Yuvani separated because of Gauri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys!!! ... After a long time I thought to make a different story for Yuvani... It belongs to yesterdays episode...

It was the day when Yuvraj was to return from his business tour... It was morning... Pratima was praying in front of the Mandir... Ramesh was busy in packing tiffin boxes... Sharad and Bhavna were ready to go somewhere and waiting for Ramesh to get that tiffin... Dadi was sitting on the couch reading a magazine... Rags and Menka coming downstairs... Saurabh and Anuj getting ready for office... ... Excluding Dadi and RagMen all had certain kind of worry and tension on their face...

The door bell ranged... Anuj headed to open the door... There was Yuvraj other side... Yuvraj smiled seeing his Chotte... Yuvraj hugged him... And asked how's our office... Fine Bhaiyya. .. Anuj replied... He wasn't matching his eyes with Yuvraj... Y noticed it...was confused... But let him go...He entered the house. .. Called Dadi... Took her blessings... She smiled at him, stood up and asked about his business meetings... He happily said they were all fine and our products are going to rule the market... He looks at Pratima... goes to her... Touches her feet and hugs her
...Pratima some how controls herself , and praises Y for his hardwork... And ask him to get fresh and come for breakfast... He nods and goes to his room.. While going asks Shavna where are they going so early???... Sharad somehow stops Bhavna from speaking something and tells some reason for going out and nods to Bhavna, not to tell so early... RagMen smile looking at each other... Dadi goes to her room... Y goes to his room... .He constantly looks at his room, remembers his conversation with Suhani while he was to go away from her for these meetings... He has question that how did Suhani didn't come to see him after hearing his voice... He says let it be... I will give surprise to her... She will be extremely happy to see me after these 10 days...
He opens the door... Enters the room... Finds the room well maintained... He is surprised that whether she knows that I was going to come today that she maintained the hygiene... Good... But founds her nowhere... He checks the bathroom, calls her name before but don't find her... He is amazed... Where did she go??... ..She didn't called me even last 4-5 days...comes out of the room...
Pratima turns in opposite direction after seeing Y coming out... He asks her... Maa where is Suhani??? ... Did she joined any gym to loose her weight and surprise me??? Laughs at the end...Pratima says to stop him and not to speak anything like this about his own wife... He says Ok Maa... Sorry I won't say this again... But tell me where is she...???
Pratima again controls herself, her emotions and whispers something like Suhani has went her Maika. ... Yuvraj asks What??? ... But when???... She didn't informed about this... He is surprised... Pratima adds...She may have forgotten to inform you... She tries to go from there... Meanwhile Shavna hd left the BH...To go somewhere... Escaping from Y...
Y says ok then I will go SH and bring Suhani here...I will call her now to be ready till I come... He tries her phone but it is switched off... He feels irritated... How can Suhani go without informing me????... Dadi comes out and asks Y why is still in the hall... He should get shower till now... He nods into yes Dadi...And adds that he was calling Suhani... As he was going to bring her back... But her phone is switched off...
Dadi is surprised to hear this and asks Pratima that didn't she told him about that girl???... Pratima gets tensed now and Y too...He asks what dadi???... What are you talking about????... He asks Pratima what is dadi talking about Suhani??? Tell me?? Maa???
Pratima was about to say something... Then... The there is a call on Saurabhs phone... He tells everyone that there was a call from hospital... They said that your Patient is responding well... Come fast... Y asks Patient???... Who is the patient from our house bhaiyya???? Tell me??... Saurabh is about to say something... There Pratima breaks her silence and says that its Suhani admitted to the hospital... And collapses on the sofa... Y is all shocked and surprised to hear this... He asks what???? Did you says Suhani???? ... Dadi adds confirmation... Says Yes Yuvraj... That girl is admitted to the hospital from last 4-5 days and is unconscious from then...Y is all angry with everyone... Asks why didn't anyone informed him about this... Saurabh says... You were away from us so we didn't informed you Y...Y immediately rushes to his car and asks for the name of hospital...
Y comes to the hospital... All other members follow him... He sees her... She is lying unconscious supported by ventilation... Shavna and Lata are already present there... Sharad lets him sit near Suhani... She had some bandage for her forehead and one arm fractured... tears rolled out his eyes... He called her name... Holded the other hand with care... And was staring at her face... He was lost in her state... He remembered her last taunting him about leaving him...He just grabbed her close to him...He cupped and stared her silent face and asks her to open her eyes and speak something with him... He pleaded... Pratima uttered his name... He asked all others to go out of the room... Dadi asks... But Yuvraj???? she is unconscious, there is no use of sitting with her... Y asks please Dadi... Listen me...U all please... Suddenly he felt something. ... He looked at her... She was holding his hand a bit... A relief arrived at his tensed face... He asked to call the Doctor...
