YuvAni OS- in Suhani's POV

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It's short but it's something to warm you up. Enjoy 😛😉


"Stop it...what is someone sees us?" I said.

"Let them see. I don't mind." He replied. He held me so tightly around my waist that I could barely turn left or right. He was standing behind me while I was washing dishes.

"You've changed. You weren't like this before. Won't you mind it if Sharad Bhaiya catches you right now and teases you?" I questioned him.

"I think I should be the one worried about that...you should take it easy and finish the dishes..." He whispered and held me tighter. His lips were on my ear. I was finished with the dishes but I couldn't move.

"Stop it..." I said in a low voice. I was worried Di or Maa would walk into the kitchen and catch us like this.

"Stop what?" He asked. I managed to turn slightly so that I could look at his face over my left shoulder.

"Let me go or I'll scream." I said.

"And attract attention? I still won't let you go." He grinned.

"What do you want?" I asked. I couldn't help it but smile back at him.

"You know what I want." He nodded.

"Please, Yuvraj..." I squirmed and tried to free myself. "Wait for me in the room. I need to talk to Di, and then I'll see you there..."

"That's why I'm not letting you go. You act as if you have time for me. Admit it, you don't." He said. This time it he sounded serious. I felt guilty. He let go and turned around. I held his arm.

"I love you..." I said.

He didn't respond so I walked closer to him and moved his hair away from his eyes. He stared back at me.

"What? Do you have a problem with my hair now?" He asked.

"Oh God, so pissed off, aren't you? I love you hair." I said. "Smile, please..." I said.

"Only if you kiss me..." He said. He raised his eyebrows and crossed his arms around his chest.

"Fine, I'll do it..." I tiptoed closer to him and locked my arms around his neck. Our noses touched. He tried to suppress his smile. I giggled. He closed his eyes and we kissed very softly just once. I was ready for another one but the sound of footsteps broke the trance we were under.

"Run!" I said. I ran for our room and Yuvraj caught up with me and grabbed my arm.

"What are you doing?" I asked. He hushed me. He dragged me into the room and locked the door. I was sandwiched in between him and the door.

I tried pushing him away but he wouldn't budge. He laughed. "This is perfect. Guess you won't be chatting with Bhavna tonight." He said.

"Stop laughing at my expense." I said.

He held my waist. "I believe we weren't finished yet..." He said. Something about the way he said that made me shiver. I couldn't look him straight in the eyes anymore.

"It's late...let's sleep." I said. He touched his forehead with mine. "Excuses..." He whispered.

"What do you mean?" I asked.

"I make you nervous. I can tell..." He smiled. He was looking deeply into my eyes. I wish I could stare at him in the same way but I couldn't. I kept a straight face.

"You think too highly of yourself." I said. "Move, Yuvraj...I can't stand with my back against the door all night, you know." I said.

He pulled me against him within and split second. I was shocked. "How'd you do that?" I asked.

"I'm superman." He said.

I laughed and he smiled. "God, finally, Suhani lightens up." He said. I adjusted his collar. I touched his face. He held my hand against his cheek and kissed it. He cupped my face and moved closer until our noses touched.

"I actually have a very solid reason for why I'm running after you today." He said. He moved my hair aside and grabbed my waist with one hand and pulled me closer.

"Bhaiya, Anuj and I are going on a business trip for a few days, three or four, most probably.We'll go tomorrow morning..." He said.

I was angry that he hadn't told me this all day. I straightened up and frowned. "How long have you known about this?"

"Since yesterday..."

"Why didn't you tell me then?"

"I didn't know how you'd react. I was a little worried. It's the first time we'll be apart in quite a while..."

I didn't know how to react. "You should've told me earlier so I could've helped you pack."

"Packing can wait till the morning..." He said. He held my hand and moved forward. I buried my face against his chest and we hugged. A few seconds later we looked at one another. I started to speak but before I could say anything, he kissed me. I held onto his shoulders and kissed him back. I felt his chest. His lips left mine and ended up against my neck and as we crashed against a wall. I was breathless. He held my face.

"I hate being away from you...even if it's just for a few days..." He said.

