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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sujairohit

this part was too good.You are very good writer and do update the next part soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tani18

its such an quite chapter..supberb gal..luved it


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Posted: 13 years ago
Plzzz update the next part soon.I am egerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 8

We were still hugging each other tightly each of us expressing our love in that hug. If someone from far will see us they will think zat it's only one person who is standing. I had that thought in my mind zat if I never confessed zat I love him I would have lose him today. I was ashame zat I thought so low of him wen he began to explain to me his feelings I was feeling guilty. Wen he admitted zat he loved me I was surprised but I saw the love for me shining in his eyes.

I couldn't help to confess him zat I love him 2. If I left him hurt and dejected I would not have forgive myself. After which seemed an eternity we broke our hug. He tilted my chin up to make me look in his eyes, all that I saw was the love and adoration for me. I now understood zat my life was set I had nothing to fear as I had a cheetah by my side who would do anyfing for me. I smiled lovingly at him and he smiled back, slowly his smile faded he looked at his watch then at me.

"Suvreen, it's quite late! ur mother won't create a scene right?"

he was genuinely concerned I looked at him and said

"even if she do create one I won't mind at all! As am really really happy!".

he stared at me and then leaned closer to my ear I could feel his breath on my cheek it was sending tingly sensations to my spine. He whispered

"Acha! I can see how much happy u r! n am happy zat zis happiness is bekuz of me!"

he chuckled and kissed my earlobe and stood straight again.

I was dazed for a moment I could still feel his lips on my earlobe, I had my eyes lowered and my cheeks were doing their job again having that red shade creeping up. He took my hand and brought me near his Laila.

"let's go! I'll drop u home! Before u receive phone calls frm ur momma!"

I took my seat on the passenger seat and he took his, he started his car. While he was driving I could fell his gaze on me wenever we were at a traffic light. I also could not help, I glanced at him. Zer were certain moments wen we had our eye lock. We arrived at my place I was not willing to go, I wanted too spend more time wiz him, as if he sensed wat I said he answered

"suvreen I am also not willing to let u go but it won't b ok na! don't wrry let's make a deal ok!"

I looked at him a bit confused then he chuckled

"don't look so confuse! The deal is that, I'll pick up up every morning at 07:45 and u must be punctual and in the evening I'll drop u home! Wat say?"

I looked at him and thought for some minutes all zis while his gaze was on me I finally answered

"ok! But listen u should meet m--"

"ya I know meet u 2 lanes before ur house I know! Dn't wrry!"

I got down smiled at him and was proceeding to go wen he called me I turned back. He got down of his jeep and held my hand, and pulled me close to him he again leaned near my ear and then he whispered

"won't u let me say goodbye to u huh! Ur so eager to leave huh"

and he again kissed my earlobe. I was still lost wen he did that I again heard him chuckle, he again whispered

"suvreen u know u must get use to it! As am not gonna stop just here ok!".

He leaned closer and gave me a peck on my cheek.

"I think u must go before I change my mind"

and with zat he hugged me tightly looked at me a last time, got into his jeep and went away. I was still glued at the same place until I heard a faint ringing tone without looking at the caller I answered

"suvreen where are you? Why aren't u still home!".

I let out a sigh and answered

"ya momma am coming!"

I cut the call and started to walk to go home.

AT NIGHT

I didn't have the willingness to eat as I was still lost in the thoughts of yuvraj "my yuvraj!" I smiled at my thoughts untill momma woke me from my thoughts

"oye suvreen! Kya hua tujhe? Wer r u lost!?

Finishing wiz me, she turned to dad and began again with her favourite song

"I told u since she went to college she has changed! I don't know wat she does in this college! Come home late! Don't talk to her parents! Don't eat! Ask her na wat is happening to her!"

Dad was looking at momma as if she came from another planet! He bowed his head down and ate quietly letting momma continue to rant about me! I thought I had enuf! I bid gudni9 to them and went in my room.

Once I entered my room I didn't have z mind to do my revision or anyfing well I decided to prepare for my assignment. not until my phone vibrated I looked at my clock I instantly knew who it was.

sorry for updating late😳...well do give me ur feedback. like and comment plz 😊

Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for your pm
God this part is sooo good
loved it
your writng is fabulous
keep it up
best wishes for your next updates form your this friend or u can say your fan...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Thank you so much for your pm

God this part is sooo good
loved it
your writng is fabulous
keep it up
best wishes for your next updates form your this friend or u can say your fan...


Aww Fnx 4 zis lovely comment...n Fnx 4 z best wishes dearie 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz do update the next part soon and do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very good and do continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
tanx 4 d pm...
dis part s sooo gud...
i really enjoy readin ur work...
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yaar
ur writin is just awsum
u r a gr8 writer love all ur ss
Do continue soon plz
Eagerly waitin 4 d same

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