Part 4: left SBS far far behind: It's FRESH here - Yuvi

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How far away from the silliness and drenching morbidity that surrounded his aimless drifter's life, he has come! The aged driver Suleiman thought to himself. Sometimes awe and sometimes disbelief but always a sense of both joy and relief fill this man when he sees his employer. Sense of relief as, from a point when he was going to find another job ten years ago distressed at the callous and incorrigible ways of the septuagenarian lady and her clan he decided to stay. He now is employed by the most wonderful man. If ever a tale of the watershed turnaround of a wastrel into an achiever ever be told this should beat them all. The innate wisdom in that boy led him to de-shackle himself from the probing, interfering and money hungry business house driven by a motley clamoring clan into an independent, wise and prudent entrepreneur par excellence. Suleiman shook his head in disbelief at the miracle. He glanced at the reflection in the rear view mirror. Suleiman was not a curious man by nature but it still made him wonder at times what could be the catalyst that brought forth this wonderful butterfly from what otherwise could be an eternally doomed to be only a caterpillar. He knows that the ladies of the haveli shuffle between ashram and the Lily House. The other two siblings and their spouses continue with their wasted ways while their assorted kids apparently unleash havoc on a daily basis. It could not be any worse than it was ever before; for it was nothing short of maniacal havoc obsession that was practiced by the elder of the house in her hey-days! His boss's ex-wife, is presently a house wife married to a bank official and now raises her 2 daughters. I bumped into her at the market last Sunday in a vigorous discussion with the vendor about onion prices. Given a chance she would have taken it upon herself to be unduly concerned and started her overtly friendly solicitations and general bonhomie but I had guests coming over for lunch and had some shopping to finish. She is a spitting image of her mother, a very sweet lady. No doubt her husband is as prudent a man as her father. Both sisters seem to be married into reasonable comfort with nothing other than a saas and serial to disturb them. Good that the lady's father showed presence of mind and intervened. Otherwise, life for everyone was a miserable merry-go-round of depression followed by vile hopelessness at the lily house.

Suleiman alerted himself and turned away his gaze as they neared the University. Yuva seems to have left all that far behind and in his present world there is little room for SBS! Now again!? What's SBS?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Where have we met this Suleiman before?--'cause we have, in someone's fiction, I'm sure. Enjoyed the nod to the mirage. SBS--saas-bahu saga? If not, kindly elucidate.
You gotto do more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anita_m

Where have we met this Suleiman before?--'cause we have, in someone's fiction, I'm sure. Enjoyed the nod to the mirage. SBS--saas-bahu saga? If not, kindly elucidate.
You gotto do more.

huh? srsly?
but its *the end* Anits...Yu is not camping in birlanka/ or dat hell-hole nmore 😆😆
it will be a non-os
...point proven>>>the deserving kick to SBS unleashers given>>>I'm now gonna die in peace😆😆
suleman's a driver...tht why the heck not that name? or ramu-kaka if u wish
Edited by dunceHat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"If ever a tale of the watershed turnaround of a wastrel into an achiever ever be told this should beat them all."
"The innate wisdom in that boy led him to de-shackle himself from the probing, interfering and money hungry business house driven by a motley clamoring clan into an independent, wise and prudent entrepreneur par excellence."
This put a smile on my face somehow.

"His boss's ex-wife, is presently a house wife married to a bank official and now raises her 2 daughters."
"Both sisters seem to be married into reasonable comfort with nothing other than a saas and serial to disturb them. Good that the lady's father showed presence of mind and intervened. Otherwise, life for everyone was a miserable merry-go-round of depression followed by vile hopelessness at the lily house."

Woah! Woah! Woah!
But, if things changed so much, then how did the whole "catalyzing" process come about? All the unshackling? You going to throw some light on that?

More questions:
Is the old hag STILL alive? 😡
When you will you upload the next part? This is too less! I take my words back, you such a inconsiderate writer... can't keep that hanging there!
SBS? I see so many full forms to that😆 Come on! Give it up, Dunce! You prude!

I can sense a riveting power of sheer emotional strength of the man you have built up! Somehow, I am able to picturize Yuvraj's face in it despite such antithetical personality😃 Wish your Yu bhai could get atleast 1/4th of this one on the show.


Edit add: What? the end? that's it? You hardly scratched the surface!😲
Edited by drummedup - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Un-end it. Bas, you do it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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du-deah sbs in my tv serial knowledge has only one form the saas bahu saga as anits pointed..nthng more...
are..?
mere paas bas itna hi hai kehne ko...ho gaya😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dunceHat

du-deah sbs in my tv serial knowledge has only one form the saas bahu saga as anits pointed..nthng more...
are..?
mere paas bas itna hi hai kehne ko...ho gaya😆😆


I thought of stupid birla spectacle, suhani birla's sankaar, stinking birla saga and saas bahu saazish too...

I don't know whether you meant to do it or not... but this story has gone quite deeper to be left at THIS point.

You might as well deliver... do don't a ssel-creatives on us and leave us high and dry!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: drummedup


I thought of stupid birla spectacle, suhani birla's sankaar, stinking birla saga and saas bahu saazish too...

I don't know whether you meant to do it or not... but this story has gone quite deeper to be left at THIS point.

You might as well deliver... do don't a ssel-creatives on us and leave us high and dry!

guys while I'm
now getting to go on...is sntng else...just cus u guys r super-luvly, i'll give it a go...but will post if it makes any sense to me first. deal?
ADD: if n when >>is da rider here
Edited by dunceHat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do you even realise what kind of Yuvraj you created here? Take us a little deeper into the man...pleeeassseee!

prayingprayingprayingprayingpraying
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Originally posted by: drummedup


Do you even realise what kind of Yuvraj you created here? Take us a little deeper into the man...pleeeassseee!

prayingprayingprayingprayingpraying

du n guys mez taking those plees srs.ly
sochlo
i'll becum riter
then book
then novel
then starplus will call me to do modern tv srl
I do
only 2 people watch the show n trp will freeze in sub zero hell
then i'll unleash da baap of all SBS's on all
youll come on LHU n puke all over me
i'll becum katiff wid u all
won't u all becum sad?

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