I couldn't reply properly so I just closed my eyes and we held each other tightly the rest of the night.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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its amazing,
enjoy it,lovely keep writing
pleaseee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short ... YES
but HIGHLY CONSUMING ... 😆


☺️ turned red after reading it...

behna ku logo ka emaan kharab kar rai ho yeh sab likh kai?? soch pata ni kaha kaha tak phonch rai hai... 🤣🤣

some really hot and naughty stuff by you centering some sexy people... OOO 😳

well your work always gives pleasure to the one who seek for it.. one of the most ROMANCE ECCENTRIC writers on this India forums... 👏 the most effective pieces of fictions are by you and only you... the situations are all well written that one can't get out of them after reading your work...

so thank you because today i am gonna dream about these people doing crazy stuff you have written 😉

pure brilliance behna i envy the way you write and the scenes which seem so real...



"Let them see. I don't mind." He replied. He held me so tightly around my waist that I could barely turn left or right. He was standing behind me while I was washing dishes.

standing pressed with each other, i literally was dealing wit the original hide and seek scene and what you have written... poor little mind of mind... you sweetly torture us all by all of these .. parh kai andar kai jazbat jagtay hain..

W*F i am saying on a social platform? what are people going to think.. but the blame is on you... it is all because of the os...


"I think I should be the one worried about that...you should take it easy and finish the dishes..." He whispered and held me tighter. His lips were on my ear. I was finished with the dishes but I couldn't move.

dishes kartay vai???? i mean kahi bhi kabhi bhi... i can;t stop blushing... what were you actually thinking before writing it??? i need to know ...
"his lips were on my ear" freaking HAWT .. just the mere line i mean what on earth yuvraj is doing to her... its like some sensations happening...





"Stop what?" He asked. I managed to turn slightly so that I could look at his face over my left shoulder.

fantastically explained it mehshu!! i am telling you these are the moments which are too adorable to ignore.. i could perfectly imagine suhani seeing him in that position... (the hard position ROFL 😆) this was way too cute...




"Let me go or I'll scream." I said.

"And attract attention? I still won't let you go." He grinned.

"What do you want?" I asked. I couldn't help it but smile back at him.

"You know what I want." He nodded.


with this kind of answers from yuvraj you slay it baby... i actually skip a beat when yuvraj is so obvious and not so obvious on the same time... you are perfect at making yuvraj naughty with limits of his own... he is the Man!!! what a class and style to hook up in the kitchen or trying to that...


behna go for ROM-COMS you would rock the world with it ❤️



i loved how he became serious because suhani actually doesnt give him attention and he craves for it... suhani kay paas har aek keliye time hai sivaye apny pati kai... so hugss for making yuvraj torture her.. she deserves to be tortured that way...



"What? Do you have a problem with my hair now?" He asked.

"Oh God, so pissed off, aren't you? I love you hair." I said. "Smile, please..." I said.

"Only if you kiss me..." He said. He raised his eyebrows and crossed his arms around his chest.

"Fine, I'll do it..." I tiptoed closer to him and locked my arms around his neck. Our noses touched. He tried to suppress his smile. I giggled. He closed his eyes and we kissed very softly just once. I was ready for another one but the sound of footsteps broke the trance we were under.


i love it when you don't change the cribby attitude of yuvraj about his hairs and his nose... i mean thats the real charm... sweet stuff...


YOU ARE TRULY AN ORIGINAL WRITER WHO DOESN'T CHANGE THE EMOTIONS OF THE CHARACTER AND THAT IS THE BEST THING ABOUT YOU ..

AND now coming to the other part.. i mean that oft kiss on lips... my God just kill me .. how can you write so beautifully... i seriously loved the whole os but the best part was her kissing him on lips and then she was reay to do it again... shooo damn beautiful...

they are perfect

you are perfect in writing about them and writing such beautiful romantic scenes...


they touch me... i love wild too but then slow moments are my damn favorite...



"What are you doing?" I asked. He hushed me. He dragged me into the room and locked the door. I was sandwiched in between him and the door.

