I Can't Forget You ~Swasan~ ( chap 3 pg 10) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting and different concept.. Do continue😊



Will update by 2day...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you guys for your support.
Not wasting any of ur time Im here with the update




Chapter 1 - ThE wOrSt DaY oF mY life


A man in black formal suits is working in his office.

Suddenly his phone rings...

In Phone...

He - yes mom! Y did u call me???

Mom - where r u??? Come home fast. Look at the time its already 9 pm.

He quickly glances at his watch and says

He - sorry mom!!! I wil reach home Within 30 min. ...

With this he removes his blazer from his chair and takes his car key and runs to the parking area...

Its was raining heavily and he was getting furious with the rain .

And again his phone ring...

Phone

Mom - where r u??? U did not even reach???

He - on my way mom. Im driving , I wil call u later.

The car was in full speed. Suddenly his eye blinked as he sees a truck approaching towards him. He turned the steering to his left with a jerk to avoid any unfortunate accident. And a loud bang voice echoed in the surrounding with smoke engulfing the water droplets.There he was in his car with his upper body lying on the steering wheel. One of his hand on the steering wheel while the other hung down. Blood was oozing from his forehead and trickled down on his face. His car was there with the bonnet open due to the impact of colliding with a tree.



Meanwhile in London

A girl wakes up with the jerk and feels something is wrong. She gets up and goes near Durga Maa's idol and starts to pray.

She - I don't know why but I am getting scared.

********* end********

So guys as I said u , Im up with chap 1.
Let me know how is it.
Keep commenting and liking. Will continue according to ur comments.


Love



Mahira
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
You really know how to keep a suspense
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicAddict

You really know how to keep a suspense
Continue soon!



I know 😉 ... Thanks for your comments. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
is accident happpend to was sanskar?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Mahira...too much yaar...its very short plz continue soon...and it is very very beautiful...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Mahira...too much yaar...its very short plz continue soon...and it is very very beautiful...



Next time I wil giv u a long update... n thnk u for u comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

is accident happpend to was sanskar?



u wil get to knw in next chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting and nice update. Update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting and nice update. Update soon😊



Thank you for your comment... but I want more likes and comment...

being selfish is sometimes good... 😉

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