Doctor arrived and checked her...And told that she may gain consciousness anytime... She is responding well... Y was happy to hear it... All other family members shifted outside... Y was there with her holding her hand, he reminiscences the time when he was admitted and how Suhani was waiting for him Outside till he gained consciousness, also the part where he scolds her for not maintaining hygiene... He founded that she had some eye movements... He requests her to open her eyes and see that her life is there with her...
Suhani opened her eyes little by little with a confused look.. Yuvraj screamed her name... All other members rushed to see...Y was heavenly happy and his happiness knew no bounds... She looked at the way near him... Smiled a bit... Yuvraj too smiled and was about to stand up... There she called Papa... Who was standing exactly behind Y...
Yuvraj turned round to see and saw Pankaj standing... He again turned to Suhani and asked her how is she feeling now??... Suhani was confused at his gesture... She took her hand away and asked him that... Does she knows him?????... Y and all others members were shocked to hear this from her... Y grabbed her hand and asked her to stop her nonsense jokes... Suhani removed her hand again and concluded that she isn't joking and asks him if she really knows him????
Saurabh and Sharad rush to call the Doctor... .. Doctor comes and checks her... Says that she has lost a part of her memories... All are shocked to hear this... Y is fully broken down and looks at her... He is speechless... All members shoulder him for not to worry, everything will be fine... He rushes out of the room and cries remembering his last conversation with Suhani... Where she requested him to take her along with him... He curses himself for Suhanis state... He feels the emptiness in his life without Suhani... Pratima comes there and hugs him... He hugs her too and cries loud... Asks her how did this all happened????... Then Pratima tells the actual reason for all this happening... She tells him that Gauri wasn't listening to Suhani and was forcing to call Aditya to come and teach her.. Suhani denied to call and in meanwhile when they were climbing the stairs Gauri tried to snatch the phone from Suhani's hand and there Suhani got slipped from the stairs... Y asks for Gauri??? Pratima says since then Gauri has locked herself in her room and is cursing herself for Suhani's condition... Y was all stunned to hear all this...


Sorry for such a long post guys...But could not resist from sharing with you all...Hope you all like it..
Edited by PrathameshS92 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is so emotional you made me cry😭
very nicely written👍🏼
I request you if you can continue it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks..
And I will write the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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prathameshs92 it was a good post no doubt but your ending was not nice i'm sry to say this but separation of suhani plsss we can't take this mein bhi chahti thi ki suhani ke sth aiesa kuch ho uska accident ho but mein yeh nhi chahti thi ki woh apni memory lose krre and yuvraj ko bhul jaye hadd hai bakwaas hai yeh part kahan hum unki love life ko acha bnane ki koshish kr rhe hain and tum ho ki aiese-aiese emotional track likh rhe ho unke separation ke meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai i can't take all this plsss haan aiesa kuch nhi hona chahiye and plsss i rqst u yr aiesa kuch na likho we all luv yuvani to the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss aiesa kuch na ho yuvani ke sth...plsss makers aiesa kuch na dikhana plss it's a request from bottom of my heart i'm telling you plsss yr apko jo dikhane hai dikhao but plsss i request you aiesa kuch na dikhane plsss makers i beg in front of you we luv yuvani till the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss yuvani ka aiesa koi scene na dikhana meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai mein yeh sb nhi dekh paungi plsss makers jo krna hai krro romantic scenes less dikhane hai dikhao we r with you but itna jada emotional scene itna jada hum bardaash nhi kr payenge abhi toh woh ek hue hain and ek dum se yeh separation wala scene itna emotional ki sidha memory lose...ghar se nikalne tk theek tha ldai bhi theek thi but yeh memory lose nhi yr plsss makers i beg aiesa kuch na ho plsss...😭😭
Edited by yuvani41 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👍🏼 very nice story ...plz update next part ...Tfs