I tried pushing him away but he wouldn't budge. He laughed. "This is perfect. Guess you won't be chatting with Bhavna tonight." He said.



ahahahhahahahahah NAILED IT! with the sandwich part... suhani being sandwich between door and yuvraj is the ebst i could think... amazingly written... the word pressed make me think so much...


you are affecting me with how you explain it behna.. and yuvraj enjoying it to fullest i mean ... hotness pressed with you is like really hard to digest... 👏



he is damn naughty with "not finsihed yet business" an all... i mean maza hai uskay liye toh...

i imagined suhani in that freaking kurti now...

Yuvraj my lover boy

you are truly a super man... and the pulling and holding from waist and making her nervous are the flavors you fill in the os behna...

Truly awesome...


I laughed and he smiled. "God, finally, Suhani lightens up." He said. I adjusted his collar. I touched his face. He held my hand against his cheek and kissed it. He cupped my face and moved closer until our noses touched.



my other favorite part in the whole os is this... the above one... the way you have written it and the words the whole essence of this scene was mesmerizing totally.. "suhani lightens up" she is his light... and them "held my hand against his cheek and kissed it" one of my favorite moments .. i just wish cvs learn from you and put this scene in original i totally loved it... fab just fab... awww i am dreaming now... kpi mujhy maard daalo... i am so happy you wrote it... you write beautifully yaar.. kabhi kabhi i am originally short of words kai kia bolo.. kaisay explain karo kai kitna acha likh dia hai...




"Packing can wait till the morning..." He said. He held my hand and moved forward. I buried my face against his chest and we hugged. A few seconds later we looked at one another. I started to speak but before I could say anything, he kissed me. I held onto his shoulders and kissed him back. I felt his chest. His lips left mine and ended up against my neck and as we crashed against a wall. I was breathless. He held my face.

"I hate being away from you...even if it's just for a few days..." He said.

I couldn't reply properly so I just closed my eyes and we held each other tightly the rest of the night.




yeh doriyaaannn.. hayeee..
maar dala with this one...

*blush blush*

these two people and the characters are like beyond perfect
and a writer like you with a piece of OS like this is like beyond beyond PERFECT...


PERFECTION JUST HAPPENED TODAY AS YOU WROTE IT GIVING YOUR TOUCH... THE WALL ROMANCES AND THE SHHH KEEP QUITE WALI FRENCH KISSES AND ALL ... YOU HAVE HIT A SPOT WHERE it affects the most...

beautifully written and beautifully executed yuvani into such HAWTNESS Personified scenes...



5 words for you ...


Behna you have Rocked It!!!!





keep on driving us crazy with one shot filled with them...

mai lovely hogaiyaan kaam tera parh kai...



to my most favorite writer i love you ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ghaint ...koka ...aath(awesome)...Oh my God!!
Loved it!
Loved it!!! Loved it!!...aap ke har word me magic hai ..Punjabi me kaho toh ..nirAa ishq hai ...Jo kee har kisi par jadoo karta hai ... .. I m Already read it 4 times... 🤗 ..
still cant get over it...so interesting...so mindblowing...,totally invested into it
best of yours ..loved from first word to last word...still wanting more greatly written ...U made my day... i cant tell in words how much i loved this one . ...you are an incredible writer. ...do write more ..I love ur style ...thank you very much for this beautiful os .. ...
👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok as u said it's quite short jst like the yuvani scenes in the show.. Y di y..😭
Bt I can forgive u coz it's one of the hottest ffs i've ever read.. Chota packet bada dhamaka.👏.😉😆

It's jst amazing jst like navi nd yusu said it's brilliantly written nd exactly according to the characters.. Ur a brilliant writer no doubt in it bt this is jst fantastic.. I'm short of words right now jst imagining things😉😛...


