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Sorry a bit late, but I'm not good, So I cannot update sorry once again



Chapter 6

It was Sunday, Ragini wake up late. She is very tired, because she has a lot of work. She worked at AR and SR ( Swaragini). Then she remember she must take Veer and Kajal to the cinema. It was already 11 O'clock, she is late. She prepared herself in maddening hurry. She wore a jean, a top and a basket. She take her bag, keys and goes to Raichand Mansion. She enter, Veer and Kajal was angry at her

" I'm sorry baccho, I'm very late"

" Yes we know you are late. We won't talk to you"

" Hey choti, tum Ragu ma nahi baat karogi?"

" Tum peerse mudje choti boolare ho?" she said in an agry tone " I said I will not talk to her, so I will not"

" Kajal beta, you will not talk to me? You will not talk to your mom? Saach me?" Ragini said

" You are not my mom, because you don't live with us. You just say that you are our mother, taki we will not be sad, you don't love us" she said crying. Ragini was sad to see this little girl crying. She was like that, when she was young. She cried a lot to gain a motherhood love, but this never happend, even after the arrival of Swara's mother. She was lost is her thought when Veer tell his sister

" Sis, Don't cry because Ragu ma will never let us. Remember, yesterday she said that we will live with her in her house. Don't cry, you are my choti, you are my strong choti" Ragini was happy that Veer starts to become mature, and then said

" Kajal, you know how much I love you nahi na? I have a lot of work yesterday, issiliye main thak gayi hoon, but you will be angry at me, we wil really miss the cartoon"

" I know you love us, but like dad, you always work, and I'm afraid that you will leave us, like papa." She said in cute way

" Oh my little angel, I will never leave you both. Main Vaada karte hoon. And you know I'm not missing my promise. So chale?"

Kajal nod and hug Ragini

" I love you Ragu ma" she said

" Hey choti, don't try to take Ragu ma with you. I'm also here and need her, so please can you back off, like that, I will also hug her"

" you both stop fighting. I have so much space that I can hug you two together. Come here my shehzaade" They have a hug and bid bye to all family.

" Sunno je! They were so much happy na?" said Dadi

" Haan ma they are very happy" said Radha

" Bahu, so why my heart tell me that something will happen?" said a worried dadi

" Nahi ma, after so many years, Veer and Kajal find their mother. They are just happy." said Yamini with a reinsurance voice.

" I hope, because, when he will come, he will create a hungama. And I don't want Ragini and the children suffer" said Dadi.

" No, he will never come here. He has promise himself to never reenter in this house" said Radha while crying.

" We cannot tell the truth to the Children, they will be very hurt " said Dada

" Ma don't worry, they will never learn that their papa..."

" Yamini bhabi stop, don't tell this. It's hurt. I've already lost my two child, I don't want to lost my grand children too" said Radha.

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Cinema

" Baccho, what you want to see?"

" Ragu ma, I want to see Snow queen"

" Urg Choti! No Ragu ma, I want to see Arthur and the invisibles"

" No Ragu ma, Snow Queen"

" No Arthur and the Invisibles "

" No Snow Queen"

" No Arthur"

" STOP! Chup. You are fighting like your life depend in these film. No we will go to see the lion King ok? "

" Yeah" said Veer

" Yippi" said Kajal

" Stay here, I will take the ticket, don't call with stranger, even if he says he know your parents OK?"

" Ok ragu ma. I will be quiet, but I don't know if Veer can?" said Kajal mocking Veer

" Choti, you know I will prove you that I'm better than you" said Veer challenging Kajal

" Stop you two. Chup chap bethja hiye, and I don't want you two fighting. If not we will not see the cartoon. I'm clear?"

" Okok mama" they said in chorus with a fake sad voice

She went to buy the ticket, and when she return she doesn't find the child. She panic and scream out they name.
" Ragini, don't panic, you will find them, and then you scream at them."

" Kajal, Veer kahaho tum dono?"

" Dekho mama aisa mazzak passan nahi hai"

" Mama we are here, why are you screaming?"

" Tum dono gaha gaye?"

" We want to buy you a bracelet, this girl sells kangaan" Kajal point at a girl who is entrance and said

" You know ragu ma, she is poor, so I think I should help her, so we bought all kaangan, so that she won't work anymore" said Veer

Ragini was happy, and think
" Theses children are very unique and strange too. They are small but they understand the pain of other, when themselves is suffering.

