KriYam OS - The Chosen Ones

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shiney19

@Shiney19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Brilliant, well done! I too was disappointed with the lack of screen space of Kriyam since the revelation but I think it is because Karan has been away for a wedding that is why they had the scene with Krishna and his pic yesterday.

This is great, please write more!

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Faeeqa

@Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

I must say it was beautifully written 😊 really in character and nicely flowing with the current story. Good work! 👏

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vinlora

@vinlora

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome. ...loved it...thank u for the wonderful OS. ..

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

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Posted: 8 years ago

❤️That was utterly beautiful, the way you penned down their emotions was just perfect, the chemistry that this couple shares is hard to express in words, it can only be felt. the way you write makes it very visual to imagine the scenario and hats off for that 👏 lack of KriYam scenes has disappointed me too but thankfully talented writers like yourself are fulfilling our wish by writing such visual stories. keep writing more, would love to read more ❤️

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

Superb yaar..Dis is wat we want to see in d show..

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is an amazing piece of work you have written. 👏

With lack of KriYam scenes in the show lately, this was a much needed OS. Also I completely agree with you on the fact that writers. They are literally missing all the good opportunities for KriYam scenes. Vey Kanjoos on their part! 😭

Coming to your Os though, HUh It was beautiful. I cannot stop imagining the scene in my head. It's like on replay and it won't stop.

I think you captured Saiyyam perfectly especially since he found out the truth. He knew that he was unfair to Krishna, he hurt her in so many ways. He realized it and he accepted it. I think that's what makes him so unique! 😳 And also because he is totally schmexyy with that beard but that's me fangirling..hehhe 😆

I also love Krishna in this OS! My favourite dialogue of her in this is when she tells Saiyyam that he is the only one out of all the people around her that chose her without any compulsion. "You have married me, chose me on your free will, on your own, So this time around, I have decided to choose you!" Ah this is the perfect way of putting it into words...Hit me right in the feels. It's my fav dialogue!

I think Krishna being a support system to Saiyyam is such a beautiful way to take their relationship forward. Like you have show in the OS, I wish writers would do something like this as well. It would really nice to watch.

I loved another one of Krishna's advice where she tells Saiyyam to stay back, not out of compulsion but because she wants him to have a chance at being loved like he should have been all his life. So he could spend time with him Mom and be cared of. And Saiyyam is right, Krishna is passionately optimistic in these kinds of situations. But I love the fact that he listens to her.

Plus one of my favourite parts of this OS is when Saiiyam says that this isn't his home and Krishna instantly replies that both of them don't have a home. I think the sole fact that they have both been deprived of their Mothers love, actually love in general..is what makes them connect so well. I know Krishna had her Dadu and Suhani Aunty and Yuvaan..but sometimes the most lonely souls are the ones surrounded by the most people. And that's what makes them so perfect for each other. Gawd I am so addicted to these too. ❤️

I really hope that the writers come to their sense and provide us with some nice and romantic KriYam scene. 😳

And this OS is a really nice piece of writing. So glad you wrote it!

It's amazing. I hope you write more..! Love your style and your work. 👏

Thanks for this. 😃

Love,😳

Nabs

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

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Posted: 8 years ago

HEEEY!!🤗 okay this is AWESOME GURL!!! ❤️

This OS was much needed and i so hoped that this would have actually happened in the drama but oh well😭😆 Need to suck it up!!

I agree with Live-life writers are being Kanjoos 😆 😭😭

Your OST is beautiful thanks Live-life for sharing this!! ❤️

You wrote this OST perfectly nailed it! These two are so cutee in ur ost

i just hope Krishna finds out soon in the drama why he married her.

I HAVE SOME FAV SCENES, FROM THIS OST I COULD SPEND ALL DAY WRITING ABOUT MY FAV SCENES BUT THIS IS GOOD. I wish you was the writer of ssel 😆

Keep writing babes good job ❤️

I LOVED THE ENDING BTW HEHE

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
HEEEY!!🤗 okay this is AWESOME GURL!!! ❤️
This OS was much needed and i so hoped that this would have actually happened in the drama but oh well😭😆 Need to suck it up!!
I agree with Live-life writers are being Kanjoos 😆 😭😭
Your OST is beautiful thanks Live-life for sharing this!! ❤️
You wrote this OST perfectly nailed it! These two are so cutee in ur ost
i just hope Krishna finds out soon in the drama why he married her.
I HAVE SOME FAV SCENES, FROM THIS OST I COULD SPEND ALL DAY WRITING ABOUT MY FAV SCENES BUT THIS IS GOOD. I wish you was the writer of ssel 😆
Keep writing babes good job ❤️
I LOVED THE ENDING BTW HEHE

Your welcome Haati!

And..stop calling me Live-life..I feel like a tumblr qouteee 😆😆

I told you this Os was worth it...! Honeslty I agree with Mads on this..You should really become the writer of SSEL. We would get a lot more scenes like this then! 😳