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Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hi dearest Muktai
I m new as a member on this forum but old as a reader here.
I have read a lot on swasan but never did really feel importance of opening a account.
You know you are one of the reason that I have opened ths account .
Because I wanted to let you know
that I want next part of this OS.
I know this is a OS,
But please write continuation of this,
As I m in love with this os.
You are a wonderful writer.
Coming to the os , it was totally a treat to read.
Loved it ...Totally .
I was actually laughing reading swara's antics .
Very well described
The complete os was mindblowing ,
But I would like to mention some lines ,
Which completely made me a fan of yours,
like
"he mentally thanked his stars that there was no one on the road to see his wife's crazy antics"
"he felt like laughing at his fate when she told him that he will leave her after divorce"
and lastly his determination that if she feels for him , then he will never let her go away from him.
Loved your os.
Please write next part and post soon
Waiting for it.

Originally posted by: muktai

HARSADA...I KNOW SWEETHEART HOW MUCH YOU LOVED THIS...

BUT THANKS TO ME YOU CAME HERE...
YOU INTRODUCED ME TO THIS NEW WORLD AND I AM GRATEFUL YOU DID...
WELCOME JAAN...

I WILL THINK ABOUT SECOND PART...YOU KNOW HOW HECTIC AND BUSY MY LIFE IS
😕

BUT I WILL TRY FOR YOU 😉

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow this os is just amazing cannot believe I missed it before...

Just loved the crazy antics of swara...her innocent would speaking the truth and sanskaar hope was expressed beautifully...

If time permits..

Please write part two...hope you are well...keep smiling..

Raz