" But you should told me. Maybe you are two understanding the world around you, but don't forget that you are still a child, and you should remain at that. Alright, I know you two want to help this girl, but you will miss you children in the process to understand the world" She said

" Sorry ragu ma, we will tell you next time promise" they said looking down

" Oh merra baccha, you are afraid me so much. But yet I'm happy that you are helping other, lekin haan next time tell me, and will go with you" She hug them

" Ok Ragu ma" they smile

" Before going we should take all theses bangles into car, warna we will be annoyed " said Ragini

" Ok chalo, we have still 30 min before the cartoon begin"

They reach the car, and put all the bangle in the car, and go to the entrance of the cinema.

" Baccho, come with me "
They go where the girl is and then Ragini said

" Tumhara naam kya hai?"

" Ji didi, mera naam Radika hai"

" Radika tum school keliye jaana hai?"

" Nahi Didi, mera pass money nahi hain"

" Tum school ke liye jaana chaateho?"

" Ji didi, lekin mera pass money nahi hai. Lekin Jab mere pass paissa hai, mudje zarror school jana hai"

" Tum fikr mat karo, kal tumhara mama and baba mera office anne diye ok"

" Ji didi " Ragini give the girl her office card and goes before that, she give her money
" ise lo, paanch hazar ke note, don't work here"
" Shukriya didi, main pratna karega hai ki aap hamesha kush ho jaega, aur mili ek pati jo aapko bahut bahut pyaar donga" she said all happy and kiss Ragini in her cheeks.

Ragini think, I will never find a husband, who will accepte me and love me, because I'm a divorce women" and then tell
" Lekin main ek vaada chahiye"
" Haan bolo didi"
" You will study hard, and become a great women ok?"
" Ji didi, I will"
Ragini smile at the girl and go to the entrance of the hall.
" Ragu ma you are the best mom ever"
" Yes and we love you very much"
The whole scene is seen by someone. That someone says
" Your happiness will soon turn into a nightmare" and laugh evilly.

After one hour of the Lion King, Ragini and children come out the hall and tell

" Baccho, do you want go eat an ice cream?"
" Yes" they said

They go to her car and goes to ice cream parlor. They ordered the ice cream. For Veer it's was Ben&jerry's chocolate; Kajal want to eat Vanilla ice cream, and Ragini eat snickers ice cream ( I confess it's my favorite 😛 )
When they finished, they goes at the beach. They have so much fun. Veer and Kajal put sand in her hairs. She take her revenge and put them in water. After two hours of fun, they return home.

" Bare dada-dadi, dadis, we are home"
No one replay, Ragini tell
" Maybe they are in they room. You two go, change and take a bath"
" Ok ragu mama"
She smile at them, and come to Dada-dadi's room; but no one was here. She goes to Radha ma room and Yamini aunty room, but no one was in there room.
She call them in their number , still not a respond. She begin to think
" Where they are gone, they don't tell me? I should call Yash bhai maybe he know"
Yash take her call
" Kya Ragini, you cannot let me with my would be fiance alone?" he said in a dramatic voice
" Chup, bilkul chup, if I knew you was with Meera, I will not call you, but no one is in Mansion"
" What? I didn't know! You have call them?"
" Yash bhai, you think I'm an idiot! Of course I call them all, but they don't take my call. I don't know but I feel weird, like something is happening"
" You are always weird, but don't worry, I will come, and search them. Maybe they go out and don't want to tell us"
" Haan maybe. I will wait for you at mansion"
" Ok I will come in 45 min"
" Why 45 min?"
" Because I'm with Meera so?"
" So what? Meera goes before your family?"
" No I didn't mean that. Meera and me are out of the earth?"
" KYA?" she said almost screaming
" Uffo, don't cream like, I mean I have organize a mini cruise, but I will tell the captain to return to the litoral"
"Ok I will wait for you! I will call their friends to make sure that they are not with them"
"Ok"

