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Posted: 9 years ago
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ragini and Swara were alone on the terrace. Swara says "dekhona ragini waqt kitna badal Gaya hai... Tumhe pehle maa papa ke liye Laksh chuda tha lekin Aag ek ladke ke liye tumne apni maa I, behen, maa, papa sab ko chud diya."
Ragini had her back to Swara and after hearing that she turned around to face her. "Haan humne Kiya yeh sab. Laksh pe toh humara haq hai na for... Humne laksh ke liye bhaut kuch Kiya hai... Humne tumhe drus diye take tumhara aur laksh ka rishta thut kar. Apne raste se tumhe hatane ke liye humne tumhe maar ne ki bhi khoshish ki lekin sanskar bhaiya... Bhaiya me tumhe bachaliya. Thik hai koi baat nahi lekin tum bhaiya ko samjha lo ke agar hum humari behen ki Jaan le sakte hai toh unhe bhi hurt kar sakte hai hum."
Swara gets angry hearing this "ragini... Tum sanskar ko kuch bhi nahi kar sakte."
Ragini mocks her "kyun... Ek paraeh mArd ke liye itni chinta."
Swara "parae toh tum ho gae ho ragini sanskar nahi"
Ragini says "baad swara ab aur kitna Jhoot. Hum jab tumhara sach sabke samhe laengay na tab koi tumhara yakin nahi karaega. Hum ek sanskari, marvari bahu hai aur tum ek bin baap ke palhi hui Bengali Bahu..."
Before Swara could say anything Shekar's voice comes "BAS RAGINI"..

The entire maheswari family n gadodias- boses come out. (They are in the terrace and the family was hiding behind the door to the terrace. Door was open so everyone heard.) Everyone is shocked. Shekar storms to ragini and gives her a slap. Ragini gets shocked " yeh paarvarish nahi di thi tumhe. Tumhe toh ek saachi aur sanskari ladki baanaya tha humne. Apni parvarish pe bharosha karke meine ek Beti gavae aur apni biwi se rishta Tuda."
Dadi goes there " kyun Kia Issa ladoo. Bola tha na ke toh Issa kuch maat karna... Arrey laksh pe Kesa haq kaunsa haq hai Tera."
Ragini looks at her shocked "dadi maa apne hi toh hume baataya tha ke laksh pe sirf humara haq hai... Apne hi Kaha tha ke aap apni Taraf se Swara aur maa ko sazza dengi. Humne baas un Dono ko humari Taraf se saza di toh app-"
"sHUt UP"
Laksh comes there..." Tum apni safae de rahi ho. Mera bhai mujhe baachane ki khoshish kar raha tha lekin tumhara bharosa kar ke meine apne bhai ki insult ki... Tumne mera pyaar mujse door Kiya. I hate u ragini... Tumne mujhe Swara se door Kiya"
Hearing all this Swara has tears running down her face and she falls on her knees. dida and sanskar rush over to her while dp and annupurna process everything. Dida says "sworo... Ab jitna Rona hai Riley."
Sanskar gives her a sad smile and says "Dikho sab thik hogans. Ragini ka sach bahar agatha."
Swara snuggles into his arms and continues crying.
Shekar starts crying "meri Swara, meri misti Dono mujse door ho gae iss ladki ki waja se."
Dada Ji says "shekar yeh waqt Rone ka nahi hai...abhi ragini ko chudo. Woh jo kar sakti thi Woh ussne kiya lekin ab Swara... Uss baachi ko hum sab ko milke samhalna chahiye."
He turns to sanskar and folds his hands and says "beta tera bhala ho... Humari baachi ka itna khiyal rakhne ke liye."
Dp finally a speaks "hume iss waqt ab wohi karna chahahiye Jo Swara chahati hai. Uspe itni Muskil a gire aur fir usne ek awaz nahi Nikali... Bolo Swara Kya chahati ho tum."
Everyone looks at SwAra who was crying in sanskar's embrace.

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asyaarshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow I m hooked to it... what will be swara's decision... can't wait do update soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its really amazing...👏
Waiting 4 Swara decision...😳
Update soon yar...😊
Can't wait...
Edited by Asha122 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haila...
Shock laga itne suddenly jab sab bahar aaye...
Awesome yaar..
Hope aisa kuch dekhne mile...
Par CVS ... 🤢
Do cont soon...
I want to see what Swara's decision
Eagerly waiting for the next update... 😉
Edited by princessSonia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ss
continue soon...
what to read swara's decission...
but why is she crying so hard???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon yar...
Eagerly waiting 4 Swara's decision...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update soon
And do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JIDHNYASA

Nice ss

continue soon...
what to read swara's decission...
but why is she crying so hard???



That's a surprise
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is very interesting!
Continue soon...

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