Jst one complaint wrong very wrong timing hw am i going to concentrate on exams..😆😆 Bt still thank you so much for this nd plz do write more...
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yankie dear u r soo awesome writer..so hawt update.i loved it and cant just stop imagining and blushing reading it..yuvraj manu made him even more adorable and cute..he seeks suhanis attention ..i love him totally in this mode..u r the best OS writer..I loved the kitchn scene and where he says i cant live without u even for few days.i could feel their striking chemistry just reading it..thanks yankie👏👏mehwu i am your fangirl
and yusu a great interpretation..i loved it a lot.u put it so clear and nailed it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniac_

Ok as u said it's quite short jst like the yuvani scenes in the show.. Y di y..😭

Bt I can forgive u coz it's one of the hottest ffs i've ever read.. Chota packet bada dhamaka.👏.😉😆

It's jst amazing jst like navi nd yusu said it's brilliantly written nd exactly according to the characters.. Ur a brilliant writer no doubt in it bt this is jst fantastic.. I'm short of words right now jst imagining things😉😛...


Jst one complaint wrong very wrong timing hw am i going to concentrate on exams..😆😆 Bt still thank you so much for this nd plz do write more...

👏👏true...true it is a chota packet bada dhamaka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yankie...you nailed it...
loved it so much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg!! 😲 😲
I was like 😳 😳 😳
u nailed it sis!!!😊
such a awesome writer u r!!! 😊
thank a lot 4 this hot 😳 os...
really enjoyed reading it!!! 😉
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Originally posted by: yusu1993

Short ... YES

but HIGHLY CONSUMING ... 😆


☺️ turned red after reading it...

behna ku logo ka emaan kharab kar rai ho yeh sab likh kai?? soch pata ni kaha kaha tak phonch rai hai... 🤣🤣

maine aaj se pehle kabhi koi sharifaana Fanfics likhi hain? jiska apna dimaag gutter mein hoga woh khud yehi likhegi 😆😛

some really hot and naughty stuff by you centering some sexy people... OOO 😳

well your work always gives pleasure to the one who seek for it.. one of the most ROMANCE ECCENTRIC writers on this India forums... 👏 the most effective pieces of fictions are by you and only you... the situations are all well written that one can't get out of them after reading your work...

so thank you because today i am gonna dream about these people doing crazy stuff you have written 😉

pure brilliance behna i envy the way you write and the scenes which seem so real...



"Let them see. I don't mind." He replied. He held me so tightly around my waist that I could barely turn left or right. He was standing behind me while I was washing dishes.

standing pressed with each other, i literally was dealing wit the original hide and seek scene and what you have written... poor little mind of mind... you sweetly torture us all by all of these .. parh kai andar kai jazbat jagtay hain..

W*F i am saying on a social platform? what are people going to think.. but the blame is on you... it is all because of the os...

koi baat nahin hai jo mann mein aaye likh diya karo , log tumhara review bhi utna hi enjoy karenge jitna woh hot yuvani scenes enjoy karte hain...and yeah hide & seek scene was quite inspiring

"I think I should be the one worried about that...you should take it easy and finish the dishes..." He whispered and held me tighter. His lips were on my ear. I was finished with the dishes but I couldn't move.

dishes kartay vai???? i mean kahi bhi kabhi bhi... i can;t stop blushing... what were you actually thinking before writing it??? i need to know ...
"his lips were on my ear" freaking HAWT .. just the mere line i mean what on earth yuvraj is doing to her... its like some sensations happening...

These are the kinds of scenes we should get. This is what i meant by kitchen romance...I hope we get a similar scene soon and as for his lips, he ws seducing her 😉😛



"Stop what?" He asked. I managed to turn slightly so that I could look at his face over my left shoulder.

fantastically explained it mehshu!! i am telling you these are the moments which are too adorable to ignore.. i could perfectly imagine suhani seeing him in that position... (the hard position ROFL 😆) this was way too cute...




"Let me go or I'll scream." I said.

"And attract attention? I still won't let you go." He grinned.

"What do you want?" I asked. I couldn't help it but smile back at him.

"You know what I want." He nodded.


with this kind of answers from yuvraj you slay it baby... i actually skip a beat when yuvraj is so obvious and not so obvious on the same time... you are perfect at making yuvraj naughty with limits of his own... he is the Man!!! what a class and style to hook up in the kitchen or trying to that...

he is so desperate for her basically but doesn't want to say it openly 😆

behna go for ROM-COMS you would rock the world with it ❤️



i loved how he became serious because suhani actually doesnt give him attention and he craves for it... suhani kay paas har aek keliye time hai sivaye apny pati kai... so hugss for making yuvraj torture her.. she deserves to be tortured that way...

they both should torture each other *drools* ☺️


"What? Do you have a problem with my hair now?" He asked.

