Kriyam FF 'True Love' Chapter 16 - The Final Chapter UPDATED on pg 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww this is such a cute story. I can imagine a perfect lovestory, starting with hate, friendship and then loveee haha
Saiyyam is such a sweetheart. Can't wait for next chapter.

I'm gonna update mine tomorrow :)

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Woww man...im in love with this story..its so interesting..krishna is so adorable..waiting fr ua update...
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Aww that was a cute update Shy. Heartbreak was necessary for our Krishna to realise that her Prince Charming is the one she often dreams about. ☺️ Eagerly waiting for the next chapter to see how their friendship develops. Please update soon ❤️
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Thank you rockstar and mariya. I will update soon.
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Chapter 5

It was the next morning. I woke up thinking about yesterday's events. Was it a dream? Did it really happen? But then everything came rushing back. Every bit of pain I felt came rushing back. My eyes felt so heavy and my lips were so dry. I cried so many tears yesterday, I just wanted to hide away and cry.
Yuvani came into the room and sat on the bed. She held my hand 'Hey Krishna, are you ok? Look you need to eat something. Come on, you need to get up now and join us for breakfast. Everyone is waiting for you,'
I nodded. I got up, got dressed and walked to the breakfast table. The whole family was sat there having breakfast. While walking over, I felt everyone's eyes on me. I walked over to the only spare seat, it was next to Sayyam. I sat down, I couldn't face everyone.

'Are you ok?' I heard a deep voice ask.
I looked up, it was Sayyam. He wasn't looking at me. I felt so embarrassed crying in his arms last night. I didn't say anything.

'Khalo Krishna.' Suhani Aunty said to me with a big smile. She is always so happy, she has such a bubbly nature. Her smile makes me feel at ease.

'Aunty, I'm going home today.' I told her
I heard a spoon drop. It was Sayyam. He looked at me surprised.

'Why?' Suhani Aunty asked. 'Stay for a few more days, we like having you here.'

'I need to go home, Ma is at home on her own.'

'Ok, I understand. Sayyam will drop you.' She said lovingly

After breakfast, I said my goodbyes to everyone and hugged them all. It is always emotional when leaving Birla house, it's like leaving home.
I walked towards the car. Sayyam was stood there with his back leaning against the car. He was wearing a black shirt with blue jeans and black sunglasses on. He was looking away.
When I walked towards him, I looked at him and said thanks. He ignored me and walked over to the drivers side of the car. We both got into the car.

'Put your belt on.'he said sternly, again not looking at me.

'Oh! He speaks?!' I said in a surprised tone, smiling at him. I leaned my head slightly to try and get him to look at me. He gave me a stern look. I was trying to lighten the mood, but this guy is always so serious. I tried to put the belt on but was struggling.

'Don't you even know how to put a belt on?' He said angrily. He leant over, took the belt out of my hands and put the belt on.
He was so close to me, I felt uncomfortable. There it was, that feeling again whenever he is close to me. My heart started to beat faster. I didn't want to make eye contact. Every time I look into his eyes, something happens to me.

'Th-thanks.' I said nervously.
He didn't respond. He switched the engine on and drove the car.
For a while there was silence, it felt so uncomfortable. I switched on the radio to avoid the silence.

'Don't touch my car.' He switched off the radio.

'What is your problem?' I asked him. He didn't respond.
'Answer me!' He again didn't respond. His eyes were focused on the road.
'What is wrong with you? Why are you so arrogant?'
He brakes harshly and the car came to a stop.
He looked at me angrily.

'Why are you so annoying?! Just shut up and sit quietly.' He pointed his finger at me while shouting.

'Fine!' I shouted back
'Good' he said
'Good!' I folded my arms and looked away

I couldn't believe how much he had changed. He was so cold hearted.
I didnt speak to him anymore throughout the journey. I kept thinking how he had changed so much.

When we got home, I got out of the car and said thanks. Again he didn't respond.
I walked towards the house and turned around, he was still there. I was confused, why is he waiting? I rang the doorbell, my mother opened the door.

'Ma!' I was so happy to see her, I hugged her so tightly, I didn't want to let her go. I wanted to tell her everything.

'Who is that in the car Krishna?' She asked

'Oh, it's just Sayyam.' I said not bothered about him at all.

'Sayyam? Tell him to come in! Go on!' She pushed me slightly.
I walked towards the car and knocked on the window. I didn't look at him. He wound the window down.

'Ma wants you to come in.' I walked away. I didn't think we would listen to me anyway.

