 5 years!! 5 long, terrible years of pining for each other...My God...my heart goes out to those two.

One line which was so hard hitting was---Swara realizing she broke Sanskaar, by leaving like that without telling him, cutting off all ties with him. She knew, because she herself was broken. After all, they were two halves of a whole, how could they be complete without each other...

That para was so moving; I could literally feel their pain.

The flashback of their moments in the past, the way she was singing a song to cheer him up, was so very cute. I feel they were already more than just best friends, they were truly soulmates.

Do continue soon, and make them meet yaar. 5 years of separation---too much to bear. 😭 😭

Lots of Love,

---Viji