SwaSan OS : My Love Is Not Sympathy (16+)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frds hii...its me sonal again

N m here with an OS...again mainey aur misha ne AT par likha tha

Our combined work after that mujhe haq hai wala OS

SO Misha + Sonal = Minal...cool na😉

OKK here is the OS

MY LOVE IS NOT SYMPATHY

(16 +)

(After 10 days of ragini's revelation)

(At some hotel)

Sanskaar - swara tumne mujhe yahaan kyun bulaya

Swara - toh aur kya karti tum toh ghar aye nhi

sanskaar - ghar par kyun (with a confused look)

Swara - mujhe wapas apne ghar le jaaney ke liye...10 din ho gyye i mean itta lamba pag phera bhi hota hai kya

Sanskaar - tumhe kyun wapas ana hai

Swara - toh kya maayke mein padi rahoo apney pati ke ghar na jao

sanskaar- kon pati

Swara - kon matlab tum ho pati

Sanskaar - kyaa

Swara - haan

Sanskaar - aur laksh

Swara - woh toh mera devar hai na...ab batao kab chalna hai

sanskaar- kahaan

Swara - MM

Sanskaar - Jab tumhare Dil mein mere liye feelings hi nahi hai toh tum MM jake kya karogi?
I mean tumhe zabardasti k rishte ko nibhane ki Koi zarurat nahi hai.
Swara - Sans..
Sanskaar - Maine soch kiye kuch mahino baad main ...
Swara - kuch mahino baad kya Sanskaar?
Sanskaar - Kuch mahino baad main tumhe divorce de dunga.. ( it echo's )
(Swara in tears...intense eyelock)
Sanskaar - Haan Swara yahi theek rahega main tumhe divorce de dunga uske baad tumhe iss zabardasti k rishte se aazaadi mil jayegi ..phir tum apne raaste aur main apne raaste.
Swara stairing at him wid teary eyes
Sanskaar - Kya aise Kya dekh rahi ho? Tum bhi toh yahi chahati thi na...Humare raaste humesha se hi alag the Swara aur Ek baar divorce ho Jaye phir tum aur Laksh.. ( before he could complete his sentence ...Swara slaps him hard)

(sanskaar touched his cheek)
Sanskaar - what was that

(She slaps him again...he lost his cool n pinned her to the wall)

Sanskaar - what the hell do u think of yourself...main tumse pyaar karta hoon iska yeh matlab nhi hai ki tum mujhe insult karo...tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui mujhe

Swara - dard hua

Sanskaar (with a confused look) - haan

Swara - kyun

Sanskaar - because i love u aur main kabhi nhi chahunga ki tum meri aur mere pyar ki insult karo

Swara (she was in tears) - aur jo tum kar rahe ho...tumhe mere saath nhi rehna fine mat raho par tumhe koi right nhi hai mujhe yeh batane ka ki mujhe laksh ke saath rehna hai ya nhi

Sanskaar - matlab

Swara - matlab Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari I Love U n if u r feeling insulted toh tum mujhe thappad maar lo

Sanskaar - (he tightens his grip on her arms) thappad...tum mere baare mein aisa sochti ho...aur tumhari yeh jo sympathy hai na jise tum pyar keh rahi ho usey apne paas rakho...kyunki main koi bechara nhi hoon jiske saath tum sympathize karo

(Sanskaar loosens the grip)
(*Intense eyelock*...Sanskaar turns to leave...Swara stops him from leaving..helds him tight from arms and pins him against wall)
Sanskaar - Swara ye kya kar rahi ho tum...lemme go
Swara - Bas Bahut ho gaya Sanskaar... Enough is enough now...Bahut bol liya tumne.. Aur bahut sunn liya Maine ab main bolungi aur tum sunoge.
Sanskaar - Mujhe tumhari baat sunne mein Koi interest nahi hai
(Swara puts her finger on his mouth)
Swara - Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Pyaar ko sympathy ka naam dene ki...Tumhe koi haq nahi hai meri feelings pe sawal uthane ka...Maanti hoon ki maine Kabhi tumhari feelings ki respect nahi ki...Jante ho kyun? Kyunki ainm darrti thi...Pyaar karne se nahi...tumhe khone se darrti thi...Jise bhi Maine Pyaar kiya usne Mera sath chod diya...Aur main tumhe nahi khona chahati thi Sanskaar...Main apni khud ki feelings se bhaag rahi thi Sanskaar...Lekin aab aur nahi Tumhari ignorance ne Mujhe realize kara diya ki pyaar karne wale darrte nahi.
(*intense eyelock*)tum mujhse Pyaar karte ho na Sanskaar toh phir ye kaise nahi dekh paa rahe ki main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon..
I love you Sanskaar...I love you...I really really do
It starts raining..
Both getting wet
*intense eyelock*

