Yuvreen TS: Kaisi Paheli Zindagani......(P3@pg6)

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Spruha Narang

@indradhanushs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: krupaa

Spru yuvi bacha nahi hai jo use pata nahi chalega...😉
waise i guess mene yuvreen and daal ko kaafi famous kar diya hai😆

haan baccha nahi hai magar gadha toh hai jarur , itna innocent hai ki koi bhi uska faida utha leta hai , my poor yuvi ,

aur haan , daal me kala hai yah dal kali hai . aage pata chal hi jayega

Edited by indradhanushs - 11 years ago

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sujairohit
Liked the story,very different from the show.
Waiting to read the next part.

Thanks a lot jiji...

Glad you liked it

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Shivinian
OMG AMAZING! I'm sure its gna be interestng. U have sumthng in store fr us.
PS: Ab to YuvReen Ki Daal Brand hona chahiye. 😆

Thanks a lot manu...

Glad you liked it

yeh YUVREEN KI DAAL 😉

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: JustMySelf
😲

waiting 4 didu n jdis reactions nw 😉

Thanks a lot jimu...

Glad you liked it

yeh both ani and jas will get the biggest shock of their life.😆

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: minu_G
Oh god😲😲
Yuvi and Naro!!..i hope there is some twist
Yuvreen anniversary got spoilt poor Suvi😭
great part di..u r amazing writer👍🏼
cont soon..

Thanks a lot minu...

Glad you liked it

yeh yuvreen anniversary got spoilt 😭

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
OMG😲😲😲 What is this? Yuvi and Naro no ways
I hope there is some twist.. Yuvreen anniversary got spoilt
Naro and Manu are best... why you brought Yuvi between them.. Poor Suvi her anger is justified... dumb Yuvi😡
Great Part with lots of suspense
Cont soon

Thanks a lot anam...

Glad you liked it

i know manaro and yuvreen are best

the truth will be out soon

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
OMG😲😲😲 What is this? Yuvi and Naro no ways
I hope there is some twist.. Yuvreen anniversary got spoilt
Naro and Manu are best... why you brought Yuvi between them.. Poor Suvi her anger is justified... dumb Yuvi😡
Great Part with lots of suspense
Cont soon

Thanks a lot anam...

Glad you liked it

oye mera yuvi dumb nahi hai wo to cheetah hai 😆

to find out the twist you have to wait a while for next part to come.

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian
Well I am not very very surprised...because the time you said that you got an jhakkas idea and you keep warning us its too emotional from that time only I got it that definitely that's a very painful story!So I was prepared for it as you know na di ki I'm more attached with emotional stories.But definitely its a big shock for the readers!
Arre hamesha meri Suvi hi kyun!In my SS-Opposite Attracts she lost her parents...in SS-Ray of hope also she suffers...I guess we love same type of stories :P
Fantastic start.I am sure its going to be super se upar walla TS.Some or the other misunderstanding is there I'm sure.But anyway you wont make Yuvreen go away from each other...will you?
Do continue soon.I will be waiting.Thanks for the pm :)

Thanks a lot bacha...

Glad you liked it

i know you love emotional story so this one is a farewell gift for you untill you come back.

you have to wait to find out if its yuvreen or yuvro at the end 😕

and dear suvi is the lead so humesha bali ka bakra wahi to banegi 😉

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: indradhanushs

haan baccha nahi hai magar gadha toh hai jarur , itna innocent hai ki koi bhi uska faida utha leta hai , my poor yuvi ,

aur haan , daal me kala hai yah dal kali hai . aage pata chal hi jayega

Oye mera yuvi gadha nahi cheetah hai 😆

aur daal kitni kaali hai wo to abhi pata chal jaayega in next part