Will You be Mine Forever (Yuvreen OS)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello every one this is my first attempt to write anything, I dont know how i managed it but just a random thought came and i penned it down.

Hope you all like it, all the criticisms are welcome, but plz do comment.

WILL YOU BE MINE FOREVER

It was a rainy night; I was standing near the bus stop and waiting for the bus to come. From last one hour there was no bus and I was continuously looking at my watch as I had to reach somewhere. There was someone waiting for me and even I was eager to reach to him as soon as possible. I wanted to be with him it was his birthday today and I wanted it to be special for both of us. I knew he was planning to propose me on this special day and I don't want to be late, I don't want him to wait for me. But these stupid rains and no bus wasn't allowing me to be with the love of my life.

Waiting for the bus I just got lost into my thoughts, it were the same rains when I started falling for him .That Barsaat ki ek raat, when we got stuck in college in rains. Our first hand touch, our first hug, our first rain dance. Meri Delhi ki pehli baarish after which I started loving rains.But today I hate these rains.I was still waiting for the bus when suddenly heavy rains started; I was getting scared with those thundering sound. Now I just wanna reach to him ASAP, I started looking for an auto or taxi. It was getting darker and darker and time was running as fast as my Cheetah.

Cheetah' , Suvreen tub hi na is bearish ki wait karte karte paagal ho gai hai time bhi kabhi cheetah ki tarah bhagta hai, Ab issse pehle aur late ho jaye taxi dhund . (suvreen stared praying to his Gannuji) . Gannuji please help kar do' , and within a second a taxi arrived (suvreen to herself) Arey wah Ganuji apki service to speed post se bhi fast ho gai. Before I could realize that I was in middle of the road, a voice came into my ear Topper'

I looked near the taxi and found my cheetah there - Yuvraj

I was standing like a statue unable to believe on my eyes, yuvraj came near me and spoke aise kya dekh rahi hai topper main hi hoon tera cheetah'

Suvi: tum yaha, tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

Yuvi: bhul gai mene tujse kaha than a tu jab bhi problem me hogi muje apne saath paayegi.

Suvi: but tumhe kaise pata chala ki mein...(before she could speak yuvraj kept his finger on her lips)

Yuvi: sshhh, muje nahi to aur kise pata chalega?

Suvi: yuvraj I am sorry me aaj bhi time pe nahi pahuch pai

Yuvi: topper tu na bahut bolti hai and jo bolna chaiye wo nahi bolti

Suvi: oh ha sorry Happy Birthday. ( wishing him she gave a peck on his cheek)

Yuvi: ab isse pehle ki din khatam ho jaaaye muje bji tuje kuch kehna hai, par samaj nahi aaraha kaise kahu. Actually planning to bahut kit hi ye kahunga wo kahunga aise bolunga waise bolunga ab jab kehne ki baari aai to words hi nahi mil rahe . sorry wo me nervous ho raha hu wo muje kehna tha ki ki...

( suvi was just looking at his innocent cute smile and yuvi was getting more confused looking at suvi's expressions)

Yuvi to himself yuvi tu cheetah hai bol de itna mat soch yaad rakh yuvi cheetah hai'

Yuvi: topper muje bolna tha ki, actually puchna tha ki...

(suvi interrupted him and kept her finger on his lips and said)

Suvi: sshhh yuvraj kyat um mujse shaadi karoge?

(yuvraj was shocked hearing this)

Yuvi : KYA ?????? topper ye line to muje kehni thi

Suvi: to kya ho gaya aaj tumhara birthday hai to gift to me dungi na tumhe.

Yuvi: ha lekin yaha bhi tuje top karna jaruri hai atleast iss baar to muje pehle bolne deti. Ab mein kya bolu?

Suvi : jawab do mere sawal ka, aur kya?

Yuvi: soch ke bataao

(suvi hitting him on his shoulder)

Suvi: you don't have any other choice Mr Yuvraj singh.

Yuvi: I don't want any other choice,

With this yuvraj bent down on his knees, held suvreens hand and inserted a beautiful diamond ring in her finger and said

" TOPPER WILL YOU BE MINE FOREVER"

Finally over, my first ever writing, now waiting for the responses be it good or bad plz do response and if any suggestions plz do let me know so that i can improve on my writing😃

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JustMySelf thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesum 👏👏👏..plz write more..with sg ending keep d hopes of yuvreeians like us alive with ffs..wel dun krupaa..ty n hugs 🤗
iiManAsiii thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super duper hit!! luvd it my dear!! amazing tha!!!!
ShivuNozzie thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww it was so sweet. Loved it krupa, very nice job :D
You write very well, plz do write more when possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
it was very good.Do write more often.Loved reading it.
Supernatural_10 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
It was such cute OS loved it
love the way suvi proposed yuvi then he told he will propose her then he proposed so romantic and cute... now iim jealous i want someone to propose me like Yuvi too

do write more
krupaa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you manasi, JMS, simran, anam and sujairohit.😊
Ya i ll try and write more.
Thanks everyone once again for appreciating my efforts😊.
..chotu.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
grt os krudi...luvd it...so miss yuvreen
ela_sandhirian thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww so sweet n romantic😳
luvd it😛
wish d cvs did sumthing like dis😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Such a beautiful OS dii...it's awesome..
I'm in Yuvreen dreamland after reading this...
Hats off to you...👏

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