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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mrityunjay-

Ths is Soo lovely yar... Plz update nxt part soon

Yes Just in a Minute...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sud-

Waiting for your update !!!!
😉

Yes in a minute ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejaswiniwenham

Well done! It's quite good!

Thanku😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice yaar luvd it thr 1st metng ws awsm nd clss room scene ws mindblowing fikimirchi is nt gud chnge hr name na lal mirchi rkho na
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part - 3 ( Lucky Ki GirlFriend )

after throwing Swara on the Floor...
Swara : Oh Mrs...
Laksh picks her up from the Floor... when...
P.Bregenza : What was this going on here ? Romance ... ?
Swara : No Mam... Actually... Tell Laksh...
Laksh : No Mam ... Reaherseal...
P.Bregenza : What ? was that on women Empowerment ! ?
Laksh : Hmmm ... Yes... A... Yes... That...
Turns towards swara and shakes his head Up and Down and Swara to shakes her head up and down and suddenly says...
Swara : Mam... Romeo Juliet Act ... !
P.Bregenza : What ? Romeo Juliet Act ? Now ?...
Mr.Rambo ?... Whats Going On...

Prof.Ramlal : Ab ... Bregeee... Dont Call me Rambo...
P.Bregenza : why Sir ? ( Asks in a Flirty Way and starts to shy and smiles at him )
Prof.Ramlal : Call me Ramu... ( says in a exotic Flirty way 😉)
P.Bregenza : Oh sorry... Ramu...
When Swara and Laksh were stuck between their Healthy Flirt and Bregee and ramu were Lost in each others Eyes Laksh Throws the Book and...
P.Bregenza : Abbb... What are you seeing ... Ammm...
Okay so... now... your confirmed ... You Both Laksh and Swara will be doing the Romeo and Juliet act

When Suddenly The Hottest and Richest Girl of the collage
(Pooh) wearing an Small Skirt and Top walks in with two girls behind her and all the Boys Gets up ... she throws a Rose down behind which all the Boys started taking and running
She comes near Laksh and hold his hand and says...
Pooh : Oh Princi... Swara with my Lucky No way !
I'll be the Juliet of my Romeo Lucky ! Right Sweetiepie?
Laksh : Yes Mam... Ab... She's Right My Sweetie ! Pooh !
When Laksh gave Pooh an Hug... In order make Swara Jelouse... when Ragini comes giving an face of ignority to Laksh ( Seeing towards P.Bregenza)
Ragini : Namestea Bregenza Mam...
P.Bregenza : Namestea Ragini ... Ragini theres something good for you...

Swara : Aunty... I mean Miss... I know what your going to say

P.Bregenza : What Swara ?... what am i going to say ?
Swara : What Else ? Other than Ragini is going to play her sitara in the Annual Function Right ?
P.Bregenza : Correct!...
Swara makes a Frown face as Ragini could play the Sitara but as Mrs.Bregenza had asked her an Promise that she would not play her Guitar because she always wanted her to act in an Play once... Laksh was seeing constantly at swara and pooh tried to ask him what was Going ...
But when Suddenly some voice shouted from BACK...
Swaruuu...
when all Turned Back ... and saw who it was Swara runs towards him and shouts...
Swara : Swaraj...
And they have an Tight Hug... when Ragini , Laksh , Pooh and Others move towards to see who it was...
When suddenly Mrs.Bregenza Runs too see that it was her Friends son Swaraj (Swara's Best Friend from the time she was 3 ) But one day when he was 4 and swara was 3 Swaraj's parents had been out leaving swaraj at Swara's home when his parents had an accident killing Both and from that time he lives with Swara he had gone to America to Study but then he decided to come back as Dida had called him to live with her as she was alone ... He could not say a no to dida because she and her family had been so kind to Live with him as their own and anyways he had completed his studies and had too found an Job near their house. in an Buissness company
But he never foget to call swara atleast once in an week
P.Bregenza : So Laksh , Pooh , Ragini and ( Sir😆 )... This is my Friends son ... Swaraj you know Swara and Him were Best Friends From 4

Laksh was in his own world thinking about him and how close was he too swara and alll😆
Ragini : Hello Swaraj ji ...
Swaraj : Hello Ragini ... I still remember you when you were small but you never use to come out of your home i know your Dadi ... She never Liked me because i am from the Bengali communtiy ...
Pooh : Hellooo I am Pooh...
and they were going to shake hands when Laksh took away Poohs hand
Swaraj : Nice to meet you and you Mr...
Swara : Laksh cum Lucky... ( makes an angry face)
Swaraj : Oh Mr . Laksh ... sorry... Mr.Lucky ... Swara has told me about you ... So much...
Laksh : (whispers to himself ) Oh God now Fikhi Mirch and me ... He also came ... Best Friend... Huh...
Swara : Anyways Swaraj did you meet Dida and Ma ?
Swaraj : No First to Suprize them...
When Ragini says ...
Ragini : Swara the collage is over ... we can go home now...
When Mr.Ramlal walks out with Princi.Bregenza and Swara with Swaraj hand in Hand and Laksh would Burn out to fire in anger with Ragini in front of them
Pooh : No ones in the Class... So...
Laksh : So Go to Hell...
Pooh : I hate you Laksh...
Laksh : Sorry ... Listen
laksh walks behind pooh in order to make her calm still thinking of how swara hugged Swaraj ? and how close was he to her...



Edited by Cocktail24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: nahid266090

nice yaar luvd it thr 1st metng ws awsm nd clss room scene ws mindblowing fikimirchi is nt gud chnge hr name na lal mirchi rkho na

Happy to know you Luved the meeting 😃 dont worry about Fikhi mirchi as the Parts go on it would change into some cute name " Shona" soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Nice.. Waiting for nxt part..btw ur name 😊?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mrityunjay-

Nice.. Waiting for nxt part..btw ur name 😊?

Jass...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Wow, this is so nice !!

Loved the new entries !!
Laksh getting jealous ? 😆

Wonderful !! The story is setting up good...

One suggestion, show something like Precap at the end.. Like how they show in serials, "Kal" 😆
It will create excitement for the next episode 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
nice update
so good with so new enteries
liked the laksh's jealousy track
well but a ques is poo inspired from k3g?😉
btw got bit confused why pooh got angry on laksh?
and its third update right? u mistakenly put 4th update as post title
'and yeah i am with sud's idea on precap 👍🏼

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