SPN FF' Revenge and Promise (updated pg 3)

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Mally

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Posted: 12 years ago

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~Prolouge~

"Dean! Dean! get up! Dean!!!!!!" Sam kept on screaming but no point. The hellhounds had killed him.

Blood was spilled everywhere. He had no idea how it happened or when it happened. In no time Bobby came. He saw Sam hugging Dean's dead body and crying.

Tears rolled down from Bobby's weary eyes as they both kept on searching for him from the past 2-3 days.

"Dean we promise whoever or whatever did this to you will regret and I will bring u back." Sam promised to Dean's dead body. Anger was filled in his eyes and whatever he said he actually meant it.

The words spoken by Sam scared the old Bobby a bit as he did not understand what he meant by he will bring him back. "That is not possible." thought Bobby.

"I will bring you back!!" Sam screamed and he sounded like he had promised the universe about it.

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Hope u all will like it and plz comment on it.

target : 50 likes and 3 pages of comment 😊

love

~Mally

Part 1 - page 2

Part 2A - page 3

Edited by SPNnIPKKNDlover - 12 years ago

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Areeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It was nicely though I did't get it coz I don't watch them na :-D

But it was nice

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Raksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Areeba...
It was nicely though I did't get it coz I don't watch them na :-D

But it was nice

same 😳

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

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interesting story

loving it

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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MissAsian

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ---ArHian---

same 😳

Interesting but as the others said above - same 😳
but i loved ur sketches of this Dean character

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lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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short but sweet dear 👏

loved the pic and story syncing hon ⭐️

and the last part were "sam promised to the universe"..i could actually hear sam screaming/shouting like that👍🏼

sam hugging dean's dead body is very touching...its the crux of SPN..family bonding 😳

and the pic for boby's tired eyes was apt👏

looking forward to more of your work dear

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Bims

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Posted: 12 years ago

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i cried when i was watching this scene... 😭
hope u will continue soon

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Samana Bohara

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Oh this was the scene where I cried like hell!😭

U got hold of quite a good beginning.👍🏼🤗

Hope to see u continuing it soon!

Edited by samana17 - 12 years ago

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TitanFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey , its nice yaar, good to see a SPN FF... should be fun reading it ...

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Jarin04

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh god how can i get u 50 likes? But i liked it to the core.

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