(swara was staring at him...he was looking super hot in that wet look n he caught her)

Sanskaar-ghoor rahi ho

Swara-nahi toh

Sanskaar-ahaan...really

Swara-nhi woh ba...baarish

Sanskaar-hmm...mujhe dikh raha hai

Swara-haan ton...toh ab

Sanskaar-ghar hi chaltey hain

Swara-pagal ho saarey road blocks honge...yahin room poochte hain

Sanskaar-okk...lets ask

(sanskaar came back after 10 min)

Swara-room mila

Sanskaar-205

Swara-lets go

(they entered in the room)

Sanskaar-room toh accha hai

Swara-hmm

Sanskaar-swara r u okk

Swara(she again remembered his sympathy wala dialogue)-kyun pooch rahe ho...main kuch kahungi toh tum usey sympathy ka naam de dogey

Sanskaar-dekho swara

Swara-nhi sanskaar...tum karo toh pyaar main karoon toh sympathy

Sanskaar-swara u getting my wrong

Swara-tum karo toh shaadi main karoon toh compromise
(n she starts crying badly...Sanskaar saw her...he felt very bad and then he goes to her n kissed her tears..swara hugged sanskaar)

Swara-plzz mujhe kabhi chodkar mat jaana plzzz sanskaar

ye haseen waadeeyaan, ye khulaa aasamaan
aa gaye hum kahaa, aye mere saajanaa

(sanskaar hugged her back)
in bahaaron mein dil kee kalee khil gayee
muz ko tum jo mile har khushee mil gayee

(they both are feeling happy n safe in each others arm)

tere hothhon pe hai, husn kee bijaliyaan

(sanskaar toched swara's soft pink lips)
tere gaalon pe hai, julf kee badaliyaan

(he touched her silky black hair)
tere daaman kee khushaboo se mahake chaman
sangemaramar ke jaisaa ye teraa badan

(then his hands touched her milky smooth skin swara closed her eyes)

o meree jaana-ye-jaa, main teree chaandanee
chhed lo aaj koee pyaar kee raginee

(then their lips met and sanskaar starts dominating her)
ye haseen waadeeyaan, ye khulaa aasamaan
aa gaye hum kahaa, aye mere saajana

(after some time they broke the kiss and sanskaar starts kissing her neck)

ye bandhan hain pyaar kaa, dekho toote naa sajanee
ye janmon kaa saath hai, dekho chhoote naa sajanaa

(then sanskaar turned her and he opened the dori of her blouse and starts kissing her back)


tere aanchal kee chhaanw ke tale, meree manjil muze mil gayee
teree palakon kee chhaanw ke tale, mohabbat muze mil gayee

(he picked her up and placed her on the bed)

jee karataa hain saajanaa, dil mein tum ko bithhaa loo
aa mastee kee raat me, apanaa tum ko banaa loo

(Sanskaar kissed her forehead then her nose and then her bare stomach she smiled shyly)
uthhane lage hain tufaan kyo, mere seene me, aye sanam
tumhe chaahoongaa dila-o-jaan se, meree jaana-ye-jaan teree kasam

(now they both r in a different world...finally they r making love)

yeh haseen waadiyaan yeh khula asmaan

aye gye hum kahaan aey mere janejaan

o meree jaana-ye-jaa, main teree chaandanee
chhed lo aaj koee pyaar kee raginee
ye haseen waadeeyaan, ye khulaa aasamaan
aa gaye hum kahaa, aye mere saajanaa

(finally the became one n now they r married in every sense)😳

-THE END-


Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago

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MusicMyLife. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Sonal _/\_ I just can't get over last part [:">[
Being besharam I knw lekin kya kare ☺️
last part z fab yaar ☺️
Thanku fr writing 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sona and Mish 😉 awesome one together👏
I read it already though 😆
Firse pada 😃
Thank god iam 17 and I could read this 😆

Love you both ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I had read the everything except the last part ystrdy and now after reading the last part I'm literally like this---> ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Awesome work dearies!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sonu n Mishu - u sweeties rock!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haye ☺️
Kamaal ka OS Mishu and Sona 😳❤️
Last part to ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Im guessing smthg like this will mark swassn's reunion on the show too
Really nice os dear!!!!keep writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was amazing
love SwaSan confession
Edited by princess_tara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome. .. loved it.. minal rocks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sonal Mishu amazing yar...👏
Superb confession...👍🏼
Last part ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ooof!!!!
thats like wonderful. imagining...and dreaming.
great job sonal and misha.

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