Yuvreen FF: Two is better than one ❤️ updated part 5 on page 8, 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Spruha..on second thought I think I'd go with Jdi's suggestions too..since it wasn't there in the list earlier..😛hope you dont mind..😕
Solly..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22

Spruha..on second thought I think I'd go with Jdi's suggestions too..since it wasn't there in the list earlier..😛hope you dont mind..😕

Solly..😳

alle i love everything , dw
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bhul gayi mere saath no thank you.

uff ab sory bhi nai kah sakti , love you❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Start Spruha
Suvi convo with Mama Guggal was awesome
I fully agree the bhoke dialogue is best emotional blackmail
Looking forward to Yuvreen first meeting
Cont Soon

Together Forever
Friends by Chance Lovers by Destiny

The name really depends on the concept of the story so whatever suits it best
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one Spruha!
Loved Suvi's intro...
Next part sounds interesting!
Do continue soon...
I would go for together forever...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start spruha 👏 do continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waaa beta ji tum toh chaa gyi 👏 masst wala update 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very good.loved the conversation between Suvreen and her mother.
Do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome
Eager to see what happens next
Khadooosss yuvi nice and very new
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2:
when I reached to restaurent, i was very nervous , i was really afraid of akdu mr.yuvraj singh , pata nai kaisa hoga , badasa pet , grey hairs , mogambo ,
Gannuji please bachalo apne bacchi ko ,
"concentrate suvi cocentrate , ouuch!"
ab yeh ambuja cement ki wall kahanse takarayi ,
i closed my eyes to decrease the impact of falling on ground , but sudden pair of hands reached towards my belly , they were holding me , thank u gannuji bach gayi ,
slowly i opened my eyes , the 1st thing i saw was cute face of boy , his eyes are so beautifull ,
SHUT UP SUVI !!!
"hey , dikhayi nahi deta kya?"
"haan?"
"andhi ho kya?"
how rude! i stood and got released from his hold ,
"oyye , chalti firti deewar , ek toh chalti hui masum ladaki ko dhakka dete ho aur aise baat karte ho!" i said with equal force ,
"ohh hallo mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tujhe dhakka deneka aur agese dhyaan rakhiyo , har bar me nahi aunga bachane" he said it like m expert in falling ,


sowry m using cellphone please scroll down , & continue

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