I heard footsteps behind me. I turned, it was Sayyam. He took his shades off and put them in his shirt pocket. I stopped and was surprised at what I saw.
He had a big smile on his face and rushed towards my mother.

'Soumya Aunty!' He said so happily and hugged her so tightly. My mother was so happy to see him too. She held his arm and took him inside.

He spent the whole morning at the house. They were laughing and talking so much.
I was speechless, this isn't Sayyam. Who is this guy? Who is he and what has he done with Sayyam?

'Krishna, can you prepare some kheer for Sayyam please?' Ma asked

'Why? I'm sure he's not hungry. He just had breakfast.' I didn't want to help him.

'Krishna!' She said sternly, looking at me with big eyes.

'It's Sayyams favourite.'

After preparing the kheer, I gave the bowl to him. He ignored me the whole time, I didn't even get a thank you.

'Aunty, thank you so much!' He ate the kheer really quickly.

'I better go back now Aunty. Suhani Aunty will be worrying about me.' He said politely

'It's ok beta.' She put her hand on his head gently.
'Come tomorrow, I have a job for you.'
He nodded and smiled at her and left.

'Ma, why did you tell him to come back?' I was annoyed.

'Chup kar, Sayyam is a lovely boy. He is good at heart.'

'He doesn't seem good to me. I don't like him.' I said to her.

'Give him a chance Krishna. Once you get to know him, you will see what the real Sayyam is like. He has had a rough childhood.' She said gently

I was curious. I sat down next to her. 'Why what happened?'

'You know his dad is in prison. You remember all the bad things he did with the Birla family?' She said looking sad, remembering the past.

I remembered how Sayyams dad tortured their family, especially Suhani Aunty and Yuvraj Uncle. He made their life hell.

'It was Sayyam who reported Sambhav to the police.' She looked at me. 'His mother didn't believe what had happened and she hated Sayyam for doing that. She didn't treat him well. After all this happened, she decided to move away to London. Sayyam moved with her, hoping their relationship would improve but she wasn't interested. She doesn't love him.' Tears started flowing from her eyes.

I was shocked. I didn't know all this had happened with Sayyam.

'Why is he so serious and arrogant all the time?' I asked

'Krishna, sometimes people behave a certain way to hide what's really going on and how they are really feeling.'

That's when I realised that under that cold exterior, there is a person with real feelings. A person who is hurting, needs support and needs a friend...

Precap- Soumya asks Sayyam to stay over at their house for a few days to help them both.


Hi everyone, Shaz here. I know it's been a while since my last update. I hope you like this chapter. There isn't much romance yet but there will be soon. Please keep reading. I feel I needed to show Krishna realising why Sayyam is the way he is and needed to know about his past in order for her to understand him.

Please let me know what you think

Shaz

Edited by Shiney19 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was superb..I think now Krishna will try breaking d ice between her n Saiyyam..Next update soon plzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really good chapter Shaz! I love how you're developing their relationship. Of course the romance will come later on, but it's nice to see an understanding building between them first. It was cute how Sayyam was with Soumya too. Like the precap, can't wait for the update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Faeeqa and Anjali. I kind of lost interest for a while but once I started writing again, I started to enjoy it again. I've already started to write the next chapter! It will probably be up tomorrow.
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Originally posted by: Shiney19

Thank you Faeeqa and Anjali. I kind of lost interest for a while but once I started writing again, I started to enjoy it again. I've already started to write the next chapter! It will probably be up tomorrow.

Very quick!! Yayyy
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Chapter 6

I lay in bed thinking about her. She looked so beautiful when I saw her. Her smile, her anger, everything about her is so beautiful. I felt so bad not talking or even looking at her, but it's the only way I know to control my feelings.

'Hey Sayyam, you're not in bed yet? I wanted to talk to you, I'm worried about Krishna.' Yuvani came into my room and sat next to me.

'I know what happened with Yuvan, he told me. I know you're worried about her too.' She said

I sat up and looked at her confused.

'I saw you comforting her in the garden when she was crying, it's good that you were there for her.'

'I just did what Yuvan wanted.' I looked away

'So, you just did that for Yuvan and not because you care for her?' She asked

I was confused, I felt she was trying to imply something else.

'Yuvan told me to look out for her and make sure she's ok.' I started to feel my cheeks getting warm.

'Ok...I believe you.' She smiled

'Anyway, Yuvani it's getting late. I'm tired.' I wanted to end the conversation. I lay down and turned to face the other direction. She left the room.
Did she know? Did she know about my feelings for Krishna?

It was the next morning, I drove to Krishna's house. I knocked on the door.
There she was stood in front of me. Her soft brown hair blowing in the breeze. She looked so sweet and innocent.

