YuvReen FF : Jab we Met Update pg9 dedicate 2 ritu - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc work plzz pm wen u rite next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Hello Everyone... Me and isnat are back with Part 3

this work is dedicated to the b'day girl Ritu_Cool_2197

hope u'll like it


Part 3

There was awkward silence in the cabin as neither of them uttered a single word because of their egos. Only the lurching sound and whistle of the train was being heard. Suvreen looked at
Yuvraj from the corner of her eyes and found him staring at her. She
frowned and asked straight-forwardly, "aa..aisee kya ghur rahe ho??"
"ghur raha hoon tujhe?...oh please mera paas usse acche kaam hain" replied Yuvraj trying to act as if he didn't care about her. Suvreen rolled her eyes and looked back outisde the window. Something struck Yuvraj. Mera iPod? He thougth and rummaged his pockets for it but in vain. Suvi looked at him shocked when he shouted, "dekha! tere wajese mera iPod bhi udhar hi choot gaya!!!"
"meri wajaae se?!?!" Suvreen shouted.
"toh kya mein tujhe yahan laya kya??"
Suvi got up from her seat and stood right in front of him saying, "suno..hum yaha jerking ki wajah se pahuche hain.."
"par yeh sab toh tujhe girne se bachane ke chakkar mein huwa hai na..." replied Yuvi while standing up and facing Suvi.
"tumhare problem kya hain...baat baat mein ladte rahte ho"
"main ladta hoon ya tu ladti hain...mujhe toh tu angry young woman lagti haan..kuch bhi kahoon toh bhadak jaati hai"
"kyunki tumhare mu se kuch acha nikalta hi nahi hai.."
Yuvraj was extremely crossed by now and he covered his ears saying, "bass bass bass kar meri maa.."
"kyun?? main kyun??" Suvi took a step towards him.
"maine kahan na chup ho jaa.." Yuvraj warned her again. But Suvi was nowhere to listen. He covered her mouth by his hand and said, "chup bilkul chup..aur ek bhi shabd nikalana muh se..toh..toh.." Yuvraj looked around and continued, "toh uss khidki se bahar phek dunga tujhe!" Suvi's eyes widened. Was this guy really making her chup? And like this? Covering her mouth? She looked at his eyes once narrowing her own and then gave him a slight punch in the stomach.
"Ouchhh!!" Yuvraj removed his hands immediately holding his stomach and moving a little back. He wasn't that hurt but of course, his ego was hurt. He looked up at Suvi and found her smirking. He straightened himself and walked up to her asking, "tu.. tu mental hospital se bhaag k aayi hai kya??"
"kya?!?!!" Suvi shouted.
"mara kyun??" asked Yuvraj as he preferred to be straight-forward for the time being.
Suvi stepped forward replying, "tum mujhe aise chup karane wale kon hote ho haan??"

"kon hote ho?? ... Tu janti nahi kon ho main bataoga toh daar jaygi toh ... Waise bhi toh bahut kaamzor hain tu." replied Yuvraj in a proud way while scanning her from top to bottom
" kaamzor... Oh please .. Tum president ke beta ho to bhi .. Main tumse nahi daarti . Mujhe karate ata hai. Black belt ho main. Kathgodham main mujhe karate championship bronze medal mila tha.. " replied Suvreen
"aacha main toh daar gaya" said Yuvi as a bit of sarcasm. "koi mujhe bachao iss black belt cheethi se." Yuvraj cried like a small kid looking around the empty cabin as if there is a bunch of audience.
"tum ne mujhe cheethi bolaya" shouted Suvreen taking some steps towards him.
"toh kya cheetah bolao.." shot back Yuvraj.
"cheetah to tum ho...Jab dekho tab dharthe rahi ho." replied an irritated Suvreen.
Yuvraj gave a big and cute smile saying, "Tu ne to mujhe bade hi aachi tarah se notice kiya.. Par mujhe koi farak nahi padta kyunki mujhe aab adaat se hogai he.. teri tarah hazaro ladkiya meri looks dek kar maar jaati hai.."

"maine koi compliment nahi diya...so mujhe un ladkiyo k saath compare math karo please.." Suvreen had a stern face.

"par ladkiya toh ladkiya hi hoti hai na..wo tu ho ya koi aur.."

Suvi glared at him as she couldn't take this anymore. She was going to Kathgodam and here, she was standing and arguing with this stranger. She rolled her eyes at herself and said, "main tumhare saath apna wakt kyun barbaad karrehi hoon?" saying this she just walked away and sat back in her seat looking outside and wondering about her luck.

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* Click* They heard a sound at the knob of the door that slightly lightened their face up. An attendant pushed open the door . Suvi jumped in excitement and silently prayed her Gannuji. The attendant informed them that train is reaching its destination in 5 minutes. Yuvraj and Suvreen looked at one another and thought how they have spent half of their journey with a stranger and then looked away in loath. Both of them were heading out of the cabin to their own cabins but stopped by the door. After exchanging heated looks and clenching teeth in disgust both of them blurted out, "aage se mere raaste mein maat aana!!" They were stupefied by their unison but bolted out of the cabin ignoring it and murmuring stuffs under their breath.



So how was it?? sorry for short and late update

We are waiting for your comments

all scar-ism welcomed


Edited by pinkgal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
plz update the nxt part soon...and ofcrse it was a nice update bt vru shrt😭 want to read more!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...awesome hat's off to u guy's loved it!!! pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Nyccc part Asii welldone plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Whattt?????
This whole update DEDICATED to...ME???! 😲
Really guys this is the sweetest thing done for me...love u two very much!!!!!
Awesome part...loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Awsum update 😊
But vry short 😒
Waitin 4 ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He called her cheti. Hmm... Awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ritu_Cool_2197

Whattt?????
This whole update DEDICATED to...ME???! 😲
Really guys this is the sweetest thing done for me...love u two very much!!!!!
Awesome part...loved it!!!



love u too ritu... very happy u liked... we were done with this yesterday itself... but wanted to post on special day today 😉😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Heated exchanges and leads locking horns. Nice. Very nice. :))

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