' I WILL BE THERE FOR YOU' (last chap page 38)*Completed* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: gayu6

So nice. Please update the next part

Thanks for the comment and patience dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2:

ANKAHE RAAZ

A Man enters the badi.
"Sach kaha apne bohat ache sanskar diye apne...apne Ladooo ko phir to jaan Lena uske khoon me hoga...jaise apne Sharmista ki jaan lene ki khoshish ki hogi...waise jaan lena to apke liye baye haath ka khel hai..."

Shekhar:"yeh kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum Arjun meri maa se ...apni tameez bhul gaye ho kya????"

Arjun:"wah Shekhar babu tum apne biwiyon ko to izzat nahi de sakte par jab jab baat tumhari ladli beti ya maa par aye to tumhara khoon kholta hai...yeh himmat kaha thi jab Swara par iljam lage the Uss din bolo Shekhar..."

Dadi:"Arjun babu aap iss bangalan chori ka saath de rahe ho...aapko to Ragini ka saath dena chahiye...Ragini to apki ladli choti behen Janki ki beti hai"

Arjun in anger"Naam mat lijiye mere Janki ka apne jaban se...aaj agar mere Janki mere saath nahi hai to uske wajah aap hai Parvati Gadodiya...Khoon kiya hai apne mere behen ka..."

Everyone in the Badi gasps
Swara:maa yeh kya keh rahe hai

Sanskar: Swara sayad Hume kuch nahi bolna chahiye is mamle me

Dida:sonu sanskar sahi keh raha hai

Arjun:Aap ne na sirf mere behen ko Mara par uske andar pal rahe mere Janki ki ajanmi beti ko bhi Mar dala...Janki ka woh baccha so sorry uski rajkumari aapko bas apna waris chahiye tha ek pota chahiye tha jis wajah se apne yeh sab kiya...

Dadi:je galat hai.. Maine je sab na kiya hai

A lady (Arjun's wife Nandini)enters the Badi
Nandini:To apne mahri ladoo ko ko uske ajanme bacche ke ling ki jach karwani ko nahi kaha tha(sex determination)...aur je bhi na kaha tha ki woh baccha gira de...par mahri ladoo Janki na mani kyunki woh mahra dard samajti thi baccha na hone ka dard woh apni rajkumari ko mahre liye Lana chahti thi ki main us bacchi pe apne mamta lauta saku...and starts crying

Arjun:Nandini shant ho jao agar tum toot jaogi to kaise hoga...hum yaha is liye aaye hai ki jo 20 saal pehli humari ladoo aur rajkumari ke saath hua woh aaj Sharmista aur Swara ke saath na ho...

Shekhar:Hum sab jante hai ki Janki ki maut sidiyon se pair phisalne ki wajah se hue thi...aur usse wajah se uska baccha bhi na raha...

Arjun:wah shekhar Gadodiya aaj woh bacchi sirf Janki ki ho gayi woh baccha tumhara bhi tha...mujhe samaj nahi aata tum apne aap ke saath reh kaise sakte ho...

Dadi:Arjun babu aap ko koi galat fameli hue hai me apne ladli bindini ki jaan kyu lungi aur pura samaj janta hai Maine kabhi bhi ladka ladki me kabhi bhed bhav na kiya...je sab to is bangalan ne kiya mahri bindini ko jaan se maara...mahre bete ko apni apne jaal me phasa...

Nandini: Sharmista kabhi je sab na kar rahi thi kakisa kyunki apka beta Shekhar gaya tha Sharmista se baat karne ko Sharmista nahi...Us panch saal ki shadi me mahri ladoo ko kabhi koi Khushi na mili...na pati ka saath na uska pyaar usko mujhe toh kehte hue sharam aa rahi hai ki humne Janki ka ek aise ladke ke saath rista kiya jo bas apne maa baap ke haath ki ek katputli tha...

Arjun:Swara tum aise insaan ko sach bata rahi ho jo kabhi tumhara viswas nahi karega kyunki yeh insaan barose ke layak hi nahi hai...na woh meri choti ke layak tha na woh tumhari maa ke layak hai...

Swara:Uncle me nahi janti hoon aap sach keh rahe ho ya jhoot par mere zindagi ka maksad sirf mere ma baba ko ek karna hai...

Nandini:Sach ka saath to bhagwan bhi dete hai beta...(looking at dadi)lbada naaz hai na kakisa apko apni Ragini par (showing her a chip)yeh hai apki ladoo ka sach aur Swara ki begunahi ka saboot...



What is there in the chip????? guess guess...I know m a devil so ab mujhe comments aur likes se Khush karo...😈

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Is this the manchi I know?
OMG!
When did you come out of hibernation?
N you watch swaragini? Kabse?
Madam we need to catch up soon
Since I don't follow the show I have no idea about the characters😛
But cool ya you are writing again
Yayy!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first?
OMG!!!
*hyperventilating*
😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Is this the manchi I know?

OMG!
When did you come out of hibernation?
N you watch swaragini? Kabse?
Madam we need to catch up soon
Since I don't follow the show I have no idea about the characters😛
But cool ya you are writing again
Yayy!!!

you
OMG this is called law of attraction u was just about to msg you but ya swaragini has become my current fav all thanks to mom and ya madam ab redmi aya so hibernation se bahar😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Can't believe my Munazza madam commented first*dancing*🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
The story is so so interesting 👏
Loved this part seriously 😳
Can't wait to know what's in the chip 😆
Update soon and do pm me whenever you update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Loved it...
Do pm me while updating further..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Omg
Cliffhanger
Eagerly waiting to know what's about to happen

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