'Hi.' She said quietly with a smile.
I looked away and didn't answer. I walked inside and went into the kitchen to look for Soumya Aunty.

'Ma isn't home, she's out.'

I turned round, it was Krishna. I walked ahead to leave the kitchen, but she stood in front of me. I moved to the left but she stood in front of me again.

'Why are you avoiding me?' She asked

'I'm not.' I said looking down, trying to avoid eye contact.

'Yes you are. Is it because of the other night when I was crying? Did I make you feel uncomfortable? I'm sorry if I did, I didn't mean to get upset. You were there and-.' She just kept on talking.
Suddenly, I don't know what came over me. I pushed her against the wall. I stood close to her, my face was inches from hers. My arms were either side of hers.

'You talk too much.' I whispered in her ear.

'Krishna!'

I moved away, I heard Soumya Aunty callin her, she had just come home. She walked into the kitchen.

'Sayyam, you're here already?'

I felt so flustered and uncomfortable about what had just happened. I could see that Aunty was struggling with her shopping bags so I took them from her hands. I took Aunty to the living room and sat down to talk to her. I could see Krishna watching us from the corner of my eye.

'Sayyam, I asked you to come over because there's a few jobs that need doing round the house. Your uncle isn't with us anymore and Krishna and I can't do it ourselves. There's some wood that needs chopping in the front garden.'

I agreed to help and went out to the garden to start working.

It was mid afternoon, it was a very hot and humid day. I was chopping the wood but struggling with the heat. I stopped to wipe the sweat on my face when someone held a bottle of water in front of me. I looked across and it was Krishna.

'Here, have some water.' She said sweetly

I took the bottle and drank nearly the whole bottle. I had been in the heat for over 2 hours.

'Why don't you take a rest or at least let me help you?' She asked

'I don't need anyone's help.' I said to her sternly

'Well, tough. You're going to get my help anyway.' She kneeled on the ground to pick up the wood I chopped to put away.
A few hours later and we were finished, it was late afternoon. Krishna walked up to me.

'You know, I have been helping you for over 2 hours Sayyam and not once have you spoken to me.' She said confidently

'I was working, I didn't need to speak to you.' I said

'Ok baba, you didn't need to speak to me. But I thought we were friends? The other night you said we could become friends?'

I stepped closer to her, I wanted to tell her I saw her as more than just a friend. I looked into her eyes.

'Friends?' I whispered

'Hey you two!' It was a familiar voice. I stepped back and saw Yuvani walking up to us.

'Hi Krishna!' Yuvani hugged Krishna.

'Come in Yuvani.' Krishna was so happy to see her.

'Yes I will in a bit, you go in.' She watched Krishna go inside and walked up to me. I was in a trance watching Krishna.

'Sayyam...Sayyam!' Yuvani was clicking her fingers in front of my eyes.
I realised what I was doing and faced Yuvani.

'What was going on here?' She raised her eyebrows and smiled at me.

'N-nothing, Soumya Aunty asked me to chop wood and Krishna was helping.'

'That's it?'she questioned

'Yes, that's it.' I said sternly and went inside, Yuvani followed.

After dinner we all sat down in the living area.

'Thank you so much for helping us beta.' Soumya Aunty said to me.

'You don't need to thank me Aunty. You know if you ever need any help, I will be there for you.' I smiled at her.

'Really beta? There is a lot more that I need help with around the house, would you mind staying here a few days to help us out?'

I was shocked and flustered. I didn't know what to say. I wanted to help but I need to stay away from Krishna. I looked ahead at Krishna and she was looking at me in shock.

'Of course he will Aunty, I will bring his things over.' I looked next to me. Yuvani was smiling when she said this. I gave her an annoyed look.

'Thank you so much Sayyam.' Aunty seemed so happy, I couldn't let her down. I smiled at her.

'I have to go now, Sayyam and Krishna, remember it's Golu bhaiyyas party tomorrow with his friends. He wants you both there.'

Golu is Yuvans cousin brother. We all grew up together. I was looking forward to seeing him again, we were close but lost contact over the years. Im excited to go to the party, it will take my mind off these increasing feelings inside me. Who knows what tomorrow will bring??

Precap- Sayyam and Krishna go to Golus party

Hi everyone. It will start getting interesting now! I'm looking forward to writing the next chapter, there will be a bit of a twist in there! If you're wondering why there aren't any Hindi dialogues it's because my Hindi isn't very good. I would have loved to have some Hindi dialogues in it!

Hope you enjoy!

Shaz
Edited by Shiney19 - 8 years ago

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