After one hour Yash come with Meera.
" Yash you came late, how could you be so irresponsible"
" Ragni, wo.. wo?" Said Meera
" Wo wo kya, tell saaf saaf" she was very angry at them
" Wo, it's because of me, if Yash is late, because I sprained my ankle"
She look at Meera and tell
" You look ok"
" Yes it's because Yash took me hospital, and they ..." Meera was cut off by Ragini
" Let it be, when you two are here, we can go and search in every place that they could go. If we didn't find them, we will go police station, and report they disappearance "
They go in the same car. Yash was driving, Ragini receive a text telling
" If you want to know where your families is, then come here". She was shocked and begin to cry, and take Kajal and Veer with her; Yash ask her
" Rags, why are you crying?"
" I have receive a text telling me to come to this adress if I want to find my families"
" to chalo, don't worry Rags everything will be fine".
" Haan mama, don't worry"
They come to the address and Ragini was shocked

So the Chapter 6 please you? tell me 😊😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
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yay thank you, hope you will get better
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

yay thank you, hope you will get better


Thank you 😊 I hope too
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really nice update
aww kids are so sweet they care for the girl so much and Ragini gave her money and asked to see her parents she is a great soul

Yash is funny but it's nice he is caring

I wonder who has kidnapped them

hope you get well soon and post the next part soon
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Awesome update
Ragini is shocked seeing the place they went to
Can't wait for next part
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really nice update
loved the kids caring nature for the people . and their bonding with ragini.
why is ragini shocked after reaching the place ? waiting to know
plzzz continue soon
waiting...
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Chapter 7


It was dark, only one candle lights the room. We cannot see properly the face of the person. He was talking to himself maybe

The days passed, but that doesn't count. It's so hard to live without you. This perfume so different from yours. Worse, I counted every minute that hold me to her. I'm like my own prisoner. Often, I wonder what you are doing, where you are, who you love. Do you still love me? I cannot get you out of my head. I pretended to have found the strength. I keep deep inside me that I love you, I always love, just I cannot see that before. I'm trying to forget you with another. Time doesn't seem to erase your mistakes and mine. Yet I cannot forgot what you did with my family, and I cannot forget what I did to you too. I don't want to forget you, even if I try. I try to treat me with another. She tried to console me, she is very understanding. Every time I look at her, I see you. She loves like a crazy like you, she told me I love you sometimes for hours. I breath you in her arms. Why I cannot get you out of my mind, or my heart. Ragini I love you, where are you? Don't you listen to me? My heart cried for you. Come back to me. Since you left me, I'm like a corpse. I know I did a mistake by using you, but trust me, I really loves you. Yes, the person is none other Laksh Maheswari. He cry his heart out. The light turn on, and he turn around to find Swara. She has tears in her eyes, and come to him


Laksh, I won't forgive you until Ragini herself forgive you; I know you love her, so why you want to remarry. Why you want to spoil the life of another girl? Tum kyon iss laaki ki zindagi barbad chate ho?


Main Pari ka zindagi nahi barbad chati hoon. Lekin ma force me to remarry, because she is not well. She want me to settle before she leave. Unki tabit karaab hain because of me. I sacrifice myself for her happiness.


Aur tumhari khusi? Pari ki khushi? soch lo, I want another Ragini in this house. I don't want you to play with her feeling like you did with my sister. Pari is very adorable, and if she learn that you don't love her, she will break


Mudje pata hai, lekin main Ragini nahi bhool pahenge. I don't know what to do?


I cannot help you! I'm leaving


Thank you Swara, after paanch saal you came to talk to me


Don't thanks me, for me you are just my husband brother nothing else She was very rude. She left the room, and once again Laksh is left alone, with his pain and sorrows.


Ragini, I still love you, but maybe you have move on, so I have to forget you. This was my punishment for using you, breaking you, playing with you. I hope you are happy wherever you are. I know I cannot play with Pari feeling, but I have to make Ma alright. Once again, I will be selfish, but trust me, you will always be in my heart. I cannot forget your face, your voice, your smile, your touch He think when they consummate This time I wasn't faking g my love to you, and today I'm alone . He then get a call of Pari


Hello


Hi Laksh, how are you?


Fine thank you and you? he don't want to talk to her, but he cannot cut it


I'm totally fine. Lash I'm very angry with you, you didn't call me all day! I was waiting for your text, or a call just to tell me that I miss you or anything, but you didn't She said with a sad voice


Tum pata hai ki main busy thi


Haan you and your work. After our wedding this will change. I will not allow you to go to your office


Aap thak hamara shaadi nahi chukiti, so don't dream awake


That's so rude MR Laksh Maheswary. You know what?