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prathameshs92 it was a good post no doubt but your ending was not nice i'm sry to say this but separation of suhani plsss we can't take this mein bhi chahti thi ki suhani ke sth aiesa kuch ho uska accident ho but mein yeh nhi chahti thi ki woh apni memory lose krre and yuvraj ko bhul jaye hadd hai bakwaas hai yeh part kahan hum unki love life ko acha bnane ki koshish kr rhe hain and tum ho ki aiese-aiese emotional track likh rhe ho unke separation ke meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai i can't take all this plsss haan aiesa kuch nhi hona chahiye and plsss i rqst u yr aiesa kuch na likho we all luv yuvani to the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss aiesa kuch na ho yuvani ke sth...plsss makers aiesa kuch na dikhana plss it's a request from bottom of my heart i'm telling you plsss yr apko jo dikhane hai dikhao but plsss i request you aiesa kuch na dikhane plsss makers i beg in front of you we luv yuvani till the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss yuvani ka aiesa koi scene na dikhana meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai mein yeh sb nhi dekh paungi plsss makers jo krna hai krro romantic scenes less dikhane hai dikhao we r with you but itna jada emotional scene itna jada hum bardaash nhi kr payenge abhi toh woh ek hue hain and ek dum se yeh separation wala scene itna emotional ki sidha memory lose...ghar se nikalne tk theek tha ldai bhi theek thi but yeh memory lose nhi yr plsss makers i beg aiesa kuch na ho plsss...😭😭 i'm not saying ki tumhari sari story bekar hai start ach hai mid-part bhi acha hai ending part bhi acha hai jahan yuvraj suhani ke side mein beth kr uska hand hold krke cry krta hai bs memory lose ke place pr yeh track aa jaye ki doctors suhani ka check up krne aye or yuvraj ko bahar bhejein phir doctor uska check up krke aye or khe ki agr suhani ko 24 hrs mein hosh nhi aya toh inka bachna mushkil hai ya phir she'll go to coma ya phir yeh bolein ki ab humare haath mein kuch nhi hai ab toh koi magic hi ho skta hai kyunki we all know end mein woh bcn hi jayegi but memory lose no plsss
Edited by yuvani41 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesomw awesomw n awesomw..it was wonderful story..wish we cud get to watch such thing in d show
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prathameshs92 it was a good post no doubt but your ending was not nice i'm sry to say this but separation of suhani plsss we can't take this mein bhi chahti thi ki suhani ke sth aiesa kuch ho uska accident ho but mein yeh nhi chahti thi ki woh apni memory lose krre and yuvraj ko bhul jaye hadd hai bakwaas hai yeh part kahan hum unki love life ko acha bnane ki koshish kr rhe hain and tum ho ki aiese-aiese emotional track likh rhe ho unke separation ke meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai i can't take all this plsss haan aiesa kuch nhi hona chahiye and plsss i rqst u yr aiesa kuch na likho we all luv yuvani to the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss aiesa kuch na ho yuvani ke sth...plsss makers aiesa kuch na dikhana plss it's a request from bottom of my heart i'm telling you plsss yr apko jo dikhane hai dikhao but plsss i request you aiesa kuch na dikhane plsss makers i beg in front of you we luv yuvani till the end hum itna sb bardaash nhi kr payenge plsss yuvani ka aiesa koi scene na dikhana meko toh abhi se rona aa rha hai mein yeh sb nhi dekh paungi plsss makers jo krna hai krro romantic scenes less dikhane hai dikhao we r with you but itna jada emotional scene itna jada hum bardaash nhi kr payenge abhi toh woh ek hue hain and ek dum se yeh separation wala scene itna emotional ki sidha memory lose...ghar se nikalne tk theek tha ldai bhi theek thi but yeh memory lose nhi yr plsss makers i beg aiesa kuch na ho plsss...😭😭 i'm not saying ki tumhari sari story bekar hai start ach hai mid-part bhi acha hai ending part bhi acha hai jahan yuvraj suhani ke side mein beth kr uska hand hold krke cry krta hai bs memory lose ke place pr yeh track aa jaye ki doctors suhani ka check up krne aye or yuvraj ko bahar bhejein phir doctor uska check up krke aye or khe ki agr suhani ko 24 hrs mein hosh nhi aya toh inka bachna mushkil hai ya phir she'll go to coma ya phir yeh bolein ki ab humare haath mein kuch nhi hai ab toh koi magic hi ho skta hai kyunki we all know end mein woh bcn hi jayegi but memory lose no plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
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srinithi pls yr dnt say like this yr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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.this story itself very interesting,
and you writ very well,
please continue

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