U R MY DESTINY{ chapter 2 updated page6}

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<font color="#ff0000">"suvreeen" naro was shouting at early morning 5
kya hein naro?????said a rather disturbed suvi
we all kno how she loves too sleep
"can u belive manu ne abhi abhi 100 roses hamare doorstep mein deliver kiya ryt now suvreen meine abhi abhi dekha"
said naro
"aur isme kya nayi baath hein???tum ne toh meri neend khrab kardi!!
replyd suvreen
"ohh amm sory kumbhkaran ki mamiji i bymistakly thot u wer my friend suvreen"said naro sadly making a puppyface
"awww naro sorry,mein toh neend mein plz mujhe maaf kardo mein toh bus yeah keh rahi thi ki i kno manu lyks u and giving all those gifts have now just become dailyroutines typ na"
said suvi
but naro replied and she was upset" no suvi after gogoi i dnt think i cant trust any1"
and she was about to cry rembering all those incidents"suvree agar tu nahi hoti na toh patha nahi aj mein kaha..."
"shhh naro hum sab abhi tumhare saath hein ok nw lets get ready collage bhi jaana hein, princi ka lecture hein" sayng this she went out to freshnup
(scene shift - classroom)</font>


<font color="#ff0000">hegde - hey guys sumthin is up princi ne apni class cancel karvadi ein and she has called us to the auditorium
annie- wot princi ne cancel karvaya???/
suvi - sumthngs big is on the way!11 othrwise princi apne class cancel karvaye ???impossible
naro- chalo na lets go thn wat r we waiting for??
(every1 hedes towards the audi , but suddenly sum1 pulled suvi back to a dark corner no1 noticed it as annie and naro wer discuusing abt anish and wos in thr own dream land)
, suvi was about to scream wen a strong masquline hand forced her to shut up)</font>


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<font color="#ff0000">"oye topper chilla math mein hun kidnap nahi kar raha bas kuch zaruri baath karni thi" said a rather over confident yuvi
suvi- YUVRAAJ!!!!
yuvi- acha naam hein kiska hein???
suvi- huh??kya pagalpan laga rakha hein aise koyi kisise baath kartha hein???
yuvi- kyu??phir kaha baath kare princi ke office mein?? toh chal jaathe hein
suvi- yuvraaj kya hein kya kaam hein jaldi bol
yuvi-woh naro aur manu ki baath karni thi
suvi-unka kya??
yuvi- i kno gogoi ke badh naro ka trust paa na is dificult isiliye toh ter pass aya hun!!
suvi - mein kya kar sakti hun isiliye?aur mein kuch karu bhi kyu?
yuvi- topper pyar ke liye sache pyar ke liye toh help kar hi sakthi hein na?
(suvi suddenly jerked away from him she was the sudhari typs all this luv suv was not her typs thth too in collage wer u cum to study thr4 she was aout to leave)
"PLZ TOPPER"
(suvi cudnt belive her ears yuvraaj the cheetah tld her pls ?? and tht pls seemed to have some magic suvreen felt as she have no other choice than helping him
on the other hand yuvraaj was surprised it was the 1st tym he has evr said pls to any1 tht to a gurl wot is this happening to me thot yuvi?)
"mujhe kya karna hoga" said suvi suddenly
yuvi- abhi kuch nahi ek mauka anne toh dey phir plan bathatha hun chal abhi chalte hein varna princi maar dalegi
( they both walked towards the auditorium , suvi sat btwn naro and annie)
naro- kaha gayi thi tu??
suvi- woh mein actually...
annie- awww aaannniiissshhh!!
naro- vapas chalu ho jayegi apne anish jap se!!!
(annie kiddingly hit naro<, suddenly sum1 hits suvreens foot rily hard)
suvi- kaunsa pagaal...
yuvi( kept a finger on his own lips and indicated her to be quite)
annie- suvi khade ho princi aa gayi
(all wished the principal and sat down)</font>


<font color="#000099"><font color="#ff0000">savitri sing- gud morning students today </font>i am here with a happy aswell as a sad news
starting wid the happy news the authorities has decided that next week all the students of dpsc will go for a trip to bangalore
(all the students start hooting and shouting)
"SILENCE"
orderd the princi in her authorative voice
and thn she continued"the bad news is that ryt aftr this trip thr wud be mock tests conducted in the collage and gud marks in this tests means improvement in ur grades THANK YOU
(suvreen and yuvraaj glaced at each othe and said together "collage trip" and exchanged luks and widely smiled at each othr)</font>


<font color="#0033cc">~~~~~~~~~~~end~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</font>


<font color="#990099">this was an introduction part
something is on yuvis and suvis mind too know wat it is u haf to wait 4 the nxt part!!</font>


<font color="#990099">this ss is all about a collage trip where yuvreen will be on a mission to bring naro and manu closer</font>


<font color="#990099">i just cudnt decide a title 4 this( hope u guys will help me)</font>


<font color="#990099">pls do hit lyk and cumment if u rily want me to continue!!!!!!</font>



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chapter 1 - page 2&3
promo - page 4
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its good..looks interesting..would love to read :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is really good do continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Awesome Awesome !!!!👏
Continue naaa plzzz 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ss continue soon...

my suggestion for the title...
"the college trip"
he he n i hope yuvreen lovestory bhi hoon... n that too zyaada...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnku ppl 4 ol ur valuable cumnt!
I'll post d nxt update 2day!
@annamika yeah evn i wos 1'st thnking abt tht! Bt nw i haf got a new 1 i'll update tht title soon plz say if u lyk it!
Sure sure yuvreen will happen woh bhi ZYADA:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayyy waiting for the update :DDD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey hi!!! its an awesome post!!! plz continue!!!!...and ya about the title i thought u could keep "TRIP MEIN YUVREEN KA TRICK" m not sure if it is good but just tat tis title struck my head!!!...dont mind if its not good..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pllzzz continue i love ur os and ss...u write so well👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnku!!evry 1!
@mani_shetty wow tht is an osum title,lemme see! Thnx!
@dia thnx dear its my pleasure u luved it
@isnat thnx buddy u immensly support me nd yeah i'll update by thz evening!
Thnku evry1 ur cumments nd lyks mean a lot to me!

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