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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice os Geetha...u hv nicely captured yudi's feeling..frustrations, depression...
I guess Duri said this to pandvas while on deathbed that yudi will now rule widows n barren kingdom full f old ppl n orphan children...anyws feel sorry for him sometimes...
Hope u r wrtnn next part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan

Hey nice os Geetha...u hv nicely captured yudi's feeling..frustrations, depression...

I guess Duri said this to pandvas while on deathbed that yudi will now rule widows n barren kingdom full f old ppl n orphan children...anyws feel sorry for him sometimes...
Hope u r wrtnn next part soon..



Thank you. Yes, it was a kingdom of widows and orphans. I shall update this evening!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

its wow...
plzzz update soon



Thank you. Shall update today evening!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..You are really talented writer👏, I never thought this situation can make me laugh but just into few first lines of this part made me🤣.. how he came back.. coz Yudi's dad happens to his brother too👏😆.. and Man how he handled sobbing yudi.. like okay enough get back to your senses and life.. coz you have one ..😛
Awesome Geetha ma🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wow..You are really talented writer👏, I never thought this situation can make me laugh but just into few first lines of this part made me🤣.. how he came back.. coz Yudi's dad happens to his brother too👏😆.. and Man how he handled sobbing yudi.. like okay enough get back to your senses and life.. coz you have one ..😛

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Awesome Geetha ma🤗
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Thank you Riti!! 🤗. I did mean it to be a bit humorous. Getting tired of too much emotional stuff these days. 😳. Sign of old age and senility may be?? 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Astonished geeta di... right from ths plot to the writing it was such an awe!!!
Came here after a long time nd u made it worthful!

Kayu was something i always desired for...
Thank u for this awsm bromance !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Dharam_dasi..

Astonished geeta di... right from ths plot to the writing it was such an awe!!!
Came here after a long time nd u made it worthful!

Kayu was something i always desired for...
Thank u for this awsm bromance !!



Thank you Mohini. 😃. I too missed u. Glad u cud find time to read this! 😳 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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all i can say is thank you for writing this
i always wanted to read more about kaYu since yudi grieved more for karna's death
it is amazing 👏 loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww!!! Such a great big bro! Pata nahin kahaan kahaan se aa jaate hain!!! Beautifully written.👏 For the second time I am feeling Yudhi's mourning was heartfelt. I have not felt that while reading KMG.😆We really missed Karna's brotherly affection in MBh. This can be added as an interpolation, with some "the heroic, bull of lion" and all.😉

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