YuvReen FF : Jab we Met Update pg9 dedicate 2 ritu - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ASMI98

very well done assi and zinat

the concept is really interesting...
luved their first meet
amazing guys
do continue...and plsss pm me


thank u
asmi check out the note on pg 4... i hav written sumthing out there
neva mind we will never forget to pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Thanku for adding me...:):)

Update d next part soon:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pinkgal and isnat...FAB job...do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

YuvReen FF-Jab We Met


Part 2

The attendant was looking at YuvReen and he got a hint of what was happening. The song was still playing. He felt annoyed. "Ahem Ahem!!" He cleared his throat loudly to bring back the two from their dreamland. He felt dumb when it didn't work, so he shook his head and walked away from there.
Yuvraj examined Suvi's appearance and appreciated it to great extent. He felt like her face's brightness could win over the brightness spread by the sun rays that just fell on them through the small window. Suvreen was confused now. Hadn't it been more than 3-4 minutes that they have been in this position?
Brushing away those thoughts she straightened her position and backed away pushing Yuvraj slightly and was feeling shy. Yuvraj realized how lost and stupid he was and looked here and there but eventually, his eyes went back to the beautiful girl in front of him. She looked all around the cabin in embarrassment. All of a sudden her expression changed as she felt something. She shouted on top of her lungs when a mirror in cabin reflected her all drenched in juice " What is this?!?!" Yuvraj was stupefied by her unexpected behavior. He eyed her outfit out. Oh crap! Did he just spill the juice on her? He looked at her pleadingly while she was fuming with anger. He was about to say something when the train jolted once again, throwing both of them off balance. Then, they found themselves land on another cabin nearby which was probably cabin 6B. Surprisingly, it was empty. Yuvraj held on to the wall for support as he predicted that the train might jerk again. On the other hand, Suvi sprinted towards him with her infuriated expression making Yuvraj move back in fear as if she was a tigress attacking him. "yeh kya haan?? huh?!?!" yelled Suvreen pointed down at her dress.
"Orange juice hain. " replied Yuvraj calmly.
Suvreen boiled in anger and shouted "Mujhe pata hain ki yeh orange juice hain...par.."
Yuvraj interrupted "Tujhe kaise pata ki yeh orange juice hain"
"Pata hain kyunki yeh ... Urgh chuck that...Why did u spill the orange juice on me??" Suvreen stepped forward. Yuvraj moved back and found the wall behind him and realized that he was acting like a chicken. He regained his fighting spirit inwardly and moved forward bewildering Suvreen. She couldn't believe that this stranger has started behaving like this. Yuvraj just kept forwarding with a stern smile until Suvi hit the wall. She gulped looking back at the cold wall as if it will move back. Yuvraj rested his left hand beside her head and leaned close to her. She moved her head to one side with her eyes shut tightly not knowing what else to do.

Yuvraj smirked and whispered in her ear, "koi mujhe award nehi dene wala ki maine tujh par juice girayi hai.." He said softly and then shouted out loud, "galti se gir gayi!" Suvreen clenched her teeth and cursed him under her breath while turning to him and saw that he moved back and sat down.
Suvreen walked up to him n said, "I guess there are words such as SORRY"
Yuvraj got up, "mein tujhe Sorry kyu bolu?"

"Because you owe me an apology" replied Suvreen folding her arms and looking away.
"Oye hello mein tujhe girne se bachaya"
"toh??"
"toh...Thank you naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai shayad" said Yuvi.
"meri marzi..main tumhe thank you bolu ya na bolu.."
"koi nahi..meri bhi marzi..ki main sorry bolu ya na bolu." shot back Yuvi and they both felt like stabbing each other right then and there. But they controlled their bad temper and stood there facing opposite sides with folded arms and frowns.
*Click* They heard a sound somewhere by the cabin and door and they looked at each other wondering what was that. Yuvi's eyes reached the cabin door and he saw it closed. He went by the door and when his hand reached the handle his eyes widened.

"Yeh lock kaise ho gaya?!" He asked loudly Suvreen making her heart twitch.

She came near him and tried opening the door. A terror-stricken Suvreen yelled out, "Yeh lock kaise ho gaya?"

Yuvraj rolled his eyes and banged the door. "Mujhe copy karne ki kya zarurat hai??"

"ughh instant reaction tha...par yeh lock kaise hua?!?!" Suvi's eyes became watery in fear.

"Mujhe kaise pata?? Maine thodi na lock kiya hai.."

"toh kisne kiya??" She asked calmly like an immaculate baby.

"tu ne ki hogi!!" replied Yuvraj angrily.

Suvreen's sensitive temper reached another level up. "main kyun lock karungi?!?!" Her voice shrieked in vexation.

"kya pata..shayad tujhe mere saath AKELE mein wakt bitana tha..itna handsome banda jo hoon." smirked Yuvraj emphasizing on the word "akele".

"ohhh...handsome ki definition bhi pata hai tumhe?? Agar tum handsome ho toh saree handsome logo ki insult hogi!" Suvi shot back and smiled in her glory but then her eyes fell on his converse. Hmm nice choice. She rolled her eyes at her own stupidity and looked back at his face that was holding an angry young man expression.

"yaha hum iss cabin mein lock hogaye hain...aur tujhe handsome ki definition ki pari hain??" said Yuvraj saking his head.

"toh kya karu?? Main toh darwaza tod bhi nahi sakti...tum tod do.."

"yeh train ki cabin ki darwaza hain...agar apke ghar ka hota...toh zaroor tod deta.."

"siddha siddha kyun nehi kehte ki tum yaha hi rehna chahteho.." Yuvraj approached her in frustration and Suvi could clearly see anger in his face and she quickly said, "aree tum yaha rehna chahte ho kyun ki yeh toh tumhara hi cabin hai na...u know...forever alone.." Suvi giggled looking around the empty cabin. Yuvraj banged the cabin door extremely hard clenching his teeth in rage. She jumped a little bit by seeing his reaction and quietly sat on the seat by the window. Yuvraj went and was going to sit when Suvi warned him, "mere paas behtne ki koshish bhi maat karna.."

Yuvraj rolled his eyes and sat opposite to her saying, "tu bhi mere paas aane ki koshish bhi mat karna..." They exchanged angry glares once again and turned to their windows and starting looking outside as if they can ignore each other.

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Done! Sorry, I know it's kinda short. But next wala will be longer :) so..How was it?? We both tried our best and please comment. Suggestions and criticisms are all allowed. I'll be sending pms...sorry if I miss anyone because I'll follow the pm list. :)


Edited by isnat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
it's awesome!!! loved it but one request could u pls make the writing's lenght more big soo that i don't need to stress

thank's for the pm and loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: naina1716

it's awesome!!! loved it but one request could u pls make the writing's lenght more big soo that i don't need to stress


thank's for the pm and loved it!!

I am really sorry for that :/ I edited it now :) and thanksss :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: isnat

I am really sorry for that :/ I edited it now :) and thanksss :)


it's k but pls pm me i loved it...hayye pata nahi aagey kya hoga?...continue fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Thanks for the pm...it was awesome..
Yuvreen's fight was cute and different at the same time
Carry on wid the good work 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Thanks for the PM...
loved it ❤️ ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
It was awesome👏👏👏 and their cute fight...superb.loved their closeness😊😊😊
But zinat next time font ka size at least 3 rakhna plz...
and thanks for pm...

👏👏

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