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Posted: 10 years ago
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What do you see in him?

I thought you laughed and played with me and me only.

You will never accept me as your Husband..but I thought we were still friends. Best friends.

I know you wanted to go back to him...but then I wish you could just get out of this house.

I don't want to see your face ever again. I'll dream of it tonight.

How can you smile that way with him?

You told me you want me with you always. Then why is it that right now I am only standing here seeing you engrossed with him, uncaring about me?

I am better than him. In every way.

He made you fall. I picked you up. He never put anything right. I did.

He asks for one chance and you refuse. Then you give it to him.

And me? I am your husband for God's sake. I love you.

I told you to accept him. Obviously.

If you do not love me..then go back to him. He wants you.

If you do not love him..come to me. I'll make you my life.

If you do not love either...then go, get out. Be happy elsewhere.

I cannot bear you laughing with someone else in front of my eyes. Maybe thats why my brother is so angry when he sees you with me.

I am not your teddy, which you keep to play with at odd moments, when you need it.

When you need to talk to someone, its me. When I want to talk to you..then? empty seat.

I will solve all your problems...without any return.

My biggest problem is you. Who will solve that?

I am crying today. Don't bother. After all you have other people to dry your tears now..and my sobs never even spill out. I am okay.

Please, Go away. Or I will.

Please...I do not want to live without seeing you smile.

I cannot watch you smile that way because of anyone else but me.

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PureHeartNSoul thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a beautiful and poignant piece :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res.. unres medha me😭 sanskar never tells is pain but really whom shall he tell swara keliye he is there always but for him empty seat😭😭
on a lighter note we will fight for dat empty seat if dis character was real

again⭐️⭐️⭐️ for ur post( star emoticon is asking me why i use it more for u😆 )
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sigh ! That was heartbreaking 💔
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Originally posted by: sam.

Sigh ! That was heartbreaking 💔


sorry but bechara ka heart break hua hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think i finally understood why the precap hurt as much as it did after reading this piece. So touching this one is

Yes yaar, like sanskaar even i dont expect her to love him immediately. But she was his friend, he was hers. But now she is also laksh's friend? WHY!! At least that place should have remained his alone 😭 she said she could read his eyes...what changed between then and now. Why is sanskaar standing on tue outside looking in, when it should have been him beside her??
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Originally posted by: The.Lannister

I think i finally understood why the precap hurt as much as it did after reading this piece. So touching this one is

Yes yaar, like sanskaar even i dont expect her to love him immediately. But she was his friend, he was hers. But now she is also laksh's friend? WHY!! At least that place should have remained his alone 😭 she said she could read his eyes...what changed between then and now. Why is sanskaar standing on tue outside looking in, when it should have been him beside her??


@bold...Shruti..abhi toh, I just wiped my aansu after writing this..your reply made me wanna cry again.😭 Why on earth is she gettting so close with that creep. which girl does that? playing holi with devar.😕

thanks. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heartbreaking Medhu...just heartbreaking.
I am just so gutted at the way yesterday's episode went. I dont have much hopes of today's either. Swara is being portrayed as too dense...and yeah, Sansku needs to distance himself is she won't wake up to her feelings. I was tremendously bugged seeing her laugh & joke with Lakshya and let him put an arm around her shoulder. ...the same guy who's been literally stalking her. 😡

Anyhow...very well written. You are great at articulating the character's pain...especially Sanskaar's...it comes across so palpably.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Medhu 🤗
This was both a balm and a lash to my angst ridden heart, which has been hurting badly since yesterday. A lash as it brought all that pain back that was felt at the stupid precap. Balm because I so want Sanskaar to say this to Swara (but we won't get it on the show). It still made me good reading it thinking how nice it would be if the stupid girl was made to read/ hear this. Heartrendingly beautiful it was. The whole trauma Sanskaar is feeling/ will feel is perfectly captured. The line "I'll make you my life" almost made me howl with frustration at Swara's blindness.
Love you xoxoxoxo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Messi2

res.. unres medha me😭 sanskar never tells is pain but really whom shall he tell swara keliye he is there always but for him empty seat😭😭

on a lighter note we will fight for dat empty seat if dis character was real

again⭐️⭐️⭐️ for ur post( star emoticon is asking me why i use it more for u😆 )


@bold..jesi...true.😉

bechara sansku..nobody understands him.😭 look at swara devar ke saath masti.🤢

thanks for the stars.😃

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