"Oh God, so pissed off, aren't you? I love you hair." I said. "Smile, please..." I said.

"Only if you kiss me..." He said. He raised his eyebrows and crossed his arms around his chest.

"Fine, I'll do it..." I tiptoed closer to him and locked my arms around his neck. Our noses touched. He tried to suppress his smile. I giggled. He closed his eyes and we kissed very softly just once. I was ready for another one but the sound of footsteps broke the trance we were under.


i love it when you don't change the cribby attitude of yuvraj about his hairs and his nose... i mean thats the real charm... sweet stuff...


YOU ARE TRULY AN ORIGINAL WRITER WHO DOESN'T CHANGE THE EMOTIONS OF THE CHARACTER AND THAT IS THE BEST THING ABOUT YOU ..

AND now coming to the other part.. i mean that oft kiss on lips... my God just kill me .. how can you write so beautifully... i seriously loved the whole os but the best part was her kissing him on lips and then she was reay to do it again... shooo damn beautiful...

they are perfect

you are perfect in writing about them and writing such beautiful romantic scenes...


they touch me... i love wild too but then slow moments are my damn favorite...



"What are you doing?" I asked. He hushed me. He dragged me into the room and locked the door. I was sandwiched in between him and the door.

I tried pushing him away but he wouldn't budge. He laughed. "This is perfect. Guess you won't be chatting with Bhavna tonight." He said.



ahahahhahahahahah NAILED IT! with the sandwich part... suhani being sandwich between door and yuvraj is the ebst i could think... amazingly written... the word pressed make me think so much...


you are affecting me with how you explain it behna.. and yuvraj enjoying it to fullest i mean ... hotness pressed with you is like really hard to digest... 👏



he is damn naughty with "not finsihed yet business" an all... i mean maza hai uskay liye toh...

i imagined suhani in that freaking kurti now...

Yuvraj my lover boy

you are truly a super man... and the pulling and holding from waist and making her nervous are the flavors you fill in the os behna...

Truly awesome...


I laughed and he smiled. "God, finally, Suhani lightens up." He said. I adjusted his collar. I touched his face. He held my hand against his cheek and kissed it. He cupped my face and moved closer until our noses touched.



my other favorite part in the whole os is this... the above one... the way you have written it and the words the whole essence of this scene was mesmerizing totally.. "suhani lightens up" she is his light... and them "held my hand against his cheek and kissed it" one of my favorite moments .. i just wish cvs learn from you and put this scene in original i totally loved it... fab just fab... awww i am dreaming now... kpi mujhy maard daalo... i am so happy you wrote it... you write beautifully yaar.. kabhi kabhi i am originally short of words kai kia bolo.. kaisay explain karo kai kitna acha likh dia hai...




"Packing can wait till the morning..." He said. He held my hand and moved forward. I buried my face against his chest and we hugged. A few seconds later we looked at one another. I started to speak but before I could say anything, he kissed me. I held onto his shoulders and kissed him back. I felt his chest. His lips left mine and ended up against my neck and as we crashed against a wall. I was breathless. He held my face.

"I hate being away from you...even if it's just for a few days..." He said.

I couldn't reply properly so I just closed my eyes and we held each other tightly the rest of the night.




yeh doriyaaannn.. hayeee..
maar dala with this one...

*blush blush*

these two people and the characters are like beyond perfect
and a writer like you with a piece of OS like this is like beyond beyond PERFECT...


PERFECTION JUST HAPPENED TODAY AS YOU WROTE IT GIVING YOUR TOUCH... THE WALL ROMANCES AND THE SHHH KEEP QUITE WALI FRENCH KISSES AND ALL ... YOU HAVE HIT A SPOT WHERE it affects the most...

beautifully written and beautifully executed yuvani into such HAWTNESS Personified scenes...



5 words for you ...


Behna you have Rocked It!!!!





keep on driving us crazy with one shot filled with them...

mai lovely hogaiyaan kaam tera parh kai...



to my most favorite writer i love you ❤️

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