Love Forever FF (Part 4 Updated)(PG:7)

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anju rana

@anju10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

woww lovely update dear

the new entries r awesome

poo nd swaraj nice name selection for the characters

finally we gonna see jealousy drama in the story

laksya feelng jealous of swaraj

and in most of the love stories jealous factor only works

the entry of swaraj nd swara running nd hugging him the part was awesome

ms briganza nd ramlal(rambo) r to gud

waitng for next update dear

thanxx for the pm nd adding me in the readers list

😊 😛 😛 😊

and its part 3 na dear but u wrote as part 4 plzz can u change it as the readers not get confused 😛 😛

Part - 4 ( Lucky Ki GirlFriend )

Edited by anju10 - 10 years ago

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alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Sud-
Wow, this is so nice !!

Loved the new entries !!
Laksh getting jealous ? 😆

Wonderful !! The story is setting up good...

One suggestion, show something like Precap at the end.. Like how they show in serials, "Kal" 😆
It will create excitement for the next episode 😉

Thanku and Happy to know You Like it ! There will be continues entries too...

And thanku for the suggestion !👍🏼 K fine Nice Idea so I would enter Precaps too...

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alleyway

@alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Roopal_ArDi
nice update
so good with so new enteries
liked the laksh's jealousy track
well but a ques is poo inspired from k3g?😉
btw got bit confused why pooh got angry on laksh?
and its third update right? u mistakenly put 4th update as post title
'and yeah i am with sud's idea on precap 👍🏼

Happy you Like it ...😊

Pooh ... Not actually from K3G ... But Winne The Pooh... Just needed an High Figh Cute name😆

And Yes Pooh got angry on Laksh because firstly he was busy watching at Swara's Expression and then when... laksh had seen Swara with Swaraj he was very angry and Pooh was Upset of him not noticing her and then laksh was irritated that when Pooh asked him something... His mind was thinking about Swara and Swaraj and in anger he said Go to Hell without realising what he said...😆

Thanku will Change the 4th into 3rd part...

and yes i am gonna use Suds.. Idea from the Next Part

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alleyway

@alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: anju10
woww lovely update dear
the new entries r awesome
poo nd swaraj nice name selection for the characters
finally we gonna see jealousy drama in the story
laksya feelng jealous of swaraj
and in most of the love stories jealous factor only works
the entry of swaraj nd swara running nd hugging him the part was awesome
ms briganza nd ramlal(rambo) r to gud
waitng for next update dear
thanxx for the pm nd adding me in the readers list
😊 😛 😛 😊

and its part 3 na dear but u wrote as part 4 plzz can u change it as the readers not get confused 😛 😛
Part - 4 ( Lucky Ki GirlFriend )

Thanku😃 so much🤗

More Entries to come...

Pooh from Winne the Pooh... and was searching a Name on Net related to Swar... and found Swaraj

Your Gonna Find Lots and Lots of Drama 😆

and have changed the Part... Thanku

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arohi

@lovearohi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

sry m late
well I luv ur ff
coz I so wanted a bit of this clg lyf in swaragini
but they moved to typical family drama
so ur ff is a refershing change
n these new entries seem interesting
loved jealous lucky
update asap

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Roopal Gupta

@..Roopal..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Cocktail24

Happy you Like it ...😊
Pooh ... Not actually from K3G ... But Winne The Pooh... Just needed an High Figh Cute name😆
oh ok😛

And Yes Pooh got angry on Laksh because firstly he was busy watching at Swara's Expression and then when... laksh had seen Swara with Swaraj he was very angry and Pooh was Upset of him not noticing her and then laksh was irritated that when Pooh asked him something... His mind was thinking about Swara and Swaraj and in anger he said Go to Hell without realising what he said...😆
oh yeah thanks for clarification...i thought so too but got bit confused as its my first FF on IF 😳

Thanku will Change the 4th into 3rd part...

and yes i am gonna use Suds.. Idea from the Next Part
👏

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nahid266090

@nahid266090

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

laksh is jealous nice
swara & swaraj

Edited by nahid266090 - 10 years ago

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alleyway

@alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lovearohi
sry m late
well I luv ur ff
coz I so wanted a bit of this clg lyf in swaragini
but they moved to typical family drama
so ur ff is a refershing change
n these new entries seem interesting
loved jealous lucky
update asap

Happy to know u Like it 😊

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alleyway

@alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Sorry Guys ...

made u wait for long...

Health Issue... I'm Back with a new chapter !

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alleyway

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Part - 4 ( Golmal hai bhai sab golmal hai ! )

Laksh Goes behind Pooh to console her... and...

Laksh : Pooh... Listen I had no intension to Ignore you actually it was an Plan ! an secret Plan

Pooh : Plan ? Secret Plan ? ( shouts )

Laksh : shuuu... Dont Scream...

Pooh : Okay Now tell me what's the Plan !

Laksh gets An Idea and says...

Laksh : Swara !

Pooh : Swara ?

Laksh : Yes Swara ! you know na Mrs.Bregenza is Swara's Aunt and she doesnt likes me

Pooh : So ?

Laksh : So Mrs.Bregenza hates me roaming with Girls and she was Hiding and seeing what we were doing thats why I didnt answer to you and said u Go to hell so sorry pooh

Pooh : O mrs.Brege ! Sorry Laksh... i ... U...

Laksh : Its Fine !...

and they Both Hug each other when suddenly Swara Appears from back and says...

Swara : ahahah... (coughs)

Laksh : O Fikhi Mirch , U didnt go with Swaraj and Ragini ?

Swara : Next time u call me Fikhi Mirch ... See !...

Laksh : ok ok ! Now Fast say what i Dont have time u Know !

Swara : (whispers to herself ) yes when u get time from girls !

Come to the side please...

Laksh : One second pooh... ( Goes to an Side )

Say Fast !...

Swara : So actually I need your Help !

Laksh : Ya Say what help ?... Anyways what will I get if i help?

Swara : Abbb... Anything say what u want ?

Laksh :You

Swara : What ?

Laksh : You... will give me na ? Later Promise

Swara : Promise

Laksh : What help do u want ?

Swara : I want U to Marry me !

Laksh : Mmmaaarrryyy... ?

Swara : what happened Did i say something Wrong ?

Laksh : Marrige Laksh weds Swara ?

Swara : Oh Excuse me ! Even if your the Last Boy on this

earth I would never marry you !

Laksh : Then u said...

Swara : Chintu weds Rani !

Laksh : What !?

Swara : Ya My friends Rani Loves Chintu ! and chintu also loves rani But Chintu's parents are making him marry some rich girl "Nisha" For Money ! So we should Kidnnaap Chintu from his house and then Kidnapp Nisha from her house Rani will be ready to Run and Chintu and Rani will Run ! Nisha will be Kidnapped Still and Yes we will take their positions U become Chintu i'll become Nisha and yes the Pandit will be Ovie Okay ? Nice Plan ?

Laksh : Bakwas Plan ! U want me to Become an Kidnapper ?

Swara : Laksh Please ! U'll be saving to lovers lives

Laksh : We''ll see and who's this Laksh ? I'm Lucky !

When Ragini appears ...

Ragini : Who's Life you want to save swara ?

Laksh : Ragini That...

Swara kicks on Lakshs leg at back

Laksh : Ahhhooouuu

Ragini : What happened Laksh Ji ?

Swara : Amm So many ants here ant bit you right lucky ?

Laksh : Ya Ant ! and Rags I'm Lucky not Laksh !

Ragini : (smiles to herself thinking Laksh called her Ragss)