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Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

I catched few of ur parts in one go really Nimmi,ur Angel gives me mighty happiness and I am sure it will be the best ever 👏👏

Do continue soon dear😃



Jenni..
🤗

So good to see you girl. really!

and hey thank you so very much dear for reading the story and for this wonderful compliment.
big hugs and love.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791

Just one word amazing. Swara is really trouble just like gabriel called her amazing update.



Thank you so much Princess🤗.

Yup Swara is trouble indeed. and the trouble is gonna get bigger😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23



welcome dear...ya pixie d boat with swara n gaby...i had an imagination..so told u...



That's a wonderful imagination Simi.
will surely try to incorporate if i can.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

Nimmi...chapter 21 was awesome...haha i was laughing like a mad reading bozo's ideas that how sud swara contact Nasa...lol...he z damn funny... 😃 ...n d swara gabriel scene...pink room..winnie d pooh blanket...aww swara is cutie girl...by heart ...btw i hv a winnie d pooh blanket too...
Nw i hope der wud b no problem between swara n gaby regarding interview...plz update soon dear...
Love u
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Simi..
🤗

Thank you so much dear for enjoying the update and commenting.
winnie the pooh blanket? so cute Simi. i own a tom and jerry t-shirt though i stop fitting into it long time back.😆.

no problem between swara n gaby regarding interview.?
naaa.. there would be problems actually. heee!

updating about that soon.
thanx again.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jamina

OMG!! YOU Reached Chapter 21 And Guess what! Cause Of My Busy schedule I'm Stuck in chapter 18



Jami..
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Where have you been girl?
you were so missed.

welcome back. koi nahi. read at your own pace buddy.
good to see ya Jami. *hugs*

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

OMg..

Pink wainted wall ..
cartoon blanket...
and imagining Gabriel sleeping..
🤣

great..
Typical thinking of reporter the way swara reacted...
How foolish of swaara to think that Gabriel will tell her everything so soon???

Does swara leave alone???

Continue soon..
Thank you for the pm..



Jidnyasa..
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thank you so much for reading and commenting.
I am so glad you enjoyed the update.

Swara could be really innocent and trusting at times.. but that's out girl. flawed and all.

and yes she lives alone. will tell you about her back story soon.😳.

Thanx again dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

So now Swara knows who her man really is. and she wants to interview him. is she going to stand up to him now that she knows more, or be nervous? i guess apte will track her down too and gabriel will need to tag her along may be with her bozo to his safe place? hmmm questions questions. is this ms saxena involved in something fishy? love the part and the funny way he woke up...also the blackmailing of bozo.. waiting for the next part 👏 👏 👏



Sapna..
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Thank you so very much dear for reading the update and liking it.
and commenting upon it.

and i am so showie i cant answer those questions right now. pitfalls of writing a thriller.
will write about them soon. pakka. hopefully you will enjoy the answers.

thank you so much once again😳.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nimmiee 🤗

Meri Ros..🤗

Winnie the Pooh blanket! 🤣 Pffhahah! Swara is such as pineapple! My poor Gaby... hope the men won't find him in this state... his hard core reputation would go down the drain!

hahah.. damn you make me give away the story but there would be this one guy who will so enjoy this state of gaby.

Swara does find it very pleasurable to make him say thank you, doesn't she? I believe every couple should have a tag line... and this is theirs. Gaby boy, buckle yourself up! I have a feeling the thank you count is only going to increase! 😆.

your feeling is bang on. and i so love your tag line.

pineapple and coconut😆.

Bozo knows who Gabriel is! 😲Finally Swara realises what a mess she's gotten herself into, better late than never I guess. Loved Bozo's realistic and witty approach to Swara's rather too optimistic and crazy plans. 🤪Bozo seems very afraid of his mumma... will we get to meet her? I wonder what kind of personality she has. Swara is an expert blackmailer...she could use it on Gaby someday after getting a scoop. 😉.

mumma of Bozo.. humm. not bad. will try to conjure her if the story permits. good idea girl.

Swara is crazy. but she is our girl.😆.

and yes.. blackmailing part... shsshh.. wait for it.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this stupid plan of Swara's unfolds. Would Gaby still be at Swara's? Sure, he needs rest but the men can just the admission docs at the hospital & find out where she lives na? I don't think he'd want to get Swara into trouble.. scratch that, I don't think he'd want Swara to get him into trouble. He doesn't like being hunted, it's him who does the hunting...

shooo! i wont give away the story now. but please do keep commenting like this so that i can tweak and adjust the story accordingly. i love logic. though you wont guess it from my serial choice.😆.

Cont soon! 🤗

Yo girl! *hugs back*

PS: Re your reply.. Nooo! Keep the gruesomeness coming. 😈 Just wanted to say how good of a writer you are! And yaayy, can't wait for meeting between Gaby-Bozo! ⭐️ And Nimmie, you coming into my dreams is hardly a threat..you could do some jadoo and plant pics of those earrings into my brain.. now that is something for me to worry about.. wait, why am I giving you ideas? 😳.


hahah gruesomeness. we really are violent ones. but on serious note.. please Ros let me know if i get carried away. i do get carried away when i get violent burst of creative ideas. will watch my words then.

and hey.. thanx for the amazing idea😈. Now i know how to blackmail you to keep commenting here.

thank you dearest one for the comment. lots of love🤗.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 22 rocked...
Swara noodle expert... Ha ha .

Expecting him to agree for payback... Gabriel answer was great...

It was real fun.. .

So he heard about Bozo but still not met him

Waiting eagerly for next Chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gabriel is all-rounder...love him..n swara is so...hahaha..it will be a great bond between them..

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