What? he said in a harsh voice


I love you, and my love for you is so big for humdono! I will wait, and one day you will love me, I'm sure


I've to go


Like always! bye Laksh


He hang off, and tell


I will never love you Pari, this shaadi main sirf ek samjauta hai. Kaash Ragini to wapas ao, mere gale main


He then drink all the wine. Three bottles was empty by now and he imagine Ragini in his Room


Laksh, tum yehi chatiti nahi naa? ki main tumhare aur tumhare parivaar ki door jahon? So what it this? Why this comedy?


Ragini tum?


Kyon? shock hai tumhe?


I'm so happy...


Haan tum kyon khush nahi hai? Main chali jati ti, lekin main laut aaya! Tumhare barbadi keliye


Kyon?


Kyon matlab? Tum kya socha? Tum mudje istemal kiya, aur main kuch nahi kaha? Nahi Laksh, I hate you, I hate so much, that I will pray ki agle janam main tumahari patni nahi hoga


Ragini you I love you so much. tum... main he fainted


Next morning he wake up, and have a hangover. He go to his bathroom and come down after. Everyone was here, Sanskar, Swara, Chachi-Chacha, Arash and Parineeti. No one talk to him except Sanskar


Bhai are you ok?

DurgaPrasad who was coming down tell

Why will he not be ok? He is happy after all! He ruined our family happiness


Enough scream Laksh

Peechle paanch saal, main apki tang sunreho. Main chupta lekin that's not mean you will always put the blame on me. I did all this for my family


I didn't tell you to do that! Raging was our bahu, your Mom tell you to not play such a game with her, but you didn't listen to her, and SEE your mom is not well because of YOU DurgaPrasad lost his temper


You know what Dad, how it's good to tell other their fault. We are humans and make fault. I've already said sorry to all of you, what you want me do more than that?


Tum Ragini dundo said Anapurna I want my daughter back! Maybe she will not be my bahu, but still she will always be my daughter she said with tears in her eyes. Everyone was sad


Mom, I love her, but I don't where she is


Please Laksh don't tell me you love me. If you ever love her, you will not do what you did with her. Aur vaise bhi tum Pari ko shaadi chata hai hai na? because you promise me that you will marry a girl before I leave.


Ma I will never love Pari. Main Ragini se pyaar karta hoon, and I will always. I cannot give her place to Pari. Never He come upstair but before that Swara told him


You said the same to my sister, that you cannot give her my place, but see today you love. If you can love Ragini, you will learn to love Pari


Swara just keep your nose in your house, don't tell what I will have to do. I've fall in love once but not twice. Sara you was just my obsession, but Ragini was and are my love. Everyone was shocked by his revelation. He loves Ragini


Ma, why you don't stop this wedding? Pari will be shattered when she will learn that Laksh never love her


Swara beta, this is Laksh life! I won't tell him what right or wrong, because he will not listen to me. I did a mistake in the past, I cannot bring Ragini here and she left us. I won't tell him how he should be with Pari, because when I tell him not to play with Ragini's heart he didn't listen to me


Lekin ma, he is repenting


So? let him repenting. He has hurt Ragini so much, that he will never be happy in her life again


Ma Laksh is your son


and Ragini was my daughter


Lekin ma


Baas Swara. If you want to talk to him, I won't forbid you. For me my son died the day he play with a girl emotion

Everyone was silent. Anapurna and DurgaPrasad finished they food and goes upstair. Just Swara and Sanskar remain in the hall


Sanskar, I cannot let Pari wed Laksh


I know, but we cannot do anything. Pari is not in India, she left yesterday, so we should wait for her coming

" But she will come with her family, how we will tell her

" When the day come, we will think. For now MRS Swara Sanskar Maheswari can I have a Kiss

" No and she run

" Swara sambalke tumko. You should not run in this condition he smile and went to his office

This scene was seen by Laksh and he think

Maybe, if I've not play with you, today, you will have a mother of my children like Swara. Ragini kaha ho tum? his tears flow down and goes to his office.


It's was a POV of Laksh because many of you ask me to write Laksh's feeling. Other chapter will remain around Ragini POV. Thank you


So tell me how was this chapter ?

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another brilliant chapter missed Ragini
its nice to read Laksh's point of View and what he is feeling

poor Pari wonder what will happen to her

missed Ragini, hope you get time to post the next part soon

Thank you
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Thank you so much
This is beautifully written
Laksh is in love with ragini that's great
Waiting for the next please update soon
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Brilliant update😊
Aww hope Laksh tries to find pari soon

Update soon😆

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